Reading poetry and non-fiction, and comparing texts
By the end of this chapter you will be able to
- Name a figurative device in a poem, and explain its effect on the reader
- Count the stanzas and lines of a poem, and plan how to perform it
- Summarise the main idea of a text in fewer words, keeping the key details
- Sort sentences into fact and opinion, and explain the difference
- Compare two texts of different types, and justify a view with a reason
You should already know
- Figurative language, poems and stanzas (Year 4 Chapter 9 of this series)
- Retrieving facts and using evidence from a text (Chapter 10 of this book)
Where this leads
- Writing for purpose, including persuasive and discursive texts (Chapter 12 of this book)
National Curriculum for England, Key Stage 2 English, Year 6. Content: Learn a range of poems by heart, and plan how to perform one with intonation, volume and action (Y5-6 reading, written planning), Explain how figurative language, such as metaphor, simile, personification and alliteration, affects the reader (Y5-6 reading), Summarise the main ideas from more than one paragraph, identifying the key details (Y5-6 reading), Distinguish fact from opinion, and retrieve, record and present information from non-fiction (Y5-6 reading), Compare, contrast and discuss different texts, and justify a view with reasons (Y5-6 reading, speaking through written planning).
Exercise P Do you remember?
Method. A comparison with like or as is a simile.
- Think about the meaning. A comparison using like or as is a simile.like or as
- Name the device. The term is simile.simile
- Write the answer. simile
Check. simile is the term. ✓
Method. A group of lines in a poem is a stanza.
- Think about the meaning. A group of lines in a poem is called a stanza.group of lines
- Name the word. The word is stanza.stanza
- Write the answer. stanza
Check. stanza is the term. ✓
Method. An adverb tells how an action is done.
- Find the verb. Called is the verb.called
- Find the adverb. Softly tells how the owl called.softly
- Write the answer. softly
Check. softly describes the verb. ✓
Method. A short version with the main points is a summary.
- Think about the meaning. A short version with the main points is a summary.main points
- Name the word. The word is summary.summary
- Write the answer. summary
Check. summary is the term. ✓
Method. A fact can be checked.
- Think about the meaning. A statement that can be checked is a fact.can be checked
- Name the word. The word is fact.fact
- Write the answer. fact
Check. fact is the term. ✓
Figurative language in a poem
Figurative language is language that goes beyond the literal meaning. A metaphor says one thing is another. A simile compares with like or as. Personification gives human actions to things. Alliteration repeats the same sound at the start of words close together.
Harvest Moon
The field lies silver, wide and still,
a quiet sea of ripened wheat,
and every stalk bends low to listen
to the owl's slow and patient call.
The farmer's cottage, dark and small,
keeps one lamp burning at its door,
as if the night could not be trusted
to bring the tired fields home.
By dawn the sun will climb the hill
and paint the stubble gold once more,
and the wheat, which whispered all night long,
will rest until the harvest comes.
Key ideas
- A metaphor says one thing is another.
- Personification gives human actions or feelings to something that is not human.
- Alliteration repeats a sound, and can make a line feel smooth or sharp.
Method. Look for a comparison that does not use like or as.
- Find the comparison. The wheat is called a sea, with no like or as.a quiet sea
- Name the device. A comparison without like or as is a metaphor.metaphor
- Explain the effect. The reader pictures the wheat moving like waves, calm and wide.calm and wide
- Write the answer. metaphor
Check. The metaphor makes the wheat seem like the sea. ✓
Method. Look for a human action given to a thing.
- Find the action. Stalks cannot listen, but the poem says they do.listen
- Name the device. Giving a plant a human action is personification.personification
- Explain the effect. The reader feels the field is quietly alert to the owl.quietly alert
- Write the answer. personification
Check. The stalks are given a human action. ✓
Method. Look for the same sound at the start of words close together.
- Find the repeated sound. Slow and sound begin with the same letter.slow, sound
- Name the device. Repeating the same sound at the start of words is alliteration.alliteration
- Explain the effect. The sound makes the line calm and slow, like the owl.calm and slow
- Write the answer. alliteration
Check. The repeated sound is alliteration. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a metaphor does not use like or as. A simile does. Check whether the comparison has like or as before you name it.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask your child to read the first stanza aloud, and to point to one metaphor, one personification and one alliteration.
Exercise 11A Practice: figurative language in a poem
Method. Check whether the comparison uses like or as.
- Find the comparison. The field is said to be silver, with no like or as.silver
- Name the device. A comparison without like or as is a metaphor.metaphor
- Write the answer. metaphor
Check. The comparison has no like or as. ✓
Method. Name the device, then explain what it makes the reader picture or feel.
- Find the words. The poem says: a quiet sea of ripened wheat.a quiet sea of ripened wheat
- Explain the effect. The reader pictures the wheat moving gently and widely, like waves on the sea.the wheat seems wide and calm, like the sea
- Write the answer. the wheat seems wide and calm, like the sea
Check. The effect is explained. ✓
Watch out. Name the device first, such as simile, metaphor, personification or alliteration.
Method. Look for the comparison to a sea.
- Find the line. The line compares the field of wheat to a sea.sea
- Copy the line. The line is a quiet sea of ripened wheat.a quiet sea of ripened wheat
- Write the answer. a quiet sea of ripened wheat
Check. The line is in the first stanza. ✓
Method. Look for a human action given to the wheat.
