Reading poetry and plays aloud
By the end of this chapter you will be able to
- Work out the rhyme scheme of a stanza from the spelling of its line endings
- Count the strong beats in a line, and see how a steady rhythm is built
- Name a simile, a metaphor or personification, and explain its effect on the reader
- Name a form of poetry (free verse, narrative, limerick or haiku) from its features
- Read a poem aloud with expression, using its punctuation
- Read a play script with its speakers and stage directions, and perform a short part in role
You should already know
- Fronted adverbials and conjunctions (Chapter 6 of this book)
- Noun phrases and Standard English verb forms (Chapter 7 of this book)
- Retrieving facts and predicting from a text (Chapter 8 of this book)
- Punctuation for direct speech (Chapter 5 of this book)
Where this leads
- Reading non-fiction and recording information (Chapter 10 of this book)
- Using figurative language and structure in your own writing (Chapter 11 of this book)
National Curriculum for England, Key Stage 2 English, Year 4. Content: Recognise forms of poetry, including free verse and narrative poetry, and the features of a limerick and a haiku, Explain how rhyme, rhythm and the arrangement of verse into stanzas shape a poem, Explain how simile, metaphor and personification, word choice and structure affect the reader, Discuss words and phrases that capture the reader's interest and imagination, Prepare poems and play scripts to read aloud and perform, using intonation, tone, volume and action, Adopt roles, improvise and perform a short part from a play script.
Exercise P Do you remember?
Method. Think about the word retrieve from Chapter 8.
- Think about what the chapter said. Retrieving means finding a fact that the writer has stated.a stated fact
- Write the meaning in your own words. A good answer also points to the place in the text.finding a fact the writer has stated
- Write the answer. finding a fact the writer has stated
Check. Retrieving means finding a stated fact. ✓
Watch out. A guess is not a retrieved fact.
Method. Find the word that tells how the bird sang.
- Find the word. Quietly tells how the bird sang.quietly
- Name the word class. A word that tells how an action is done is an adverb.adverb
- Write the answer. adverb
Check. Quietly describes the verb sang, so it is an adverb. ✓
Watch out. Adverbs often end in -ly.
Method. A noun phrase is a noun and the words that describe it.
- Find the noun. The noun is tree.tree
- Add the words that describe it. The, tall and oak all go with the noun tree.The tall oak tree
- Write the answer. The tall oak tree
Check. The noun phrase is one group around the noun tree. ✓
Watch out. Do not include the verb fell.
Method. The subject is we, so use the plural form.
- Find the subject. The subject is we, which is plural.we
- Choose the verb form. We takes were, not was.were
- Write the answer. were
Check. We were late is Standard English. ✓
Watch out. I was and we were is the usual pattern.
Method. A fronted adverbial comes at the start of the sentence, before a comma.
- Find the words before the comma. Later that day comes at the start, before the comma.Later that day,
- Write the words without the comma. Do not include the comma in the answer.Later that day
- Write the answer. Later that day
Check. The words before the comma are the fronted adverbial. ✓
Watch out. The comma after a fronted adverbial is part of the rule, not part of the words.
Verse, stanzas and rhyme
A poem is written in lines. A line is one row of words. A stanza is a group of lines, a bit like a paragraph in a poem. Stanzas are often separated by a space, so the reader can see where one group ends and the next begins. Some people use the word verse for a stanza as well.
Rhyme happens when two line endings are spelt in the same way, such as slow and grow. A rhyme scheme shows the pattern: give the first ending the letter A, and each new ending a new letter. The scheme ABAB means lines 1 and 3 rhyme, and lines 2 and 4 rhyme.
Poem: The Quiet Allotment
The gate swings open, cold and slow,
and cabbage leaves are soft with dew.
Past rows where marrows start to grow,
the robin sings, "The day is new."
The spades lie stacked against the wall,
and seeds lie sleeping in the ground.
The watering can is standing tall,
and sparrows hop and look around.
The sun climbs up, and skies are bright,
the bees hum by the old green hive,
the leaves turn gold in morning light,
and every bloom is glad to thrive.
| Word | What it means | Example from The Quiet Allotment |
|---|---|---|
| line | one row of words in a poem | "The gate swings open, cold and slow," |
| stanza | a group of lines in a poem | stanza 1 has four lines |
| rhyme | line endings spelt in the same way | slow and grow both end in -ow |
| rhyme scheme | the letters that show the pattern | ABAB |
Key ideas
- A stanza is a group of lines, often separated by a space.
- Rhyme depends on the spelling of the end of each line, such as -ow in slow and grow.
- Give the first ending the letter A, and each new ending a new letter.
- The rhyme scheme ABAB means lines 1 and 3 match, and lines 2 and 4 match.
Method. Find the stanza, then count its lines one by one.
- Find stanza 2. Stanza 2 starts with The spades lie stacked and ends with around.The spades ... around
- Count the lines. Each line is a separate row of words.1, 2, 3, 4
- Check the gaps. Stanza 2 is separated from stanza 1 and stanza 3 by a space.4 lines between the spaces
- Write the answer. 4 lines
Check. Stanza 2 has four lines: wall, ground, tall and around. ✓
Method. Write down the end word of each line, then match the endings.
- Write the end words. The end word is the last word of each line.slow, dew, grow, new
- Match the endings. Slow and grow both end in -ow, and dew and new both end in -ew.lines 1 and 3 (-ow); lines 2 and 4 (-ew)
- Give the letters in order. Slow is A, dew is B, grow is A again, new is B again.A B A B
- Write the answer. ABAB
Check. Lines 1 and 3 match, and lines 2 and 4 match. ✓
Method. Find the line that rhymes with the first line of the stanza.
- Find the line that ends bright. The first line ends with bright.line 1: bright
- Look for the same ending. The ending -ight is spelt the same in light.line 3: light
- Check the other lines. Line 2 ends hive and line 4 ends thrive, so they do not match bright.only line 3 matches
- Write the answer. line 3
Check. Light and bright both end in -ight. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: rhyme is about the spelling of the end of a line. Ground and around rhyme, because both end in -ound. Slow and slope look alike at the start, but they do not rhyme.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask your child to read the poem once, then to point to the last word of each line. Ask: "Which ones end the same way?" Then write the letters together. The rhyme is checked by spelling, so your child can check it on the page.
Exercise 9A Practice: stanzas and rhyme schemes
Method. Count the groups of lines, separated by spaces.
- Find the spaces between the groups. A space separates one stanza from the next.two spaces
- Count the groups. There is a group before the first space, one between the spaces, and one after the second space.stanza 1, stanza 2, stanza 3
- Write the answer. 3
Check. Two spaces make three stanzas. ✓
Watch out. Count the groups, not the spaces.
