Significance and writing 'how far' answers
By the end of this chapter you will be able to
- Say why an event or person was significant, in its time and later
- Plan a how far answer with at least two factors and a counter-argument
- Write a paragraph that makes one point, supports it and links it to the question
- Reach a judgement that is supported, not just stated
You should already know
- Causation, consequences and change (Chapters 3 to 5)
- Interpretations (Chapter 2)
Where this leads
- Putting the skills together (Chapter 14)
- Period studies (Chapters 7 to 13)
GCSE History. Content follows the GCSE (9-1) subject content for England (Edexcel and AQA). Content references: Explain significance: importance in its own time and in its effect on later times, Use criteria to judge significance, and say which criterion is used, Structure a how far answer: argument, factors, counter-argument and judgement, Plan, paragraph and link each paragraph to the question, avoiding narrative.
Exercise P Do you remember?
Method. Recall the term from Chapter 5.
- Recall. A change that alters the direction of later events is a turning point.turning point
- Write the answer. turning point
Check. A turning point is more than a big event.
Method. Recall the criterion from Chapter 3.
- Recall. The criterion about whether the cause was needed is necessity.necessary
- Write the answer. necessary
Check. A necessary cause must be present for the event to happen.
Method. Recall the word from Chapter 4.
- Recall. An effect that follows an event is a consequence.consequence
- Write the answer. consequence
Check. A consequence always comes after the event.
Method. Recall the word from Chapter 2.
- Recall. Background and values give a historian a perspective.perspective
- Write the answer. perspective
Check. Perspective is one of four reasons historians differ.
Method. Recall the date of the fire.
- Recall. The Great Fire of London was in 1666.1666
- Write the answer. 1666
Check. The fire is used as an example in several chapters.
Significance: in its own time and for later times
An event is significant if it was important. Historians judge significance in two ways. Significance in its own time is how much it mattered to the people who lived through it. Long-term significance is how much it affected later events, such as a turning point or a lasting change.
To judge, use a criterion: a standard, such as how far it changed things, how many were affected, or how long its effects lasted. Say which criterion you are using.
Key ideas
- Significance in its own time: how much it mattered to people at the time.
- Long-term significance: how much it changed later events.
- Criteria: how far it changed things, how many were affected, how long it lasted.
- Always name the criterion you use.
Method. Think about what it meant to people at the time.
- Think. The revolt frightened the government and showed how angry ordinary people were.frightened government
- Name the significance. So it mattered at the time because it showed the anger of ordinary people.anger shown
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that says it frightened the government and showed the anger of ordinary people.
Check. Check fact: confirm the details in your textbook.
Method. Think about what lasted after the fire.
- Think. The rebuilding changed how London was built for many years.changed building
- Name it. So the fire had long-term significance.long-term
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that says the rebuilding changed the shape and building materials of London.
Check. Check fact: confirm the rebuilding rules in your textbook.
Method. Recall the criterion.
- Recall. A criterion about the number of people affected is wide in effect.wide in effect
- Check. The criterion counts how many people were affected.many people
- Write the answer. wide
Check. Wide in effect is one of the common criteria.
Watch out
Watch out: “it was significant because it was famous” is not a criterion. Name the standard you are using.
Exam tip
Exam tip. Start a significance paragraph with the criterion: “Using the criterion of…, the event was significant because…”.
Exercise 6A Significance: in its own time and for later times
Method. Recall the word.
- Recall. The importance of an event is its significance.significance
- Write the answer. significance
Check. Significance can be judged in its own time or in later times.
Method. Recall the term.
- Recall. Its effect on later events is its long-term significance.long-term significance
- Write the answer. long-term significance
Check. This is the second kind of significance.
Method. Recall the criterion.
- Recall. A criterion about how long effects lasted is long-lasting.long-lasting
- Write the answer. long-lasting
Check. Long-lasting is one of the common criteria.
