Semi-colons, colons, dashes, bullet points and hyphens
By the end of this chapter you will be able to
- Join two closely related sentences with a semi-colon, and start the second clause with a small letter
- Use a colon after a complete sentence to introduce a list
- Use a dash, with a space either side, to mark a boundary between two clauses
- Punctuate a bulleted list consistently
- Use a hyphen to show what goes with what, and to avoid a misreading
You should already know
- Full stops, commas and sentences (Year 4 punctuation)
- Direct speech and its punctuation (Chapter 9 of this book, and Year 4 Chapter 5)
Where this leads
- Brackets, dashes and commas for parenthesis (Chapter 9 of this book)
National Curriculum for England, Key Stage 2 English, Year 6. Content: Use a semi-colon, colon or dash to mark the boundary between two independent clauses (Y5-6 punctuation), Use a colon to introduce a list or an explanation (Y5-6 punctuation), Punctuate bullet points consistently, as fragments or as complete sentences (Y5-6 punctuation), Use a hyphen to avoid ambiguity, e.g. re-cover and recover, and in compound adjectives (Y5-6 punctuation).
Exercise P Do you remember?
Method. A statement ends with a full stop.
- Think about the sentence type. A statement tells the reader something.statement
- Choose the mark. A full stop ends a statement..
- Write the answer. .
Check. A full stop ends a statement. ✓
Method. Every sentence begins with a capital letter.
- Find the first word. The is the first word of the sentence.the
- Capitalise it. The first word of a sentence starts with a capital.The
- Write the answer. The
Check. The starts with a capital. ✓
Method. An independent clause has a subject and a verb, and can stand alone.
- Find the first clause. She was tired has a subject and a verb.She was tired
- Write the first two words. The first two words are She was.She was
- Write the answer. She was
Check. She was tired can stand alone. ✓
Method. Child has an irregular plural.
- Find the noun. Child is the noun.child
- Write the plural. The plural of child is children.children
- Write the answer. children
Check. children is the plural of child. ✓
Method. A short line that joins words is a hyphen.
- Think about the meaning. A short line that joins two words is a hyphen.hyphen
- Write the answer. hyphen
Check. hyphen is the term. ✓
The semi-colon between two independent clauses
A semi-colon (;) joins two independent clauses, which could each stand alone as a sentence. Use it when the two ideas are closely related. The second clause starts with a small letter after the semi-colon, unless it is a name or a proper noun.
Two sentences and one semi-colon
| Two sentences | Joined with a semi-colon |
|---|---|
| It rained all day. The match was cancelled. | It rained all day; the match was cancelled. |
| The shop was closed. We walked home instead. | The shop was closed; we walked home instead. |
| The bell rang. The children ran into the hall. | The bell rang; the children ran into the hall. |
Key ideas
- A semi-colon joins two closely related independent clauses.
- Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.
- The second clause starts with a small letter.
Method. Check that both parts could stand alone, then join them with a semi-colon.
- Check the first clause. The shop was closed could stand alone.The shop was closed
- Check the second clause. We walked home instead could stand alone.We walked home instead
- Join them. Use a semi-colon, and a small letter for the second clause.The shop was closed; we walked home instead.
- Write the answer. The shop was closed; we walked home instead.
Check. A semi-colon joins two independent clauses. ✓
Method. Join two related clauses with a semi-colon.
- Check the clauses. Both clauses are complete.The bell rang / the children ran
- Join them. Use a semi-colon before the second clause.The bell rang; the children ran into the hall.
- Write the answer. The bell rang; the children ran into the hall.
Check. A semi-colon links the bell and the running. ✓
Method. Replace the full stop with a semi-colon, and make the next word a small letter.
- Find the full stop. The full stop between the two sentences is replaced.the bridge is old.
- Use the semi-colon. The semi-colon joins the closely related clauses.The bridge is old; it has been repaired many times.
- Write the answer. The bridge is old; it has been repaired many times.
Check. The semi-colon replaces the full stop. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a semi-colon is not a comma. Do not join two clauses with only a comma, which is called a comma splice.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask your child to read two joined sentences aloud, and to pause for the semi-colon. Ask whether the two ideas are closely linked.
Exercise 8A Practice: semi-colons
Method. Keep both clauses, and join them with a semi-colon, not a full stop.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.It rained all day / The match was cancelled
- Join them with a semi-colon. Use a semi-colon between two closely related clauses. The second clause starts with a small letter.It rained all day; the match was cancelled.
- Write the answer. It rained all day; the match was cancelled.
Check. The semi-colon joins two independent clauses. ✓
Watch out. Do not join two clauses with only a comma. Use a semi-colon, a dash, or a full stop.
Method. Keep both clauses, and join them with a semi-colon, not a full stop.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.The shop was closed / We walked home instead
- Join them with a semi-colon. Use a semi-colon between two closely related clauses. The second clause starts with a small letter.The shop was closed; we walked home instead.
- Write the answer. The shop was closed; we walked home instead.
Check. The semi-colon joins two independent clauses. ✓
Watch out. Do not join two clauses with only a comma. Use a semi-colon, a dash, or a full stop.