Method. Count the lines in stanza 2.
- Find stanza 2. It starts with The spades lie stacked against the wall.The spades ... around
- Count the rows. Each row is one line.4 lines
- Write the answer. 4
Check. Four rows: wall, ground, tall and around. ✓
Method. Compare the spelling of the line endings.
- Write down the last word of each line. Rhyme depends on the spelling of the ending.1: slow, 2: dew, 3: grow, 4: new
- Match the endings by their spelling. Lines whose endings are spelt the same way rhyme.lines 1 and 3 end in -ow (slow, grow); lines 2 and 4 end in -ew (dew, new)
- Give each new ending a new letter. Use A for the first ending, B for the next new ending, and so on.ABAB
- Write the answer. ABAB
Check. Lines with the same ending spelling share a letter. ✓
Method. Compare the spelling of the line endings.
- Write down the last word of each line. Rhyme depends on the spelling of the ending.1: wall, 2: ground, 3: tall, 4: around
- Match the endings by their spelling. Lines whose endings are spelt the same way rhyme.lines 1 and 3 end in -all (wall, tall); lines 2 and 4 end in -ound (ground, around)
- Give each new ending a new letter. Use A for the first ending, B for the next new ending, and so on.ABAB
- Write the answer. ABAB
Check. Lines with the same ending spelling share a letter. ✓
Method. Look for the ending -ound.
- Find the ending of ground. Ground is line 2 and ends in -ound.ground: -ound
- Match the spelling. Around is line 4, and it also ends in -ound.around = line 4
- Write the answer. line 4
Check. Ground and around share the ending -ound. ✓
Method. Compare the ending of each word with -ight.
- Check light. Light ends in -ight, the same spelling as bright.light: -ight, rhymes
- Check sight. Sight ends in -ight, the same spelling as bright.sight: -ight, rhymes
- Check kite. Kite ends in -ite, which is spelt differently, so it does not rhyme by spelling.kite: -ite, does not rhyme
- Write the answer. kite
Check. Only kite has a different ending. ✓
Watch out. Look at the last letters, not the first letter.
Method. Look at the last letters of each word.
- Write the endings. The last letters of ground are -ound.ground: -ound
- Compare them. The last letters of around are also -ound.around: -ound
- Write the answer. both end in -ound
Check. The same ending spelling makes a rhyme. ✓
Watch out. Say the answer in a short sentence, with the ending spelt out.
Method. A line is one row. A stanza is a group.
- Define a line. A line is one row of words in a poem.one row of words
- Define a stanza. A stanza is a group of lines, separated by a space.a group of lines
- Write the answer. a line is one row of words, and a stanza is a group of lines
Check. Rows and groups are different things. ✓
Method. Check which lines rhyme before you write the scheme.
- Check lines 1 and 2. Line 1 ends slow and line 2 ends dew, which do not match.slow and dew do not match
- Check lines 1 and 3. Slow and grow both end in -ow, so lines 1 and 3 rhyme.lines 1 and 3 match
- Write the answer. No, the scheme is ABAB
Check. Ali has confused the pattern. ✓
Watch out. AABB means the first two lines rhyme. Here they do not.
Method. Find the stanza that mentions the sun.
- Read each stanza. Stanza 1 is about a gate and dew; stanza 2 is about spades and seeds.stanzas 1 and 2 do not mention the sun
- Find the sun. Stanza 3 begins The sun climbs up.The sun climbs up
- Write the answer. stanza 3
Check. The sun is in stanza 3. ✓
Method. Think about what changes between stanzas.
- Compare the stanzas. Stanza 2 is about the garden tools and seeds; stanza 3 is about the sun.the topic changes
- Explain the effect. The space between stanzas gives the reader a pause to think about the new idea.a pause for the reader
- Write the answer. a new stanza moves to a new idea and gives the reader a pause
Check. The change of stanza shows a change of idea. ✓
Rhythm and strong beats
Rhythm is the pattern of strong and weak parts in a line. A strong beat is a part that is said more firmly, like the tick of a clock. In this book, the strong beats of a poem are shown in bold. Count the bold words to find the beats in a line.
Most lines in The Night Tram have four strong beats, so the rhythm is steady. One line has only three, so it breaks the pattern.
Poem: The Night Tram
The night tram rattles down the hill,
its windows glow and all is still.
A sleepy boy sits near the door,
and counts the lamps across the floor.
At last the tram comes to the stop,
its doors slide open with a pop.
A girl climbs on, her cheeks alight,
She sits down near him, warm and bright.
Key ideas
- A strong beat is shown by a bold word in the poem.
- Count the strong beats, not the words and not the syllables.
- A steady rhythm has the same number of strong beats in each line.
- A line with fewer beats breaks the pattern, and the reader notices it.
Method. Find the bold words and count them.
- Find the bold words. Each bold word is one strong beat.night, rattles, down, hill
- Check the words that are not bold. The, tram and the are not bold, so they are not strong beats.The, tram, the are not counted
- Count the strong beats. Four bold words make four strong beats.4
- Write the answer. 4
Check. Four strong beats make a steady line. ✓
Method. Find the bold words, then count them.
- Find the bold words. The bold words are doors, slide, open and pop.doors, slide, open, pop
- Count them. Each bold word is one strong beat.1, 2, 3, 4
- Check the rhythm. Four beats match the other lines of the stanza.4 beats
- Write the answer. 4
Check. Line 6 has four strong beats, like the rest of stanza 2. ✓
Method. Count the bold words in each line of the stanza.
- Count line 5. At last the tram comes to the stop has three bold words.last, tram, stop = 3
- Count line 6. Its doors slide open with a pop has four bold words.4
- Compare the lines. Lines 6, 7 and 8 each have four bold words, so line 5 is the one that breaks the pattern.line 5 has 3
- Write the answer. line 5
Check. Line 5 is the only line with three beats in stanza 2. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: count the strong beats, not the words. "At last the tram comes to the stop" has eight words, but only three strong beats, so the number of words is not the same as the number of beats.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. As you read a line together, let your child tap a finger on the table for each bold word. The bold words show the pattern used in this book; there is no single correct way to read a poem with expression.
Exercise 9B Practice: counting strong beats
Method. Count the bold words in the line.
- Find the bold words. Each bold word is one strong beat.windows, glow, all, still
- Count the bold words. Count one for each bold word, and do not count the words that are not bold.4 bold words
- Write the answer. 4
Check. The line has 4 strong beats. ✓
Method. Count the bold words in the line.