Method. Recall the criterion.
- Recall. A change of direction is a turning point.turning point
- Write the answer. turning point
Check. Turning point is one criterion for significance.
Method. Recall the date.
- Recall. The Peasants’ Revolt took place in 1381.1381
- Write the answer. 1381
Check. Check fact: confirm the date in your textbook.
Method. Think about the immediate effect.
- Think. Much of the city was destroyed, and many people lost their homes.destroyed, displaced
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that says it destroyed much of the city and displaced many people.
Check. Check fact: confirm the scale in your textbook.
Method. Think about what lasted.
- Think. Later rulers were wary of protest, and royal promises were not always kept.wary, not kept
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that says it showed the power of protest and the limits of royal promises.
Check. Check fact: confirm the details in your textbook.
Method. Recall the word.
- Recall. The standard used to judge importance is a criterion.criterion
- Write the answer. criterion
Check. Every significance answer names one.
Method. Check whether fame is a standard.
- Check. Fame is not a standard for judging importance; it does not say how the event changed things.not a standard
- Decide. So the reason is not a criterion.no
- Write the answer. no
Check. A criterion must say what it measures.
Method. Think about the two kinds of significance.
- Think. An event may be shocking at the time but leave little trace.shocking, little trace
- Decide. So its significance is limited to its own time.own time
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence that says it may matter to people at the time without changing later events.
Check. Both kinds of significance must be judged separately.
Method. Name the criterion, then the judgement.
- Criterion. Using the criterion of long-term change to London.long-term change
- Judge. So the fire was significant because it changed how London was rebuilt.rebuilt
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence that names a criterion and a reason.
Check. Check fact: confirm the rebuilding in your textbook.
The shape of a how far answer
| Part | What it does | Example from the Peasants’ Revolt |
|---|---|---|
| Argument | States your view in one sentence | The poll taxes were a major cause, but not the only one. |
| Factor 1 | One reason that supports the view, with evidence | The poll taxes raised anger across the country. |
| Factor 2 | Another reason, with a different kind of evidence | The labour shortage after the Black Death built up grievances. |
| Counter-argument | A reason that goes against your view | The labour shortage was older, so it mattered more than the tax. |
| Judgement | Your final conclusion, weighed against the counter-argument | The tax was the trigger, but the long-term causes made the revolt possible. |
The judgement is not a list. It weighs the factors, says which is more important, and explains why. Use words such as however, on balance and overall to show that you are weighing.
Key ideas
- A how far answer: argument, factors, counter-argument, judgement.
- Each factor needs evidence and a link back to the question.
- The counter-argument must be real: it must argue against your view.
- The judgement weighs, and says why one factor matters more.
Method. Think about the role of each part.
- Think. The counter-argument presents a view that goes against the argument.against the view
- Decide. So the judgement can weigh the two sides.weigh
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that says it argues against the main view, so the judgement can weigh both sides.
Check. Without a counter-argument, the answer is only a description.
Method. Recall the parts.
- Recall. The final conclusion is the judgement.judgement
- Check. It is the paragraph that weighs the factors.weighs
- Write the answer. judgement
Check. The judgement weighs the factors.
Method. Give a factor with evidence.
- Factor. The taxes raised anger across the country.anger
- Evidence. The poll tax was collected in 1380 and 1381, so people felt it repeatedly.repeatedly
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that says the taxes raised anger across the country.
Check. Check fact: confirm the tax dates in your textbook.
Watch out
Watch out: a counter-argument that is only a weak sentence is not a counter-argument. Make it argue against your view with a reason.
Exam tip
Exam tip. Write the argument first, then the factors, the counter-argument, and a judgement that weighs both.
Exercise 6B The shape of a how far answer
Method. Recall the parts.
- Recall. The final conclusion is the judgement.judgement
- Check. It is the paragraph that weighs the factors.weighs
- Write the answer. judgement
Check. The judgement weighs the factors.