Method. Keep both clauses, and join them with a semi-colon, not a full stop.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.The bell rang / The children ran into the hall
- Join them with a semi-colon. Use a semi-colon between two closely related clauses. The second clause starts with a small letter.The bell rang; the children ran into the hall.
- Write the answer. The bell rang; the children ran into the hall.
Check. The semi-colon joins two independent clauses. ✓
Watch out. Do not join two clauses with only a comma. Use a semi-colon, a dash, or a full stop.
Method. Keep both clauses, and join them with a semi-colon, not a full stop.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.She finished the puzzle / Her brother was still searching for the last piece
- Join them with a semi-colon. Use a semi-colon between two closely related clauses. The second clause starts with a small letter.She finished the puzzle; her brother was still searching for the last piece.
- Write the answer. She finished the puzzle; her brother was still searching for the last piece.
Check. The semi-colon joins two independent clauses. ✓
Watch out. Do not join two clauses with only a comma. Use a semi-colon, a dash, or a full stop.
Method. Keep both clauses, and join them with a semi-colon, not a full stop.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.The bridge is old / It has been repaired many times
- Join them with a semi-colon. Use a semi-colon between two closely related clauses. The second clause starts with a small letter.The bridge is old; it has been repaired many times.
- Write the answer. The bridge is old; it has been repaired many times.
Check. The semi-colon joins two independent clauses. ✓
Watch out. Do not join two clauses with only a comma. Use a semi-colon, a dash, or a full stop.
Method. Keep both clauses, and join them with a semi-colon, not a full stop.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.The farmer checked the fields / The sheep were safe in the barn
- Join them with a semi-colon. Use a semi-colon between two closely related clauses. The second clause starts with a small letter.The farmer checked the fields; the sheep were safe in the barn.
- Write the answer. The farmer checked the fields; the sheep were safe in the barn.
Check. The semi-colon joins two independent clauses. ✓
Watch out. Do not join two clauses with only a comma. Use a semi-colon, a dash, or a full stop.
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. A semi-colon joins two independent clauses correctly.It rained all day; the match was cancelled. fits
- Reject the other choices. A comma alone joins them wrongly, which is a comma splice.It rained all day, the match was cancelled. do not fit
- Write the answer. It rained all day; the match was cancelled.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Think about whether each part could stand alone.
- Check the parts. Each part is a complete clause.two complete clauses
- Choose the mark. A semi-colon joins them correctly.semi-colon
- Write the answer. A semi-colon marks a stronger break between two complete ideas than a comma does.
Check. Two independent clauses need a semi-colon. ✓
Method. Replace the comma with a semi-colon.
- Find the wrong mark. The comma joins two clauses wrongly.comma
- Replace it. A semi-colon joins the two clauses. The sky starts with a small letter.The sun set; the sky turned red.
- Write the answer. The sun set; the sky turned red.
Check. The semi-colon joins the clauses. ✓
Method. Write two clauses, then join them with a semi-colon.
- Write the first clause. It was windy on the hill is complete.It was windy on the hill
- Write the second clause. The kites flew high above the field is complete.the kites flew high
- Write the answer. It was windy on the hill; the kites flew high above the field.
Check. The semi-colon joins two clauses. ✓
Method. Find the semi-colon, and name the subject of each clause.
- Find the semi-colon. The semi-colon is after book.book;
- Name the subjects. The subjects are Ella and Sam.Ella, Sam
- Write the answer. Ella, Sam
Check. Ella and Sam are the subjects. ✓
Method. Join the two clauses with a semi-colon.
- Check the clauses. Both clauses are complete.two clauses
- Join them. Use a semi-colon, and a small letter for the second clause.The farmer checked the fields; the sheep were safe in the barn.
- Write the answer. The farmer checked the fields; the sheep were safe in the barn.
Check. The semi-colon joins the clauses. ✓
Method. Write two complete clauses about the trip.
- Write the first clause. We packed our bags early is complete.We packed our bags early
- Write the second clause. The coach left at seven o'clock is complete.the coach left at seven o'clock
- Write the answer. We packed our bags early; the coach left at seven o'clock.
Check. The sentence uses a semi-colon correctly. ✓
Method. Think about whether the sentence has ended.
- Look at the semi-colon. A semi-colon joins two clauses in one sentence.one sentence
- Decide. The second clause continues the sentence, so it starts with a small letter.small letter
- Write the answer. Because the clause is part of the same sentence, so it continues rather than starting a new one
Check. The second clause continues the sentence. ✓
Method. Join the two complete clauses.
- Check the clauses. Both clauses are complete.two clauses
- Join them. Use a semi-colon, then a small letter.The concert was loud; the audience cheered at the end.
- Write the answer. The concert was loud; the audience cheered at the end.
Check. The semi-colon joins the two clauses. ✓
Method. Think about the rule for names.
- Look at the word. Paris is a proper noun, which is a name of a place.Paris
- Apply the rule. Names always start with a capital letter, even after a semi-colon.capital letter
- Write the answer. Because a proper noun, a name, always starts with a capital letter
Check. Names keep their capital letter. ✓
The colon to introduce a list or an explanation
A colon (:) introduces a list or an explanation. Use it after a complete sentence. The words before the colon must make sense on their own.