- Find the bold words. Each bold word is one strong beat.counts, lamps, across, floor
- Count the bold words. Count one for each bold word, and do not count the words that are not bold.4 bold words
- Write the answer. 4
Check. The line has 4 strong beats. ✓
Method. Count the bold words in the line.
- Find the bold words. Each bold word is one strong beat.At last, tram, stop
- Count the bold words. Count one for each bold word, and do not count the words that are not bold.3 bold words
- Write the answer. 3
Check. The line has 3 strong beats. ✓
Method. Count the bold words in the line.
- Find the bold words. Each bold word is one strong beat.sits, near, warm, bright
- Count the bold words. Count one for each bold word, and do not count the words that are not bold.4 bold words
- Write the answer. 4
Check. The line has 4 strong beats. ✓
Method. Find the word that is not in bold.
- Check climbs and cheeks. Climbs and cheeks are both bold in line 7.climbs: bold, cheeks: bold
- Check on. On is not in bold, so it is not a strong beat.on: not bold
- Write the answer. on
Check. Only on is not bold in line 7. ✓
Watch out. Look for the bold words first, then compare.
Method. Count the bold words in each line of stanza 1.
- Count each line. Line 1 has four bold words, and so do lines 2, 3 and 4.4, 4, 4, 4
- Decide true or false. Every line has four beats, so the statement is true.all four lines = 4
- Write the answer. True
Check. Stanza 1 is steady. ✓
Method. Add the beats of the four lines.
- Count the beats in each line. Each line of stanza 1 has four strong beats.4 + 4 + 4 + 4
- Add them. Four lines of four beats make sixteen beats.16
- Write the answer. 16
Check. 4 x 4 = 16. ✓
Method. Count the syllables, one for each sound of the vowel.
- Split the words. Each word here is one syllable.At / last / the / tram / comes / to / the / stop
- Count them. There are eight one-syllable words.8 syllables
- Write the answer. 8
Check. Eight words, each with one syllable, make eight syllables. ✓
Watch out. Syllables are not the same as strong beats. This line has eight syllables but only three strong beats.
Method. Count the bold words in the line.
- Find the bold words. Each bold word is one strong beat.sleepy, boy, near, door
- Count the bold words. Count one for each bold word, and do not count the words that are not bold.4 bold words
- Write the answer. 4
Check. The line has 4 strong beats. ✓
Method. Count the bold words in the line.
- Find the bold words. Each bold word is one strong beat.girl, climbs, cheeks, alight
- Count the bold words. Count one for each bold word, and do not count the words that are not bold.4 bold words
- Write the answer. 4
Check. The line has 4 strong beats. ✓
Method. Count the bold words in the line.
- Find the bold words. Each bold word is one strong beat.doors, slide, open, pop
- Count the bold words. Count one for each bold word, and do not count the words that are not bold.4 bold words
- Write the answer. 4
Check. The line has 4 strong beats. ✓
Method. Use the short rhythm of the line.
- Look at the beats. Line 5 has three strong beats, not four.last, tram, stop
- Choose a delivery. A quick pace or a short pause makes the line feel shorter.read it briskly, then pause after stop
- Write the answer. read it briskly, then pause after stop
Check. The pace or pause matches the short line. ✓
Method. Think about what changes when the rhythm changes.
- Compare the lines. Four beats in each line make a steady rhythm; three beats make a break in it.a break in the rhythm
- Explain the effect. The reader feels the tram slow down at the stop, because the line is shorter.a sudden stop
- Write the answer. the shorter line feels sudden, as if the tram has stopped
Check. A change of rhythm changes the effect. ✓
Imagery: simile, metaphor and personification
Figurative language means words used to make a picture, rather than their plain meaning. Three kinds are shown in the table.
| Name | What it does | Example from The Fog Comes In |
|---|---|---|
| simile | compares two things using like or as | wraps the roofs like a grey sheet |
| metaphor | says one thing is another, without like or as | The river is a ribbon, grey |
| personification | gives a human action or body part to something that is not human | silver feet; the sun yawns |
Poem: The Fog Comes In
The fog comes in on silver feet.
It creeps across the sleeping town
and wraps the roofs like a grey sheet,
and hides the hill, and hides the tree.
The river is a ribbon, grey,
and every lamp glows like a coin.
The bus stop waits, but nothing comes,
and footsteps fade and go away.
Then the sun yawns and stretches out.
Effect means what the words make the reader feel or picture. Writers also choose word choice (the exact words) and structure (how the lines and stanzas are arranged). A single-line stanza, for example, makes the reader stop for a moment.
Key ideas
- A simile uses like or as to compare two things.
- A metaphor says one thing is another, with no like or as.
- Personification gives a human action or body part to something that is not human.
- A single line on its own can make the reader pause, and show a change.
Method. Look for the words like or as.
- Look for like or as. The word like makes a comparison in stanza 1.wraps the roofs like a grey sheet
- Check the comparison. The roofs are being compared with a sheet.roofs = sheet
- Copy the words. The simile is the words that begin with like.like a grey sheet
- Write the answer. like a grey sheet
Check. The comparison uses like, so it is a simile. ✓
Method. Look for one thing that is said to be another.
- Find the line. The first line of stanza 2 says The river is a ribbon, grey.The river is a ribbon, grey
- Check for like or as. There is no like or as in this line.no like, no as
- Name the figure. A line that says one thing is another, without like or as, is a metaphor.metaphor
- Write the answer. The river is a ribbon, grey
Check. The river is said to be a ribbon, with no like or as. ✓
Method. Ask whether the thing does something only a person can do.
- Think about the subject. A bus stop is an object and cannot wait.bus stop = object
- Check the action. Waiting is something a person does.waits = human action
- Name the figure. Giving a human action to a thing is personification.personification
- Write the answer. personification
Check. A bus stop cannot wait, so the word is personification. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a simile must have like or as. The line The river is a ribbon has neither, so it is a metaphor, not a simile.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask: "What picture does this make in your head?" Accept any sensible picture. Figurative language is best learned by saying the line aloud and asking what the writer wants you to see.
Exercise 9C Practice: simile, metaphor and personification
Method. Find the fact that the text states.
- Find the words that answer the question. Scan the text for the detail the question asks about.every lamp glows like a coin
- Check that the fact is stated, not guessed. The words like a coin compare a lamp with a coin.like a coin
- Write the answer. like a coin
Check. The text states this fact. ✓
Method. Find the fact that the text states.
- Find the words that answer the question. Scan the text for the detail the question asks about.The fog comes in on silver feet
- Check that the fact is stated, not guessed. The fog is given feet, so the words are a body part given to a thing.silver feet
- Write the answer. silver feet
Check. The text states this fact. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the line and the poem.
- Read the line with the word or figure in it. Decide what the line needs.