Method. Recall the parts.
- Recall. A reason that goes against the view is a counter-argument.counter-argument
- Write the answer. counter-argument
Check. It must be a real challenge to your argument.
Method. Recall the signal word.
- Recall. However shows you are setting one view against another.however
- Write the answer. however
Check. On balance and overall also signal a judgement.
Method. Think about the argument.
- Think. The argument is stated in one clear sentence at the start.one sentence
- Write the answer. 1
Check. Accept one is correct for the argument statement.
Method. Give a factor with a reason.
- Factor. The shortage raised wages, which the government tried to fix.raised wages
- Link. That built up the grievance behind the revolt.grievance
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that says the shortage raised wages and built grievances.
Check. The link back to the question is the important part.
Method. Argue against the view.
- Argue. The labour shortage was older than the tax, so it may have mattered more.older than tax
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that says the labour shortage had built up for years before the tax.
Check. A counter-argument must argue the other side.
Method. Recall the signal word.
- Recall. Overall signals a conclusion after weighing.overall
- Write the answer. overall
Check. However is used to set up the counter-argument.
Method. Think about what a narrative answer does.
- Think. A narrative answer tells what happened, but argues less.tells, argues less
- Decide. So it usually lacks a real counter-argument.counter-argument
- Write the answer. counter-argument
Check. Narrative is the main weakness to avoid.
Method. Think about what a list does.
- Think. A list gives factors, but does not say which mattered most.no ranking
- Decide. Weighing shows which factor mattered most and why.which mattered most
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence that says weighing shows which factor mattered most and why.
Check. Judgement is the weighing step.
Method. State a clear view.
- State. The fire was a turning point because it changed how London was built.changed how built
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence that states a clear view with a reason.
Check. Check fact: confirm the rebuilding in your textbook.
Planning and paragraphing
A paragraph should make one point, support it with evidence, and link back to the question. A useful pattern is: point, evidence, explanation, link. The first sentence of each paragraph is the topic sentence.
| Paragraph | Job | Example |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Argument: your view | The poll taxes were the main trigger, but not the only cause. |
| 2 | Factor 1 with evidence | The labour shortage after the Black Death raised wages. |
| 3 | Factor 2 with evidence | The poll taxes angered people across the country. |
| 4 | Counter-argument | The labour shortage was older, so it mattered more. |
| 5 | Judgement | On balance, the tax was the trigger, but the shortage made it possible. |
Key ideas
- One point per paragraph.
- Point, evidence, explanation, link to the question.
- The plan has one job per paragraph.
- The judgement comes last, and it must weigh.
Method. Start with the point.
- Point. The labour shortage after the Black Death was a major factor.major factor
- Detail. It raised wages, which the government tried to fix.raised wages
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence that states the labour shortage as a factor that raised wages or built grievances.
Check. The topic sentence is the point; the rest is evidence.
Method. Recall the pattern.
- Recall. The pattern is point, evidence, explanation and link to the question.point, evidence, explanation, link
- Check. Each paragraph follows this order.order
- Write the answer. Accept point, evidence, explanation and link.
Check. Each paragraph should follow the pattern.
Method. Look at the order of the plan.
- Look. The judgement is the last paragraph of the plan.last
- Decide. So it is paragraph 5.5
- Write the answer. 5
Check. The judgement comes last.
Watch out
Watch out: a paragraph with two points loses marks for focus. Split it, or choose one point and move the other to another paragraph.
Exam tip
Exam tip. Spend a few minutes on the plan. A plan that is clear saves time and keeps the answer focused.
Exercise 6C Planning and paragraphing
Method. Recall the term.
- Recall. The sentence that states the point is the topic sentence.topic sentence
- Write the answer. topic sentence
Check. The rest of the paragraph supports it.
Method. Recall the pattern.
- Recall. The last step of the pattern links back to the question.link
- Write the answer. link
Check. Point, evidence, explanation, link.