Colon before a list
| Introduction | The list |
|---|---|
| She packed three things for the trip | a torch, a map and a flask |
| The recipe needs four ingredients | flour, eggs, milk and sugar |
| The club meets on three days | Monday, Wednesday and Friday |
Key ideas
- A colon comes after a complete sentence, and introduces a list or an explanation.
- Do not put a colon straight after a verb, such as is or are.
- List items are separated by commas, with and before the last item.
Method. The colon goes after the introduction, before the list.
- Find the introduction. She packed three things for the trip is a complete sentence.She packed three things for the trip
- Find the list. A torch, a map and a flask is the list.a torch, a map and a flask
- Place the colon. The colon goes between the introduction and the list.:
- Write the answer. :
Check. The colon goes after the complete sentence. ✓
Method. Put a colon after the introduction, then the list.
- Find the introduction. The club meets on three days is a complete sentence.The club meets on three days
- Write the list. Monday, Wednesday and Friday are the three days.Monday, Wednesday and Friday
- Add the colon. A colon is placed after the introduction.The club meets on three days: Monday, Wednesday and Friday.
- Write the answer. The club meets on three days: Monday, Wednesday and Friday.
Check. The colon introduces the three days. ✓
Method. Check where the colon is allowed.
- Check the first sentence. The colon comes straight after needs, which is a verb.needs:
- Check the second sentence. The list follows the verb with no colon.needs flour
- Write the answer. The recipe needs flour, eggs and milk.
Check. No colon is needed after a verb. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: do not put a colon straight after a verb, such as is, are or needs. Put the colon after a complete sentence.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask your child to write a list of things they need for a day out, with a colon after a full sentence that introduces it.
Exercise 8B Practice: colons
Method. Use a colon after the introduction, then write the list.
- Find the introduction. The introduction is a complete sentence before the list.She packed three things for the trip
- Add the colon and the list. A colon introduces the list; items are separated by commas, with and before the last one.She packed three things for the trip: a torch, a map and a flask.
- Write the answer. She packed three things for the trip: a torch, a map and a flask.
Check. The colon introduces the list. ✓
Watch out. Do not put a colon straight after a verb, such as is or are.
Method. Use a colon after the introduction, then write the list.
- Find the introduction. The introduction is a complete sentence before the list.The recipe needs four ingredients
- Add the colon and the list. A colon introduces the list; items are separated by commas, with and before the last one.The recipe needs four ingredients: flour, eggs, milk and sugar.
- Write the answer. The recipe needs four ingredients: flour, eggs, milk and sugar.
Check. The colon introduces the list. ✓
Watch out. Do not put a colon straight after a verb, such as is or are.
Method. Use a colon after the introduction, then write the list.
- Find the introduction. The introduction is a complete sentence before the list.The club meets on three days
- Add the colon and the list. A colon introduces the list; items are separated by commas, with and before the last one.The club meets on three days: Monday, Wednesday and Friday.
- Write the answer. The club meets on three days: Monday, Wednesday and Friday.
Check. The colon introduces the list. ✓
Watch out. Do not put a colon straight after a verb, such as is or are.
Method. Use a colon after the introduction, then write the list.
- Find the introduction. The introduction is a complete sentence before the list.The garden has many plants
- Add the colon and the list. A colon introduces the list; items are separated by commas, with and before the last one.The garden has many plants: roses, tulips and daisies.
- Write the answer. The garden has many plants: roses, tulips and daisies.
Check. The colon introduces the list. ✓
Watch out. Do not put a colon straight after a verb, such as is or are.
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The list follows a verb with no colon in this sentence.The team needs a ball and a net. fits
- Reject the other choices. A colon comes after a complete sentence, not straight after a verb.The team needs: a ball and a net. do not fit
- Write the answer. The team needs a ball and a net.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Write a complete sentence, then the list.
- Write the sentence. The farm has three animals is complete.The farm has three animals
- Add the colon and list. A colon introduces the list of animals.a cow, a goat and a pig
- Write the answer. The farm has three animals: a cow, a goat and a pig.
Check. The colon introduces the list. ✓
Method. Find the complete sentence, then add a colon before the explanation.
- Find the introduction. Mia had one problem she could not solve is a complete sentence.Mia had one problem
- Add the colon. The explanation she had lost her key follows the colon.she had lost her key
- Write the answer. Mia had one problem she could not solve: she had lost her key.
Check. The colon introduces the explanation. ✓
Method. Check where the colon follows a complete sentence.
- Check A. A puts the colon after the verb is.A
- Check B. B puts the colon after a complete sentence.B
- Write the answer. B
Check. B is correct. ✓
Method. Use a colon after the introduction, then write the list.
- Find the introduction. The introduction is a complete sentence before the list.The school day has three parts
- Add the colon and the list. A colon introduces the list; items are separated by commas, with and before the last one.The school day has three parts: registration, lessons and lunch.
- Write the answer. The school day has three parts: registration, lessons and lunch.
Check. The colon introduces the list. ✓
Watch out. Do not put a colon straight after a verb, such as is or are.
Method. Find the words after the colon.
- Find the colon. The colon is after the rule is clear.clear:
- Copy the words after it. The words after the colon explain the rule.every pupil must wear a name badge
- Write the answer. every pupil must wear a name badge
Check. The words after the colon explain the rule. ✓
Method. Think about what the colon introduces.