- Test the choice in the line. A bus stop cannot wait, so the word gives it a human action.personification fits
- Reject the other choices. Neither a simile nor a metaphor fits: the line has no like or as, and it does not say the bus stop is something else.simile and metaphor do not fit
- Write the answer. personification
Check. personification fits the line. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the line and the poem.
- Read the line with the word or figure in it. Decide what the line needs.
- Test the choice in the line. The word like compares the roofs with a grey sheet.simile fits
- Reject the other choices. The line does not say the roofs are a sheet, and it does not give the roofs a human action.metaphor and personification do not fit
- Write the answer. simile
Check. simile fits the line. ✓
Method. Ask whether the fog is given something only a person or creature has.
- Look at the words. Silver feet are the feet of a living thing.silver feet
- Check whether fog has feet. Fog is not a living thing, so the words give it a body part.fog has feet = personification
- Write the answer. personification
Check. Feet are given to the fog, so the figure is personification. ✓
Method. Look for a word that a person does, but a sun cannot.
- Find the sun. Stanza 3 says Then the sun yawns and stretches out.the sun yawns
- Check the action. A sun cannot yawn, so the word gives it a human action.yawns = human action
- Write the answer. yawns
Check. Yawns is a human action given to the sun. ✓
Method. Test each verb against the picture of a quiet fog.
- Test creeps. Creeps is slow and quiet, like a soft fog moving over the roofs.creeps: slow and quiet
- Reject the other verbs. Crashes is loud, and rushes is fast; neither suits a quiet fog.crashes and rushes do not fit
- Write the answer. creeps
Check. Creeps matches the quiet fog. ✓
Watch out. Word choice is about the exact effect of one verb.
Method. Think about what a ribbon looks like.
- Think about a ribbon. A ribbon is thin, long and smooth.thin, long, smooth
- Connect it to the river. The river is thin and smooth through the fog, so the reader can picture it.a clear picture of the river
- Write the answer. the river looks long, thin and smooth, like a ribbon
Check. The metaphor gives a clear picture. ✓
Method. Think about what feet give a living thing.
- Think about feet. Feet make a creature move, so the fog seems to walk.the fog walks
- Connect it to the effect. Silver feet also make the fog seem pale and quiet.pale and quiet
- Write the answer. the fog seems alive and moves quietly
Check. Silver feet make the fog seem alive. ✓
Method. Compare stanza 3 with the stanzas before it.
- Compare the length. The first two stanzas have four lines; stanza 3 has only one.four lines, four lines, one line
- Explain the effect. A single line on its own makes the reader pause, and shows the change from fog to sun.a pause and a change
- Write the answer. the single line makes the reader pause and shows a change
Check. Structure can shape meaning. ✓
Method. Compare the sun with something that is bright or warm.
- Choose a comparison. A lamp is bright and warm, like the sun.a warm lamp
- Use like or as. Write the sun is like a warm lamp.The sun is like a warm lamp
- Write the answer. The sun is like a warm lamp in the sky
Check. The comparison uses like. ✓
Watch out. A simile needs like or as. Without it, the line is a metaphor.
Forms of poetry: free verse, narrative, limerick and haiku
Poems come in different forms. Some have a regular rhyme and rhythm; some do not. The table shows the four forms in this section.
| Form | What it is | Feature to look for |
|---|---|---|
| free verse | a poem with no regular rhyme or rhythm | the poet chooses where each line breaks |
| narrative poem | a poem that tells a story, with characters and events in order | a girl, a kite and a sequence of events |
| limerick | a funny poem of five lines | the rhyme scheme AABBA; lines 3 and 4 are shorter |
| haiku | a short poem of three lines, traditionally built on 5, 7 and 5 syllables | a picture of one moment in nature |
Poem: Market Morning
The stalls unfold with a rattle and bang.
Oranges are stacked in pyramids,
bright as lanterns on a dark stage.
A man sings about cabbages, loud and sure.
A coin drops and rings on the stones.
Coffee steams from a battered tin pot.
Nobody hurries. The morning has all the time it needs.
Poem: The Kite on the Hill
Priya climbed the grassy hill
to fly the kite her dad had made.
The sky was grey, the air was still,
and the grass lay flat in the shade.
She ran across the field and threw
her kite up high, and it flew.
A gust of wind rose, cold and bright,
and lifted it into the light.
Priya laughed and held the string,
and felt the kite begin to sing.
It swooped and dipped above the town,
then glided gently, slowly down.
Poem: The Puppy Called Jess
A puppy called Jess ran about,
chasing shadows and leaves in and out.
She chased a ball,
then she leapt the wall,
and she barked a loud, happy shout.
Poem: Winter Morning
Cold winter morning,
the river wears a white coat,
the robin sings loud.
Key ideas
- Free verse has no regular rhyme or rhythm.
- A narrative poem tells a story, with characters and events in order.
- A limerick has five lines and the rhyme scheme AABBA.
- A haiku has three lines and is traditionally built on 5, 7 and 5 syllables.
Method. Count the lines, then check the rhyme scheme.
- Count the lines. The poem has five lines.5 lines
- Check the rhyme scheme. Lines 1, 2 and 5 end in -out; lines 3 and 4 end in -all.AABBA
- Name the form. Five lines and the scheme AABBA make a limerick.limerick
- Write the answer. a limerick, with five lines and the rhyme scheme AABBA
Check. Five lines with AABBA is the limerick pattern. ✓
Method. The hyphens show the syllables. Count the parts.
- Split the words. The hyphens show where each word breaks into syllables.the / rob-in / sings / loud
- Count the parts. The has one, rob-in has two, and sings and loud have one each.1 + 2 + 1 + 1
- Add them. The total is the number of syllables in the line.5 syllables
- Write the answer. 5
Check. Five syllables is the length of the first and third lines of a traditional haiku. ✓
Method. Write the end word of each line, then match the endings.
- Write the end words. The end words are hill, made, still and shade.hill, made, still, shade
- Match the endings. Hill and still both end in -ill; made and shade both end in -ade.lines 1 and 3 (-ill); lines 2 and 4 (-ade)
- Give the letters in order. Hill is A, made is B, still is A again, shade is B again.A B A B
- Write the answer. ABAB
Check. Lines 1 and 3 match, and lines 2 and 4 match. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a poem without a rhyme is not always free verse, and a poem with a rhyme is not always a limerick. Check the number of lines and the rhyme scheme together.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Read each poem together and ask three questions: "Does it tell a story?" "How many lines does it have?" "Does it rhyme in a pattern?" These three questions identify most forms.
Exercise 9D Practice: forms of poetry
Method. Check whether the poem has a regular rhyme or rhythm.