Method. Look at the plan.
- Look. Paragraph 4 is the counter-argument.4
- Write the answer. 4
Check. The judgement follows in paragraph 5.
Method. Recall the rule.
- Recall. A paragraph makes one point, supported by evidence.one point
- Write the answer. 1
Check. Two points in one paragraph lose focus.
Method. State the point first.
- Point. The poll taxes angered people across the country.angered people
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence that says the poll taxes angered people across the country.
Check. The point should be one factor only.
Method. Recall the pattern.
- Recall. The fact that supports the point is evidence.evidence
- Write the answer. evidence
Check. Evidence must be relevant to the point.
Method. Give a specific fact.
- Fact. The poll tax was collected in 1380 and again in 1381.1380, 1381
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that says the tax was collected in 1380 and 1381.
Check. Check fact: confirm the dates in your textbook.
Method. Recall the paragraph.
- Recall. The paragraph that argues the other side is the counter-argument.counter-argument
- Write the answer. counter-argument
Check. It must be a real challenge.
Method. Think about what a plan does.
- Think. A plan gives each paragraph one job.one job
- Decide. So the answer stays focused on the question.focused
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence that says it gives each paragraph one job and keeps the answer focused.
Check. A focused answer scores better than a long one.
Method. Link back to the question.
- Link. So the shortage was a major factor in making the revolt likely.factor in revolt
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence that says the shortage was a factor in making the revolt likely.
Check. The link answers the question directly.
Avoiding narrative and making a sustained judgement
Narrative tells what happened in order. Analysis explains why it happened, what it caused, and how much it mattered. A good answer uses short narrative only to support an argument, and then explains it.
A sustained judgement runs through the whole answer: the argument is stated at the start, supported in each paragraph, and concluded at the end.
Key ideas
- Narrative tells what happened; analysis explains why it mattered.
- Use narrative only to support a point.
- A sustained judgement runs from the first sentence to the last.
- End with a judgement, not a summary.
Method. Ask which one explains rather than tells.
- Look at A. A tells what happened on a date.narrative
- Look at B. B explains what the event shows about the government.analysis
- Write the answer. B
Check. Check fact: confirm the details of Mile End in your textbook.
Method. Recall the structure.
- Recall. The argument is stated at the start, and the judgement at the end.argument at the start
- Check. The judgement then concludes the sustained argument.concludes
- Write the answer. argument
Check. The sustained judgement runs from the argument to the judgement.
Method. Add the explanation.
- Add. Add why the march mattered for the government and the anger behind it.why it mattered
- Result. The march showed how far the anger had spread across the country.spread
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that adds why it mattered, for example that it showed how far the anger had spread.
Check. Check fact: confirm the details in your textbook.
Watch out
Watch out: a summary at the end is not a judgement. “In conclusion, there were many causes” does not weigh them.
Exam tip
Exam tip. Check each paragraph: does it argue, does it link to the question? If not, rewrite it before you move on.
Exercise 6D Avoiding narrative and making a sustained judgement
Method. Ask whether it explains or only tells.
- Look. It states what happened on a date, without explaining why it mattered.tells
- Write the answer. narrative
Check. Check fact: confirm the date in your textbook.
Method. Ask whether it explains.
- Look. It explains what the march showed about the anger.explains
- Write the answer. analysis
Check. Analysis explains why an event mattered.
Method. Recall the term.
- Recall. Telling events in order is narrative.narrative
- Write the answer. narrative
Check. Narrative is useful only in small amounts.
Method. Recall the term.
- Recall. A judgement that runs through the whole answer is sustained.sustained judgement
- Write the answer. sustained judgement
Check. It starts with the argument and ends with the judgement.
Method. Name the most important cause and a reason.
- Name. The poll tax was the most important trigger.poll tax
- Reason. It set the protests off in 1381.set off
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence that names one cause as the most important and gives a reason.