- Think about the sentence. A complete sentence can stand alone.stand alone
- Think about the list. The list or explanation follows the colon.follows the colon
- Write the answer. The sentence must stand alone before the colon, so that the list or explanation follows it clearly.
Check. The colon follows a complete sentence. ✓
Method. Use a colon after the introduction, then write the list.
- Find the introduction. The introduction is a complete sentence before the list.The garden has many plants
- Add the colon and the list. A colon introduces the list; items are separated by commas, with and before the last one.The garden has many plants: roses, tulips and daisies.
- Write the answer. The garden has many plants: roses, tulips and daisies.
Check. The colon introduces the list. ✓
Watch out. Do not put a colon straight after a verb, such as is or are.
Method. Write a complete sentence, then a colon, then the list.
- Write the sentence. The flag has three colours is complete.The flag has three colours
- Add the colon and list. Red, white and blue are the three colours.red, white and blue
- Write the answer. The flag has three colours: red, white and blue.
Check. The colon introduces the three colours. ✓
The dash to mark a boundary between two clauses
A dash (–) can mark the boundary between two independent clauses, as a semi-colon does. In UK writing, put a space either side of the dash. The second clause starts with a small letter, unless it begins with a name.
Two sentences and one dash
| Two sentences | Joined with a dash |
|---|---|
| She finished the puzzle. Her brother was still searching for the last piece. | She finished the puzzle – her brother was still searching for the last piece. |
| The bridge is old. It has been repaired many times. | The bridge is old – it has been repaired many times. |
Key ideas
- A dash marks a boundary between two independent clauses.
- Put a space either side of the dash.
- The second clause starts with a small letter.
Method. Replace the full stop with a spaced dash, and use a small letter after it.
- Find the full stop. The full stop between the two sentences is replaced.early.
- Use the dash. A spaced dash marks the boundary between the two clauses.–
- Write the sentence. The second clause starts with a small letter.The sun rose early – the field was already full.
- Write the answer. The sun rose early – the field was already full.
Check. The dash marks the boundary. ✓
Method. Check the spaces around the dash.
- Check the first. There are no spaces around the dash.rang–the
- Check the second. There is a space either side of the dash.rang – the
- Write the answer. The bell rang – the children ran.
Check. A spaced dash is used in UK writing. ✓
Method. Join two related clauses with a spaced dash.
- Check the clauses. Both clauses are complete.two clauses
- Join them. Use a spaced dash, then a small letter.The shop was closed – we walked home instead.
- Write the answer. The shop was closed – we walked home instead.
Check. The dash joins the two clauses. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: use a space either side of a dash in UK writing (a – b), and a small letter after it when it joins two clauses.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask your child to read a sentence with a dash aloud, and to pause at the dash. Then ask them to explain the link between the two clauses.
Exercise 8C Practice: dashes
Method. Use a dash to mark the boundary between two clauses.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.It rained all day / The match was cancelled
- Join them with a dash. The dash marks the boundary, and the second clause starts with a small letter.It rained all day – the match was cancelled.
- Write the answer. It rained all day – the match was cancelled.
Check. The dash marks the boundary. ✓
Watch out. Put a space either side of the dash, and use a small letter after it.
Method. Use a dash to mark the boundary between two clauses.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.The shop was closed / We walked home instead
- Join them with a dash. The dash marks the boundary, and the second clause starts with a small letter.The shop was closed – we walked home instead.
- Write the answer. The shop was closed – we walked home instead.
Check. The dash marks the boundary. ✓
Watch out. Put a space either side of the dash, and use a small letter after it.
Method. Use a dash to mark the boundary between two clauses.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.The bell rang / The children ran into the hall
- Join them with a dash. The dash marks the boundary, and the second clause starts with a small letter.The bell rang – the children ran into the hall.
- Write the answer. The bell rang – the children ran into the hall.
Check. The dash marks the boundary. ✓
Watch out. Put a space either side of the dash, and use a small letter after it.
Method. Use a dash to mark the boundary between two clauses.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.She finished the puzzle / Her brother was still searching for the last piece
- Join them with a dash. The dash marks the boundary, and the second clause starts with a small letter.She finished the puzzle – her brother was still searching for the last piece.
- Write the answer. She finished the puzzle – her brother was still searching for the last piece.
Check. The dash marks the boundary. ✓
Watch out. Put a space either side of the dash, and use a small letter after it.
Method. Use a dash to mark the boundary between two clauses.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.The bridge is old / It has been repaired many times
- Join them with a dash. The dash marks the boundary, and the second clause starts with a small letter.The bridge is old – it has been repaired many times.
- Write the answer. The bridge is old – it has been repaired many times.
Check. The dash marks the boundary. ✓
Watch out. Put a space either side of the dash, and use a small letter after it.
Method. Use a dash to mark the boundary between two clauses.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.The farmer checked the fields / The sheep were safe in the barn
- Join them with a dash. The dash marks the boundary, and the second clause starts with a small letter.The farmer checked the fields – the sheep were safe in the barn.
- Write the answer. The farmer checked the fields – the sheep were safe in the barn.