- Look at the line endings. The endings are bang, pyramids, stage, sure, stones, pot and needs.no pattern
- Name the form. A poem with no regular rhyme or rhythm is free verse.free verse
- Write the answer. free verse
Check. No regular rhyme or rhythm makes free verse. ✓
Method. Compare the endings of the lines.
- List the endings. Bang, pyramids, stage, sure, stones, pot and needs do not match in pairs.no pairs
- Decide. Because the endings do not follow a pattern, the poem has no regular rhyme.no regular rhyme
- Write the answer. No
Check. The endings follow no pattern. ✓
Method. Ask whether the poem tells a story.
- Find the characters. Priya climbs the hill with her kite, made by her dad.Priya, her dad, the kite
- Find the events. The kite flies, and then it comes down.flies, comes down
- Write the answer. narrative poem
Check. It tells a story with characters and events. ✓
Method. Count the groups of four lines.
- Find the groups. Each group of four lines is one stanza.stanza 1, stanza 2, stanza 3
- Count them. There are three groups.3
- Write the answer. 3
Check. Three groups of lines. ✓
Method. Count the lines of the limerick.
- Count the rows. Each row of words is one line.1, 2, 3, 4, 5
- Check the form. A limerick has five lines.5 lines
- Write the answer. 5
Check. Five lines, as a limerick should have. ✓
Method. Compare the spelling of the line endings.
- Write down the last word of each line. Rhyme depends on the spelling of the ending.1: about, 2: out, 3: ball, 4: wall, 5: shout
- Match the endings by their spelling. Lines whose endings are spelt the same way rhyme.lines 1 and 2 and 5 end in -out (about, out, shout); lines 3 and 4 end in -all (ball, wall)
- Give each new ending a new letter. Use A for the first ending, B for the next new ending, and so on.AABBA
- Write the answer. AABBA
Check. Lines with the same ending spelling share a letter. ✓
Method. Look at the rhyme scheme and the length of each line.
- Find the A lines. Lines 1, 2 and 5 all end in -out, so they are the A lines.lines 1, 2, 5
- Compare the lengths. These are the longer lines; lines 3 and 4 are shorter.lines 3 and 4 are shorter
- Write the answer. lines 1, 2 and 5
Check. The A lines are the longer lines of a limerick. ✓
Method. Count the lines of the haiku.
- Count the rows. Each row of words is one line.Cold winter morning / the river wears a white coat / the robin sings loud
- Count them. There are three lines.3 lines
- Write the answer. 3
Check. A haiku has three lines. ✓
Method. Count the parts that the hyphens show.
- Split the words. Cold / win-ter / morn-ing.cold / win-ter / morn-ing
- Count the parts. One, then two, then two.1 + 2 + 2 = 5
- Write the answer. 5
Check. The first line has five syllables. ✓
Method. Count the parts that the hyphens show.
- Split the words. the / riv-er / wears / a / white / coat.the / riv-er / wears / a / white / coat
- Count the parts. One, two, one, one, one and one.1 + 2 + 1 + 1 + 1 + 1 = 7
- Write the answer. 7
Check. The second line has seven syllables. ✓
Method. Match the form to the task.
- Count the lines needed. Five lines is the length of a limerick.five lines
- Match the rhyme. A limerick uses the scheme AABBA, which suits a funny story.AABBA, funny
- Write the answer. a limerick, because it has five lines with the scheme AABBA
Check. Five lines and AABBA make a limerick. ✓
Reading a poem aloud with expression
Expression is how you say the words. It includes the tone (the mood, such as calm, excited or worried), the volume (how loud or quiet), the pace (how fast or slow) and the pause (a short stop). Punctuation gives you most of these clues:
| Mark | What it tells the reader to do | Example from Storm Warning |
|---|---|---|
| ! | say it with energy, or with a shout | Listen! Thunder roars. |
| ? | let your voice rise at the end | Is it over? |
| . | stop briefly, and let the idea land | Wait. The lightning stops. |
| ... | trail off, or hold a longer silence | and the wind pulls at the gate... |
| , | take a short breath, and keep going | The rain hammers on the windows, |
Poem: Storm Warning
Listen! Thunder roars.
The rain hammers on the windows,
and the wind pulls at the gate...
Wait. The lightning stops.
Is it over?
No! Crack! It flashes again.
Key ideas
- Punctuation tells you when to shout, pause, rise in tone or trail off.
- An exclamation mark shows energy or a shout; a question mark makes the voice rise.
- A full stop is a short stop; three dots mean a longer pause or a trailing voice.
- Choose one tone, one volume and one pace for each line, and say why.
Method. Find the mark, then decide what it means.
- Find the mark. Line 1 is Listen! Thunder roars.Listen!
- Name the mark. A mark that follows a word with a strong feeling is an exclamation mark.exclamation mark
- Decide the expression. It tells the reader to say the line with energy or a shout.energy or a shout
- Write the answer. say it with energy or a shout
Check. The mark shows a strong feeling. ✓
Method. Look at the mark at the end of the line.
- Find the line. Line 5 is Is it over?Is it over?
- Name the mark. A question mark shows that a question is being asked.question mark
- Decide the expression. The voice rises at the end of a question.voice rises
- Write the answer. let the voice rise at the end
Check. A question is read with a rising voice. ✓
Method. Find the line that ends with a comma.
- Find the comma. Line 2 ends with windows, and line 3 ends with gate...windows,
- Check line 3. Line 3 ends with three dots, not a comma.gate... is not a comma
- Decide. Line 2 is the line that ends with a comma; a comma means a short breath.line 2; take a short breath
- Write the answer. line 2; take a short breath
Check. The comma is at the end of line 2. ✓
Watch out. Read the question carefully: the answer is the line with a comma, which is line 2.
Watch out
Watch out: a full stop is a stop, not a rest for breath. Read Wait. The lightning stops. with a pause, then keep the tension going into the next line.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask your child to read the poem twice: once quietly, to find the marks, and once aloud, to use them. Talk about the choices, not about one correct way to read the poem.
Exercise 9E Practice: reading with expression
Method. Read the first word of line 1 and the mark after it.
- Read line 1. Line 1 is Listen! Thunder roars.Listen!
- Name the mark after the first word. The mark after Listen is an exclamation mark. The line itself ends with a full stop.exclamation mark
- Write the answer. exclamation mark
Check. The exclamation mark is after Listen. ✓
Watch out. Look at the mark after the word, not only the mark at the end of the line.
Method. Find the line with a question mark at the end.
- Read each line. Only line 5, Is it over?, ends with a question mark.Is it over?
- Count the line. Is it over? is the fifth line.line 5
- Write the answer. line 5
Check. Line 5 is the fifth line. ✓
Method. Find the line that ends with the three dots.