Check. A judgement names one, with a reason.
Method. Check which weighs the factors.
- Check X. X lists causes without weighing them.no weighing
- Check Y. Y weighs the factors and gives a reason.weighs
- Write the answer. Y
Check. A judgement must weigh.
Method. Recall the signal word.
- Recall. However sets one factor against another.however
- Write the answer. however
Check. Weighing words help a sustained judgement.
Method. Think about what narrative lacks.
- Think. Narrative tells what happened without arguing a view.no argument
- Decide. So it does not answer the question.does not answer
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence that says it describes events without arguing a view.
Check. The question asks for a judgement, not a story.
Method. Link the event to the question.
- Link. The rebuilding shows the fire’s long-term significance for London.long-term significance
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence linking the rebuilding to long-term significance.
Check. Check fact: confirm the rebuilding in your textbook.
Method. Check whether it weighs.
- Check. Repeating the argument does not weigh factors or counter-arguments.no weighing
- Decide. So it is not a sustained judgement.no
- Write the answer. no
Check. A sustained judgement weighs the whole answer.
Method. Use the narrative briefly, then explain.
- Narrative. The king met the rebels at Mile End.Mile End
- Analysis. That meeting shows that the government was willing to negotiate under pressure.pressure
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence that gives a brief event and explains what it shows.
Check. Check fact: confirm the Mile End meeting in your textbook.
Method. Recall the parts.
- Recall. The view stated at the start is the argument.argument
- Write the answer. argument
Check. The argument is restated and weighed in the judgement.
Method. Check whether it weighs anything.
- Check. Repeating the question does not weigh factors.no weighing
- Decide. So it is not a judgement.no
- Write the answer. no
Check. A judgement must weigh and conclude.
Method. Recall the term.
- Recall. Explaining why something mattered is analysis.analysis
- Write the answer. analysis
Check. Narrative tells; analysis explains.
Method. Recall the pattern.
- Recall. The last step of a paragraph links back to the question.link
- Write the answer. link
Check. Point, evidence, explanation, link.
Chapter summary
| Skill | Method |
|---|---|
| Significance | In its own time and for later times; name a criterion |
| How far answer | Argument, factors, counter-argument, judgement |
| Paragraphs | One point, evidence, explanation, link to the question |
| Narrative | Use briefly to support analysis; never as the whole answer |
| Sustained judgement | Stated at the start, supported throughout, concluded at the end |
Can you…?
- I can explain significance in its own time and for later times.
- I can name a criterion and apply it.
- I can plan a how far answer with an argument, factors, a counter-argument and a judgement.
- I can write paragraphs with one point, evidence and a link to the question.
- I can avoid narrative and make a sustained judgement.
Key terms
- significance
- the importance of an event, in its own time or in its effect on later times
- criterion
- a standard used to judge importance
- how far
- a question that asks you to judge the extent of something
- counter-argument
- a point that goes against the main argument
- judgement
- a conclusion that weighs the factors and says which mattered most
- narrative
- telling what happened in order, without explaining why it mattered
- analysis
- explaining why something happened or mattered
- sustained judgement
- a judgement that runs through the whole answer
Exercise 6Z Check-up
Method. Recall the criterion.
- Recall. A change of direction is a turning point.turning point
- Write the answer. turning point
Check. Turning point is a criterion for significance.
Method. Recall the parts.
- Recall. The conclusion that weighs the factors is the judgement.judgement
- Write the answer. judgement
Check. The judgement is not a list.
Method. Recall the parts.
- Recall. The part that argues against the view is the counter-argument.counter-argument
- Write the answer. counter-argument
Check. It must be a real challenge.
Method. Recall the pattern.
- Recall. The pattern is point, evidence, explanation and link.point, evidence, explanation, link
- Write the answer. Accept point, evidence, explanation and link.
Check. Each paragraph should follow this pattern.