Check. The dash marks the boundary. ✓
Watch out. Put a space either side of the dash, and use a small letter after it.
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. A spaced dash is used in UK writing.The bell rang – the children ran. fits
- Reject the other choices. Two hyphens and no spaces is not the correct form of the dash here.The bell rang--the children ran. do not fit
- Write the answer. The bell rang – the children ran.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Think about what each mark does.
- Look at the dash. A dash marks a boundary between two clauses.boundary
- Look at the semi-colon. A semi-colon marks the same kind of boundary.same boundary
- Write the answer. Both mark the boundary between two complete clauses, so the reader sees that they are linked.
Check. Both marks link two complete clauses. ✓
Method. Replace the full stop with a spaced dash, and use a small letter.
- Find the full stop. The full stop is between two related clauses.match.
- Replace it. A spaced dash joins them, and the crowd starts with a small letter.The team won the match – the crowd cheered.
- Write the answer. The team won the match – the crowd cheered.
Check. The dash has a space either side. ✓
Method. Use a spaced dash between the clauses.
- Check the clauses. Both clauses are complete.two clauses
- Join them. Use a spaced dash, then a small letter.It was late – we ran to the bus.
- Write the answer. It was late – we ran to the bus.
Check. The dash joins the clauses. ✓
Method. Use a spaced dash between the clauses.
- Check the clauses. Both clauses are complete.two clauses
- Join them. Use a spaced dash, then a small letter.The bridge is old – it has been repaired many times.
- Write the answer. The bridge is old – it has been repaired many times.
Check. The dash joins the clauses. ✓
Method. Write two complete clauses, then join them with a spaced dash.
- Write the first clause. The rain stopped is complete.The rain stopped
- Write the second clause. The sun came out over the hill is complete.the sun came out over the hill
- Write the answer. The rain stopped – the sun came out over the hill.
Check. The sentence uses a spaced dash. ✓
Method. Two complete clauses need a boundary mark between them.
- Find the two clauses. The sun rose early and the field was full are two clauses.two clauses
- Name the marks. A semi-colon or a spaced dash marks the boundary.semi-colon or dash
- Write the answer. a semi-colon or a dash
Check. The boundary needs a semi-colon or a dash. ✓
Method. Use a dash to mark the boundary between two clauses.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.It rained all day / The match was cancelled
- Join them with a dash. The dash marks the boundary, and the second clause starts with a small letter.It rained all day – the match was cancelled.
- Write the answer. It rained all day – the match was cancelled.
Check. The dash marks the boundary. ✓
Watch out. Put a space either side of the dash, and use a small letter after it.
Method. Think about whether a new sentence starts.
- Check the boundary. A dash joins two clauses in one sentence.one sentence
- Check the letter. The second clause continues the sentence, so a small letter is used.small letter
- Write the answer. The sentence has not ended, so the second clause continues it with a small letter.
Check. The second clause continues the sentence. ✓
Bullet points: punctuated consistently
Bullet points set out a list. Each bullet must be punctuated consistently. Either every bullet is a fragment (a phrase with no full stop), or every bullet is a complete sentence, starting with a capital letter and ending with a full stop.
Two consistent lists
| Fragments (no full stop) | Complete sentences (full stops) |
|---|---|
| a coat | Bring a coat. |
| sensible shoes | Wear sensible shoes. |
| check the weather | Check the weather. |
Key ideas
- Keep bullet points consistent: all fragments, or all complete sentences.
- Fragments do not need a full stop; complete sentences do.
- Start each complete sentence with a capital letter.
Method. Check each bullet for its capital letter and its full stop.
- Check the first. a coat starts with a small letter, and has no full stop.a coat
- Check the second. Wear sensible shoes has a capital, but no full stop.Wear sensible shoes
- Decide. The bullets mix styles, so the list is not consistent.no
- Write the answer. no
Check. The list mixes styles. ✓
Method. Check whether each bullet has a full stop.
- Check the bullets. None of the three bullets has a full stop.no full stops
- Decide. Every bullet is a fragment, so the list is consistent.fragments
- Write the answer. fragments
Check. Every bullet is a fragment. ✓
Method. A complete sentence has a verb, a capital letter and a full stop.
- Check a coat. A coat is a phrase, with no verb.a coat
- Check Bring a coat. Bring a coat has a verb and starts with a capital.Bring a coat
- Punctuate it. A complete sentence needs a full stop at the end.Bring a coat.
- Write the answer. Bring a coat.
Check. A complete sentence ends with a full stop. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: do not mix fragments and sentences in one list. Choose one style, and use it for every bullet.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask your child to write a list of three things for a picnic, first as fragments, then as complete sentences.
Exercise 8D Practice: bullet points
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Both lists are fragments with no full stops, and separated in the same way.a coat, wear shoes, check the weather fits
- Reject the other choices. The first list uses semi-colons and is not the bullet style of this list.a coat; wear shoes; check the weather do not fit
- Write the answer. a coat, wear shoes, check the weather
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Remove the full stops, and start each fragment with a small letter.
- Find the mixed bullets. The first and third bullets have full stops, but the second does not.mixed
- Make them consistent. Use fragments with no full stops.a coat, sensible shoes, check the weather
- Write the answer. a coat; sensible shoes; check the weather
Check. All three bullets are fragments. ✓
Method. Look for a verb and a capital letter.