- Read the lines. Line 3 ends with gate..., which has three dots.gate...
- Check the others. No other line ends with three dots.only line 3
- Write the answer. line 3
Check. Only line 3 ends with three dots. ✓
Method. Count the single full stops, and leave out the three dots.
- Find the full stops. Full stops are after Roars, Wait, stops and again.Roars. / Wait. / stops. / again.
- Count them. There is one in line 1, two in line 4 and one in line 6.1 + 2 + 1
- Write the answer. 4
Check. Four full stops. ✓
Watch out. Three dots (...) are not full stops.
Method. Think about what dots mean at the end of a line.
- Look at the mark. Three dots at the end of a line show that the voice trails off.trail off
- Decide the effect. The pause builds suspense before the next line.builds suspense
- Write the answer. trail off and pause, which builds suspense
Check. The dots slow the voice and build suspense. ✓
Method. Find the fact that the text states.
- Find the words that answer the question. Scan the text for the detail the question asks about.The rain hammers on the windows
- Check that the fact is stated, not guessed. Hammers is a loud, heavy action, so the rain sounds harsh.hammers
- Write the answer. hammers
Check. The text states this fact. ✓
Method. Find the fact that the text states.
- Find the words that answer the question. Scan the text for the detail the question asks about.No! Crack! It flashes again.
- Check that the fact is stated, not guessed. Crack is a short, sharp word, and it is read with a sudden voice.Crack
- Write the answer. Crack
Check. The text states this fact. ✓
Method. Choose a line that is quiet or tense, and give a reason.
- Look at the lines. Line 4 is Wait. The lightning stops; line 5 is Is it over?lines 4 and 5 are tense
- Give the reason. A quiet line makes the reader lean in, and the full stop asks for a pause.a quiet, tense pause
- Write the answer. line 4, because Wait is a quiet warning that asks for a pause
Check. The reason comes from the punctuation or the meaning. ✓
Method. Find the mark after the first word of line 1.
- Read line 1. Listen! Thunder roars. The mark after Listen is !Listen!
- Write the answer. exclamation mark
Check. Line 1 has an exclamation mark after Listen. ✓
Method. Find the mark at the end of line 5.
- Read line 5. Is it over? ends with a question mark.Is it over?
- Write the answer. question mark
Check. Line 5 is a question. ✓
Method. Find the mark at the end of line 6.
- Read line 6. No! Crack! It flashes again. ends with a full stop.again.
- Write the answer. full stop
Check. Line 6 ends with a full stop. ✓
Method. Use the marks and the words to plan the delivery.
- Choose the tone. The words No! and Crack! show shock and alarm.alarmed
- Choose the volume and pace. Two exclamation marks suggest a loud voice and a quick pace.loud and quick
- Write the answer. alarmed tone, loud volume and quick pace
Check. The plan uses the marks and the words. ✓
Method. Look at the different marks in the poem.
- List the marks. The poem uses !, ?, full stops, dots and commas.! ? . ... ,
- Explain what each one does. Each mark gives a clue about volume, tone, pace or pause.a clue for each mark
- Write the answer. the marks show when to shout, rise, pause or trail off
Check. Each mark gives a clue to the expression. ✓
Play scripts and performing in role
A play script is written to be performed. It has a cast list that names the characters, a speaker (the name in capitals before each line), the words the character says, and stage directions. A stage direction is an instruction in italics or brackets. It is not said aloud; it tells the actors what to do, where to stand or how to say a line.
| Part of the script | What it looks like | What it tells you |
|---|---|---|
| cast list | the names of the characters, with short descriptions | who is in the play |
| speaker | a name in capitals, such as SAM | who says the line |
| expression | words in brackets after a name, such as (nervously) | how to say the line |
| stage direction | an instruction in italics and brackets | what to do, where to stand, or what happens |
Play: The Storm Lamp
Cast
- NAN (Sam's grandmother)
- SAM (a boy, aged nine)
- MR PATEL (the next-door neighbour)
(A kitchen at night. Rain taps on the window. The lights flicker, then go out. SAM holds a torch. NAN stirs a pan on the stove.)
SAM (nervously): Nan, the lights have gone out!
NAN (calmly): Don't panic, Sam. Storms always do this.
(She lights a candle and puts it on the table.)
SAM (whispering): Is anybody else in the house?
NAN (smiling): Only us. And Mr Patel next door, who owns a torch as big as a lamp post.
SAM (loudly and excitedly): Let's ask him to bring it over!
NAN (firmly): Sam, please stay in the kitchen while I check the back door.
(She leaves the room. SAM sits at the table and drums his fingers.)
SAM (to himself): One, two, three, four, five. Hurry up, Nan.
(Three sharp knocks sound at the front door. SAM jumps.)
MR PATEL (cheerfully, from outside): It's only me! I've brought my lamp.
SAM (relieved): Come in, Mr Patel!
(MR PATEL enters, dripping wet. He holds a lamp that glows warm and gold.)
MR PATEL (puffing): Phew! The wind nearly blew me back down the path.
NAN (warmly, returning): Thank you for coming over. Sit by the stove and dry off.
Key ideas
- A play script has a cast list, speakers, words and stage directions.
- A stage direction is not said aloud; it tells the actor what to do.
- The expression in brackets after a speaker's name tells you how to say the line.
- To perform in role, think about what your character wants and feels.
Method. Find the second speaker, then read the expression in brackets.
- Find the first line. The first line is said by SAM, nervously.SAM (nervously)
- Find the second line. The second line starts with the speaker NAN.NAN
- Read the expression. The words in brackets tell the actor how to say the line.calmly
- Write the answer. NAN, calmly
Check. The second speaker is Nan, and she speaks calmly. ✓
Method. Read the words in brackets after the speaker's name.
- Find the speaker and the bracket. SAM (whispering) says Is anybody else in the house?SAM (whispering)
- Explain the bracket. The words in brackets are a direction for how to say the line.a direction
- Decide what whispering means. A whisper is very quiet.very quietly
- Write the answer. say the line very quietly, as a whisper
Check. Whispering means the line is said very quietly. ✓
Method. A stage direction tells the actor an action.
- Find the direction. The direction is in italics and brackets, under the stage name.She lights a candle
- Read the action. The actor must light the candle and put it on the table.light, then put
- Check it is not spoken. The direction is not a line for the actor to say.an action, not words
- Write the answer. light a candle and put it on the table
Check. A stage direction describes an action. ✓
Watch out. Do not read a stage direction aloud as if it were the character's words.