Method. Ask whether it explains or only tells.
- Look. It states what happened on a date.tells
- Write the answer. narrative
Check. Check fact: confirm the details in your textbook.
Method. Recall the word.
- Recall. However sets one view against another.however
- Write the answer. however
Check. On balance and overall also signal a judgement.
Method. Recall the word.
- Recall. Importance is significance.significance
- Write the answer. significance
Check. Significance can be in its own time or later.
Method. Recall the date.
- Recall. The fire was in 1666.1666
- Write the answer. 1666
Check. The rebuilding laws followed in 1667.
Method. Think about what the judgement needs.
- Think. The judgement needs two sides to weigh.two sides
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that says it lets the judgement weigh both sides.
Check. Without it, the answer argues one side only.
Method. State a view with a reason.
- State. The revolt was a turning point for labour, because it weakened the old controls.weakened controls
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence with a clear view and a reason.
Check. Check fact: confirm the labour changes in your textbook.
Total 23 marks. Allow about 23 minutes.
Exercise 6X Exam-style questions
Method. Define the term, then give the example.
- Define. Significance in its own time is how much the event mattered to the people who lived through it.mattered to people
- Example. The revolt frightened the government and showed the anger of ordinary people.frightened government
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that says it is how much the event mattered to people at the time, with the revolt as an example.
Check. Mark totals and wording: check board.
Method. Name the criterion and apply it.
- Criterion. Using the criterion of long-lasting effects.long-lasting
- Apply. The rebuilding shaped London for many decades.decades
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that names a criterion (such as long-lasting or turning point) and a long-term effect on London.
Check. Check fact: confirm the rebuilding in your textbook.
Method. State the point of the paragraph.
- State. The poll taxes were the main trigger of the revolt.main trigger
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence that states the poll taxes as the main trigger.
Check. Mark totals and wording: check board.
Method. Argue against the view.
- Argue. The labour shortage built up for years before the tax, so it may have mattered more.built up for years
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that says the labour shortage after the Black Death had built up for years before the tax.
Check. Check fact: confirm the dates in your textbook.
Method. Explain what narrative lacks.
- Explain. Narrative tells the story without arguing a view.no view
- Link. So it does not answer the question.no answer
- Write the answer. Accept any sentence that says narrative describes events without arguing a view or answering the question.
Check. Mark totals and wording: check board.
Method. Give one job for each paragraph.
- 1 and 2. Argument, then factor one: the poll taxes angered people.argument, factor 1
- 3 and 4. Factor two: the labour shortage; then a counter-argument.factor 2, counter
- 5. Judgement, weighing the factors.judgement
- Write the answer. Accept any plan with an argument, two factors, a counter-argument and a judgement, each with a job.
Check. Mark totals and wording: check board.
Method. Compare the two.
- Sustained. A sustained judgement runs through the whole answer and weighs the factors.runs through
- Summary. A summary repeats points without weighing them.repeats
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that says a sustained judgement runs through the whole answer and weighs factors, while a summary only repeats points.
Check. Mark totals and wording: check board.
Method. Add why it mattered.
- Add. The march showed how far the anger had spread.spread
- Link. It also pushed the king to negotiate, which mattered for the government.negotiate
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that adds the significance of the march, such as showing how far the anger had spread or forcing the king to meet the rebels.
Check. Check fact: confirm the details in your textbook.
Method. Argue, use a criterion, then weigh.
- Argument. The fire was a major turning point, because it changed how London was built.changed built
- Criterion. Using turning point, the rebuilding changed the direction of London’s development.turning point
- Counter. But the city recovered and grew along existing routes, so the change was less complete.recovered
- Judge. On balance, the fire was a turning point for the building of London.judgement
- Write the answer. Accept any answer that makes a clear judgement, uses one criterion, includes a counter-argument, and weighs the two.
Check. Check fact: confirm the details in your textbook. Mark totals: check board.