- Check the first. A coat has no verb.a coat
- Check the second. Bring a coat has a verb, a capital and a full stop.Bring a coat.
- Write the answer. Bring a coat.
Check. Bring a coat. is a complete sentence. ✓
Method. Each complete sentence starts with a capital and ends with a full stop.
- Find the first bullet. Bring a coat is the first bullet.bring a coat
- Punctuate it. Start with a capital letter and end with a full stop.Bring a coat.
- Write the answer. Bring a coat.
Check. Bring a coat. is punctuated as a sentence. ✓
Method. Think about how the reader reads the list.
- Think about the reader. A reader expects each bullet to look the same.the same
- Think about the page. A consistent list looks clear and neat.clear
- Write the answer. So the reader can see the list clearly, and it looks neat and consistent.
Check. Consistency makes the list clear. ✓
Method. Each bullet is a sentence, with a capital and a full stop.
- Write the first. Wear sensible shoes. is a complete sentence.Wear sensible shoes.
- Write the others. Bring a hat. and Pack some water. are complete sentences too.Bring a hat. Pack some water.
- Write the answer. Wear sensible shoes. Bring a hat. Pack some water.
Check. All three are complete sentences. ✓
Method. Add the full stop to a complete sentence.
- Check the bullet. Wear sensible shoes is a complete sentence without a full stop.Wear sensible shoes
- Correct it. Add the full stop at the end.Wear sensible shoes.
- Write the answer. Wear sensible shoes.
Check. The full stop is added. ✓
Method. Write three fragments, with no full stops.
- Write the first. A blanket is a fragment with no full stop.a blanket
- Write the others. A basket of fruit and some sandwiches have no full stops.a basket of fruit
- Write the answer. a blanket / a basket of fruit / some sandwiches.
Check. All three fragments are consistent. ✓
Method. Compare the two styles.
- Look at a fragment. A fragment is a phrase, such as a coat.a phrase
- Look at a sentence. A sentence bullet is complete, with a verb and a full stop.a verb and a full stop
- Write the answer. A fragment has no verb or no full stop, and a sentence bullet has a verb, a capital letter and a full stop
Check. Fragments and sentences differ. ✓
Hyphens to avoid ambiguity, and in compound adjectives
A hyphen (-) joins words to show what goes with what. It can stop a misreading: re-sign means to sign again, but resign means to leave a job. A hyphen also joins words in compound adjectives, such as well-known or second-hand.
Hyphens that change the meaning
| With a hyphen | Meaning | Without | Meaning |
|---|---|---|---|
| re-sign | to sign again | resign | to leave a job |
| re-cover | to cover again | recover | to get better |
Key ideas
- A hyphen can show that words belong together, and stop a misreading.
- Compound adjectives before a noun often use a hyphen, such as a well-known author.
- Numbers from twenty-one to ninety-nine use a hyphen.
Method. Look at the hyphen and the word.
- Find the hyphen. The hyphen separates re and cover.re-cover
- Read the meaning. re- means again, so re-cover means to cover again.cover again
- Check the other word. Recover, without the hyphen, means to get better.to cover again
- Write the answer. to cover again
Check. re- means again. ✓
Method. Check which word means to leave a job.
- Think about the meaning. To leave a job is resign.leave a job
- Check re-sign. re-sign means to sign again, so it is not the answer.re-sign
- Choose the word. Resign, with no hyphen, means to leave a job.resign
- Write the answer. resign
Check. resign means to leave a job. ✓
Method. Join the words with a hyphen to make one adjective.
- Find the words. Second and hand together describe a used object.second hand
- Join them with a hyphen. The hyphen joins them into one adjective.second-hand
- Write the answer. second-hand
Check. second-hand is a compound adjective. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a hyphen can change the meaning. Check which word you mean before you write re-sign or resign.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask your child to write re-sign and resign on paper, and to say the meaning of each one aloud.
Exercise 8E Practice: hyphens
Method. Think about the meaning, and check whether the hyphen is needed.
- Think about the meaning. The meaning is: a shark that eats people.a shark that eats people
- Check the hyphen. The hyphen shows that the parts belong together, and it stops a misreading.man-eating
- Write the answer. man-eating
Check. man-eating has the meaning given. ✓
Watch out. Hyphens help the reader see what goes with what.
Method. Think about the meaning, and check whether the hyphen is needed.
- Think about the meaning. The meaning is: famous, and known by many people.famous, and known by many people
- Check the hyphen. The hyphen shows that the parts belong together, and it stops a misreading.well-known
- Write the answer. well-known
Check. well-known has the meaning given. ✓
Watch out. Hyphens help the reader see what goes with what.
Method. Think about the meaning, and check whether the hyphen is needed.
- Think about the meaning. The meaning is: not new, used by someone else.not new, used by someone else
- Check the hyphen. The hyphen shows that the parts belong together, and it stops a misreading.second-hand
- Write the answer. second-hand
Check. second-hand has the meaning given. ✓
Watch out. Hyphens help the reader see what goes with what.
Method. Think about the meaning, and check whether the hyphen is needed.