Watch out
Watch out: a stage direction is not a line to say. Do not read "She lights a candle" aloud as if the character were speaking it.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Read the script together, with one person taking each part. Let your child choose how Sam or Nan should sound, and ask why. Do not mark the reading; talk about the choices.
Exercise 9F Practice: play scripts and performing in role
Method. Read the cast list at the top of the script.
- Find the cast list. The cast list comes before the first line of the play.NAN, SAM, MR PATEL
- Name each character. Nan is Sam's grandmother; Sam is a boy aged nine; Mr Patel is the next-door neighbour.three characters
- Write the answer. NAN, SAM and MR PATEL
Check. The cast list has three characters. ✓
Method. Find the fact that the text states.
- Find the words that answer the question. Scan the text for the detail the question asks about.SAM (nervously): Nan, the lights have gone out!
- Check that the fact is stated, not guessed. The first line of the script is spoken by SAM.SAM
- Write the answer. SAM
Check. The text states this fact. ✓
Method. Find the fact that the text states.
- Find the words that answer the question. Scan the text for the detail the question asks about.MR PATEL (cheerfully, from outside)
- Check that the fact is stated, not guessed. The bracket after MR PATEL gives the expression for that line.cheerfully
- Write the answer. cheerfully
Check. The text states this fact. ✓
Method. Find the fact that the text states.
- Find the words that answer the question. Scan the text for the detail the question asks about.MR PATEL enters, dripping wet
- Check that the fact is stated, not guessed. The stage direction describes him as he comes in.dripping wet
- Write the answer. dripping wet
Check. The text states this fact. ✓
Method. Read the bracket and decide what it means.
- Find the bracket. MR PATEL (puffing) is in brackets before the line.MR PATEL (puffing)
- Decide the expression. Puffing means breathing hard, so the actor says the line out of breath.out of breath
- Write the answer. it should be said out of breath, as if he has struggled in from the wind
Check. Puffing is the expression for the line. ✓
Method. Find the fact that the text states.
- Find the words that answer the question. Scan the text for the detail the question asks about.SAM sits at the table and drums his fingers
- Check that the fact is stated, not guessed. The stage direction after NAN leaves says what SAM does.sits at the table and drums his fingers
- Write the answer. sits at the table and drums his fingers
Check. The text states this fact. ✓
Method. Find the fact that the text states.
- Find the words that answer the question. Scan the text for the detail the question asks about.NAN (calmly): Don't panic, Sam.
- Check that the fact is stated, not guessed. The bracket before the words gives the expression.calmly
- Write the answer. calmly
Check. The text states this fact. ✓
Method. Find the fact that the text states.
- Find the words that answer the question. Scan the text for the detail the question asks about.glows warm and gold
- Check that the fact is stated, not guessed. The stage direction says the lamp glows warm and gold.gold
- Write the answer. gold
Check. The text states this fact. ✓
Method. Use the expression and the meaning of the line.
- Choose the tone. The bracket says nervously, so the tone is anxious.anxious
- Choose the stress. Out is the important word, because it is what has happened.stress out
- Write the answer. tone anxious; stress out, because the lights going out is the problem
Check. The tone and the stress come from the line and its bracket. ✓
Method. Think about what Nan is like, and what Sam is worried about.
- Think about Nan. Nan is calm and firm, and she is protecting Sam.calm and firm
- Write the line. The line answers Sam's worry about the lights.It is only the storm, love.
- Write the answer. It is only the storm, love. The lamp will be on soon.
Check. The line is calm and in role. ✓
Watch out. In role means speaking as the character would, not as you would.
Method. Read the bracket, then the words and the direction after the line.
- Find the expression. NAN (firmly): Sam, please stay in the kitchen while I check the back door.NAN (firmly): Sam, please stay in the kitchen
- Explain the reason. She wants Sam to be safe while she checks the back door, so she speaks with a firm voice.she wants Sam to be safe
- Write the answer. she is serious, because she wants Sam to stay safe
Check. The word firmly shows she means what she says. ✓
Chapter summary
| Skill | Method |
|---|---|
| Rhyme scheme | Give each line ending a letter from its spelling: A for the first, B for the next new ending. ABAB, AABB, AABBA. |
| Stanza | A group of lines in a poem, often separated by a space. Count the groups to find the number of stanzas. |
| Strong beat | A bold word in this book. Count the bold words to find the beats in a line; syllables are a different count. |
| Simile | A comparison using like or as, such as like a grey sheet. |
| Metaphor | A comparison that says one thing is another, with no like or as. |
| Personification | A human action or body part given to something that is not human, such as the sun yawns. |
| Word choice and structure | The exact words, and how the lines and stanzas are arranged, shape the effect on the reader. |
| Forms of poetry | Free verse (no regular rhyme); narrative (tells a story); limerick (five lines, AABBA); haiku (three lines, 5-7-5). |
| Expression | Tone, volume, pace and pause. Punctuation gives the clues: ! shouts, ? rises, . and ... pause. |
| Play script | A cast list, speakers in capitals, expression in brackets and stage directions in italics. Stage directions are not spoken. |
| Perform in role | Think about the character's wants and feelings, and say the lines as that character would. |
Can you…?
- I can work out the rhyme scheme of a stanza from the spelling of its line endings
- I can count the strong beats in a line, and find a line that breaks the pattern
- I can name a simile, a metaphor or personification, and explain its effect
- I can explain how a word choice or a single-line stanza affects the reader
- I can name a free verse poem, a narrative poem, a limerick and a haiku from their features
- I can count the syllables of a haiku line that is split by hyphens
- I can read a poem aloud with expression, using its punctuation
- I can read a play script, using the speakers, expression and stage directions
- I can perform a short part in role, and say why my character speaks as I do
Key terms
- stanza
- a group of lines in a poem, often separated by a space from the next group
- verse
- a group of lines in a poem; in this book, a stanza
- rhyme
- line endings spelt in the same way, such as slow and grow
- rhyme scheme
- the letters that show the rhyme pattern of a stanza, such as ABAB
- rhythm
- the pattern of strong and weak beats in a line
- strong beat
- a part of a line that is said more firmly; in this book, a bold word
- simile
- a comparison using like or as, such as like a grey sheet
- metaphor
- a comparison that says one thing is another, with no like or as
- personification
- giving a human action or body part to something that is not human
- imagery
- words that create a picture in the reader's mind
- free verse
- a poem with no regular rhyme or rhythm
- narrative poem
- a poem that tells a story, with characters and events in order
- limerick
- a funny poem of five lines with the rhyme scheme AABBA
- haiku
- a short poem of three lines, traditionally built on 5, 7 and 5 syllables
- expression
- the way you say words: tone, volume, pace and pause
- tone
- the mood of the voice, such as calm, excited or worried
- cast list
- the list of characters at the start of a play script
- speaker
- the character who says a line, named in capitals before the line
- stage direction
- an instruction in italics or brackets that is not spoken aloud, telling the actor what to do
- perform in role
- to act as a character, speaking and moving as that character would
Exercise 9Z Check-up
Method. Test each choice against the line and the poem.