- Think about the meaning. The meaning is: the number 21.the number 21
- Check the hyphen. The hyphen shows that the parts belong together, and it stops a misreading.twenty-one
- Write the answer. twenty-one
Check. twenty-one has the meaning given. ✓
Watch out. Hyphens help the reader see what goes with what.
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. re- means again, so re-cover means to cover again.re-cover fits
- Reject the other choices. Recover, with no hyphen, means to get better.recover do not fit
- Write the answer. re-cover
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Recover means to get better after an illness.recover fits
- Reject the other choices. Re-cover means to cover again, which does not fit.re-cover do not fit
- Write the answer. recover
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Resign means to leave a job.resign fits
- Reject the other choices. Re-sign means to sign again, which is a different meaning.re-sign do not fit
- Write the answer. resign
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Join the two words with a hyphen.
- Find the words. Well and known together describe someone famous.well known
- Join them with a hyphen. The hyphen joins them into one adjective.well-known
- Write the answer. well-known
Check. well-known is a compound adjective. ✓
Method. Compare the two words.
- Look at re-sign. Re-sign means to sign again.sign again
- Look at resign. Resign means to leave a job.leave a job
- Write the answer. It shows the meaning is sign again, not resign, which means to leave a job.
Check. The hyphen avoids a misreading. ✓
Method. Add a hyphen to each compound adjective.
- Find the first compound. Second hand describes books, so it needs a hyphen.second-hand
- Find the second compound. Well known describes the owner, so it needs a hyphen.well-known
- Write the answer. The shop sells second-hand books, and the owner is well-known.
Check. Both compound adjectives have a hyphen. ✓
Method. Use the word with its meaning, to cover again.
- Choose the subject. The old sofa is the subject.The old sofa
- Use re-cover. re-cover means to cover again, so the sentence is clear.a re-cover in new fabric
- Write the answer. The old sofa needs a re-cover in new fabric
Check. re-cover is used clearly. ✓
Method. Use the hyphenated adjective before a noun.
- Choose the noun. Author is the noun.author
- Add the adjective. Well-known describes the author.The well-known author
- Write the answer. The well-known author signed copies of her new book.
Check. well-known is used before a noun. ✓
Method. Look at the hyphen and what it joins.
- Look at the hyphen. The hyphen joins man and eating.man-eating
- Check the meaning. Together they describe the shark as one adjective.one adjective
- Write the answer. It shows that man-eating is one adjective, describing the shark
Check. The hyphen joins the adjective. ✓
Chapter summary
| Skill | Method |
|---|---|
| Semi-colon | Joins two independent clauses that are closely related: It rained; the match was cancelled. |
| Colon | Comes after a complete sentence, and introduces a list or an explanation. |
| Dash | Marks a boundary between two clauses, with a space either side in UK writing. |
| Bullet points | Punctuated consistently: all fragments, or all complete sentences. |
| Hyphen | Shows what goes with what, avoids ambiguity: re-sign and resign; compound adjectives such as well-known. |
Can you…?
- I can join two independent clauses with a semi-colon
- I can use a colon after a complete sentence to introduce a list or an explanation
- I can use a spaced dash to mark a boundary between two clauses
- I can punctuate bullet points consistently
- I can use a hyphen to avoid ambiguity, and in compound adjectives
Key terms
- independent clause
- a group of words with a subject and a verb that can stand alone as a sentence
- semi-colon
- a mark (;) that joins two independent clauses that are closely related
- colon
- a mark (:) that introduces a list or an explanation
- dash
- a mark (–) that marks a boundary between two clauses, with a space either side in UK writing
- bullet point
- a point in a list, shown with a symbol such as a dot
- fragment
- a phrase that is not a complete sentence
- hyphen
- a short mark (-) that joins two words
- compound adjective
- two or more words joined by a hyphen to describe a noun, such as well-known
- ambiguity
- when a sentence can be read in more than one way
Exercise 8Z Check-up
Method. Keep both clauses, and join them with a semi-colon, not a full stop.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.It rained all day / The match was cancelled
- Join them with a semi-colon. Use a semi-colon between two closely related clauses. The second clause starts with a small letter.It rained all day; the match was cancelled.
- Write the answer. It rained all day; the match was cancelled.
Check. The semi-colon joins two independent clauses. ✓
Watch out. Do not join two clauses with only a comma. Use a semi-colon, a dash, or a full stop.
Method. Use a dash to mark the boundary between two clauses.
- Find the two clauses. Each clause could stand alone as a sentence.She finished the puzzle / Her brother was still searching for the last piece
- Join them with a dash. The dash marks the boundary, and the second clause starts with a small letter.She finished the puzzle – her brother was still searching for the last piece.
- Write the answer. She finished the puzzle – her brother was still searching for the last piece.
Check. The dash marks the boundary. ✓
Watch out. Put a space either side of the dash, and use a small letter after it.
Method. Use a colon after the introduction, then write the list.
- Find the introduction. The introduction is a complete sentence before the list.The club meets on three days
- Add the colon and the list. A colon introduces the list; items are separated by commas, with and before the last one.The club meets on three days: Monday, Wednesday and Friday.
- Write the answer. The club meets on three days: Monday, Wednesday and Friday.