- Read the line with the word or figure in it. Decide what the line needs.
- Test the choice in the line. The sun cannot yawn, so the word gives it a human action.personification fits
- Reject the other choices. A simile would need like or as, and a metaphor would say the sun is something else.simile and metaphor do not fit
- Write the answer. personification
Check. personification fits the line. ✓
Method. Compare the spelling of the line endings.
- Write down the last word of each line. Rhyme depends on the spelling of the ending.1: bright, 2: hive, 3: light, 4: thrive
- Match the endings by their spelling. Lines whose endings are spelt the same way rhyme.lines 1 and 3 end in -ight (bright, light); lines 2 and 4 end in -ive (hive, thrive)
- Give each new ending a new letter. Use A for the first ending, B for the next new ending, and so on.ABAB
- Write the answer. ABAB
Check. Lines with the same ending spelling share a letter. ✓
Method. Count the bold words in the line.
- Find the bold words. Each bold word is one strong beat.night, rattles, down, hill
- Count the bold words. Count one for each bold word, and do not count the words that are not bold.4 bold words
- Write the answer. 4
Check. The line has 4 strong beats. ✓
Method. Match the number of lines and the rhyme scheme to a form.
- Count the lines. Five lines match a limerick.5 lines
- Check the rhyme scheme. AABBA is the limerick scheme.AABBA
- Write the answer. limerick
Check. Five lines with AABBA make a limerick. ✓
Method. Think about the form that has no set pattern.
- Recall the definition. Free verse has no regular rhyme or rhythm.no regular pattern
- Name the form. A poem with no regular pattern is free verse.free verse
- Write the answer. free verse
Check. Free verse follows no regular pattern. ✓
Method. A cast list comes at the start of a script.
- Find the cast list. The cast list names the characters.the characters
- Explain what it is. It is a list of the characters, often with a short description.a list of characters
- Write the answer. a list of the characters in the play
Check. The cast list names the characters. ✓
Method. Think about what a direction is for.
- Find what it describes. A stage direction is in italics or brackets.italics or brackets
- Say what it tells the actor. It describes what to do, and it is not spoken aloud.an action, not words
- Write the answer. it tells the actor what to do and is not said aloud
Check. Stage directions guide the actor. ✓
Method. Think about what a hammer does.
- Think about the action. A hammer makes a loud, heavy knock.loud, heavy
- Connect it to the rain. The rain seems loud and strong because it hits the windows like a hammer.loud and strong
- Write the answer. hammers is a loud, heavy action, so the rain sounds harsh
Check. The word creates a sharp picture. ✓
Method. Use the exclamation mark and the words of the line.
- Read the punctuation. Listen! has an exclamation mark, so the line needs energy.Listen!
- Choose the delivery. A loud, quick reading suits a thunder warning.loud, quick
- Write the answer. tone exciting; volume loud; pace quick
Check. The plan uses the punctuation. ✓
Method. Find a bracket in the script and explain what it does.
- Find an example. SAM (relieved) is a direction for how to say the line.SAM (relieved)
- Explain the help. It tells the actor to speak with a feeling of relief.with relief
- Write the answer. SAM (relieved) tells the actor to say the line with relief
Check. The bracket guides the voice. ✓
Total 19 marks. Allow about 19 minutes.
Exercise 9X Practice test questions
Method. Check for like or as, then check whether one thing is said to be another.
- Check for like or as. The line has no like or as.no like or as
- Check the comparison. The moon is said to be a coin, so one thing is another.moon = coin
- Write the answer. metaphor
Check. A metaphor says one thing is another. ✓
Method. Write the end word of each line, then match the spelling of the endings.
- Write the end words. The end words are in, run, done and one.in, run, done, one
- Match the endings. Done and one both end in -one, so lines 3 and 4 match.lines 3 and 4 (-one)
- Give the letters in order. In is A, run is B, done is C, one is C again.A B C C
- Write the answer. ABCC
Check. Lines 3 and 4 share the ending -one. ✓
Method. Count the bold words.
- Find the bold words. Mum, dough, sings and song are in bold.Mum, dough, sings, song
- Count them. Each bold word is one strong beat.4 bold words
- Write the answer. 4
Check. Four bold words make four beats. ✓
Method. Think about the picture the word makes.
- Think about the word. Pounced is a sudden, quick action.sudden, quick
- Explain the effect. The reader feels the cat move fast, so the moment seems exciting.exciting moment
- Write the answer. a sudden, quick action that makes the moment exciting
Check. The word creates a quick picture. ✓
Method. Find like or as, then name the two things compared.
- Find as. The simile starts with as, and compares two things.as bright as the morning sun
- Name the two things. The smile is compared with the morning sun.smile and sun
- Write the answer. as bright as the morning sun; it compares his smile with the sun
Check. The comparison uses as. ✓
Method. Count the parts that the hyphens show.
- Split the words. moon / o-ver / the / pond.moon / o-ver / the / pond
- Count the parts. One, two, one and one.1 + 2 + 1 + 1 = 5
- Write the answer. 5
Check. The line has five syllables. ✓
Method. Find the subject of the direction.
- Find the action. Hides behind the curtain is an action.hides
- Name the actor. Mia is the person who hides.Mia
- Write the answer. Mia
Check. Mia is the character who hides. ✓
Method. Use the exclamation marks to plan the delivery.
- Read the marks. Each line ends with an exclamation mark, so the voice needs energy.Stop! / Listen!
- Choose the delivery. Urgent tone, loud volume and quick pace match a warning.urgent, loud, quick
- Write the answer. tone urgent; volume loud; pace quick, because of the exclamation marks
Check. The plan uses the marks. ✓
Method. Write two rhyming pairs, and check the spelling of each ending.
- Write the first pair. Street and feet both end in -eet.street, feet: -eet
- Write the second pair. Book and brook both end in -ook.book, brook: -ook
- Write the answer. street and feet (AA), book and brook (BB)
Check. Each pair ends in the same spelling. ✓
Method. Name the figure, then explain the effect.
- Name the figure. Yawns and stretches are human actions given to the sun.personification
- Explain the effect. The sun seems sleepy, so the morning feels slow, calm and welcoming to the reader.sleepy, calm morning
- Write the answer. personification, because the sun yawns and stretches, which makes the morning seem sleepy and calm
Check. The human actions give the sun a sleepy character. ✓