Check. The colon introduces the list. ✓
Watch out. Do not put a colon straight after a verb, such as is or are.
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. No colon comes straight after a verb.The team needs a ball and a net. fits
- Reject the other choices. The colon is placed after a verb, which is wrong.The team needs: a ball and a net. do not fit
- Write the answer. The team needs a ball and a net.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Make every bullet a fragment, with no full stops.
- Find the mixed bullets. Some have full stops and some do not.mixed
- Make them fragments. Remove the full stops and keep each phrase.a coat, wear shoes, check the weather
- Write the answer. a coat, wear shoes, check the weather
Check. All bullets are fragments. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Resign means to leave a job.resign fits
- Reject the other choices. re-sign means to sign again.re-sign do not fit
- Write the answer. resign
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Think about the meaning, and check whether the hyphen is needed.
- Think about the meaning. The meaning is: famous, and known by many people.famous, and known by many people
- Check the hyphen. The hyphen shows that the parts belong together, and it stops a misreading.well-known
- Write the answer. well-known
Check. well-known has the meaning given. ✓
Watch out. Hyphens help the reader see what goes with what.
Method. Think about whether each part stands alone.
- Check each part. Each part could stand alone.stand alone
- Join them. The semi-colon links two closely related ideas.related ideas
- Write the answer. Each clause is complete, and the semi-colon joins two closely related ideas.
Check. The semi-colon joins two independent clauses. ✓
Method. Replace the comma with a semi-colon.
- Find the wrong mark. A comma alone joins two clauses wrongly.comma
- Replace it. A semi-colon joins the two clauses correctly.The bridge is old; it has been repaired many times.
- Write the answer. The bridge is old; it has been repaired many times.
Check. The semi-colon joins the clauses. ✓
Method. The colon introduces the explanation after a complete sentence.
- Find the introduction. The rule is simple is a complete sentence.The rule is simple
- Place the mark. A colon introduces the explanation.:
- Write the answer. :
Check. The colon introduces the explanation. ✓
Total 20 marks. Allow about 20 minutes.
Exercise 8X Practice test questions
Method. Join the two clauses with a semi-colon.
- Check the clauses. Both clauses are complete.two clauses
- Join them. Use a semi-colon, then a small letter.The shop was closed; we walked home instead.
- Write the answer. The shop was closed; we walked home instead.
Check. The semi-colon joins the clauses. ✓
Method. Put a colon after the complete sentence, then the list.
- Find the introduction. The club meets on three days is complete.The club meets on three days
- Add the colon. The colon goes before the list.The club meets on three days: Monday, Wednesday and Friday.
- Write the answer. The club meets on three days: Monday, Wednesday and Friday.
Check. The colon introduces the list. ✓
Method. Replace the full stop with a spaced dash.
- Find the full stop. The full stop is between the two sentences.early.
- Use the dash. A spaced dash, then a small letter.The sun rose early – the field was already full.
- Write the answer. The sun rose early – the field was already full.
Check. The dash marks the boundary. ✓
Method. Join the two words with a hyphen.
- Find the words. Second and hand together describe a used object.second hand
- Join them. The hyphen joins them into one adjective.second-hand
- Write the answer. second-hand
Check. second-hand is a compound adjective. ✓
Method. Resign, with no hyphen, means to leave a job.
- Think about the meaning. To leave a job is resign.leave a job
- Check the other word. re-sign means to sign again.re-sign
- Write the answer. resign
Check. resign means to leave a job. ✓
Method. Make every bullet a fragment, with no full stops.
- Remove the full stops. Each bullet becomes a phrase with no full stop.a coat, sensible shoes
- Keep one style. All three bullets are now fragments.bring a coat, wear sensible shoes, check the weather
- Write the answer. bring a coat, wear sensible shoes, check the weather
Check. All bullets are fragments. ✓
Method. Think about what the colon introduces.
- Look at the sentence. A complete sentence can stand alone.stand alone
- Look at the list. The list follows the colon, so it is clear.clear
- Write the answer. The colon follows a complete sentence, so the list that follows is clear.
Check. The colon follows a complete sentence. ✓
Method. Replace the comma with a semi-colon.
- Find the wrong mark. A comma alone joins two clauses wrongly.comma
- Replace it. A semi-colon joins the two clauses correctly.The bridge is old; it has been repaired many times.
- Write the answer. The bridge is old; it has been repaired many times.
Check. The semi-colon joins the clauses. ✓
Method. Compare the two meanings.
- Look at re-cover. Re-cover means to cover again.cover again
- Look at recover. Recover means to get better.get better
- Write the answer. Re-cover means to cover again, but recover means to get better.
Check. The hyphen changes the meaning. ✓
Method. Write two complete clauses, then join them with a semi-colon.
- Write the first clause. The sun was hot is complete.The sun was hot
- Write the second clause. The children built a sandcastle by the sea is complete.the children built a sandcastle
- Write the answer. The sun was hot; the children built a sandcastle by the sea.
Check. The semi-colon joins two clauses. ✓
Method. A spaced dash is used in UK writing.
- Check the spaces. The correct dash has a space either side.rang – the
- Write the answer. The bell rang – the children ran.
Check. A space is on each side of the dash. ✓