- Find the action. Whispering is a human action.whispered
- Name the device. The wheat is given a human action, so it is personification.whispered
- Write the answer. whispered
Check. Whispered is personification. ✓
Method. Name the device, then explain what it makes the reader picture or feel.
- Find the words. The poem says: and the wheat, which whispered all night long.and the wheat, which whispered all night long
- Explain the effect. The repeated w sound in wheat, which and whispered creates a soft, quiet effect.alliteration
- Write the answer. alliteration
Check. The effect is explained. ✓
Watch out. Name the device first, such as simile, metaphor, personification or alliteration.
Method. Name the device, then explain what it makes the reader picture or feel.
- Find the words. The poem says: as if the night could not be trusted.as if the night could not be trusted
- Explain the effect. The comparison makes the reader feel the night is uneasy, so the farmer keeps a lamp burning.It makes the night seem uncertain, as if it could not be relied on
- Write the answer. It makes the night seem uncertain, as if it could not be relied on
Check. The effect is explained. ✓
Watch out. Name the device first, such as simile, metaphor, personification or alliteration.
Method. Look for a human word used about a thing or an animal.
- Find the human word. Patient is a human quality, used about the call.patient
- Name the words. The phrase patient call gives the owl a human quality.patient call
- Write the answer. patient call
Check. Patient is a human quality. ✓
Method. Name the device, then explain what it makes the reader picture or feel.
- Find the words. The poem says: keeps one lamp burning at its door.keeps one lamp burning at its door
- Explain the effect. The lamp is a symbol of care, and it shows a light remains in the dark.It shows that a light remains, a sign of care and hope in the dark
- Write the answer. It shows that a light remains, a sign of care and hope in the dark
Check. The effect is explained. ✓
Watch out. Name the device first, such as simile, metaphor, personification or alliteration.
Method. Choose a line, name the device, then explain the effect.
- Choose the line. The line the owl's slow and patient call is chosen.the owl's slow and patient call
- Explain the effect. The repeated sound makes the call sound calm and slow.calm and slow
- Write the answer. The owl's slow and patient call uses alliteration, and it makes the call sound calm.
Check. The device and its effect are named. ✓
Method. Say one thing is another thing.
- Choose the subject. The night sky is the subject.The night sky
- Make the comparison. The sky is said to be a blanket, with no like or as.a velvet blanket
- Write the answer. The night sky is a velvet blanket covering the town.
Check. The comparison has no like or as. ✓
Method. Think about what the devices add together.
- Think about the picture. Devices create images the reader can see.images
- Think about the feeling. They make the reader feel calm.calm
- Write the answer. They create a vivid picture and make the reader feel the calm of the harvest night.
Check. The devices build a picture and a feeling. ✓
Learning and performing a poem
A poem is set out in stanzas, which are groups of lines. To learn a poem by heart, learn one stanza at a time, and check the order of the lines. When you perform a poem, use intonation (the rise and fall of the voice), volume (loud or soft) and action (a movement or gesture).
Harvest Moon
The field lies silver, wide and still,
a quiet sea of ripened wheat,
and every stalk bends low to listen
to the owl's slow and patient call.
The farmer's cottage, dark and small,
keeps one lamp burning at its door,
as if the night could not be trusted
to bring the tired fields home.
By dawn the sun will climb the hill
and paint the stubble gold once more,
and the wheat, which whispered all night long,
will rest until the harvest comes.
Key ideas
- Learn a poem one stanza at a time.
- Intonation, volume and action help the audience hear and feel the poem.
- Plan where to pause, where to speak softly, and where to raise your voice.
Method. Count the groups of lines.
- Find the groups. Each group of four lines is a stanza.four lines each
- Count them. There are three groups of lines.three
- Write the answer. three
Check. The poem has three stanzas. ✓
Method. Look for the word cottage.
- Find the word. The farmer's cottage is in the second stanza.cottage
- Count the stanza. The second group of lines contains cottage.second
- Write the answer. second
Check. The cottage is in the second stanza. ✓
Method. Look for words that describe a quiet or calm feeling.
- Find the words. The owl's call is described as slow and patient.slow and patient
- Plan the voice. A slow, calm line should be spoken softly.speak softly
- Write the answer. slow and patient
Check. The quiet line is spoken softly. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: do not speed up at the end of a stanza. Pause at the end of each stanza, to let the audience take in the picture.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask your child to learn one stanza of the poem, to say it aloud twice, and to plan one pause and one quiet line.
Exercise 11B Practice: learning and performing a poem
Method. Count the lines in the first stanza.
- Count the first stanza. The first stanza has four lines.four lines
- Check the others. The other stanzas also have four lines.four
- Write the answer. four
Check. Each stanza has four lines. ✓
Method. Find the third stanza, then the line about resting.
- Find the stanza. The third stanza is about dawn and the wheat.third stanza
- Copy the line. The line about rest is the last line of the stanza.will rest until the harvest comes
- Write the answer. will rest until the harvest comes
Check. The line says the wheat will rest. ✓
Method. Think about the end of a line.
- Find the line end. The first stanza ends with the owl's call.owl's call
- Plan the pause. A pause here lets the audience picture the quiet.a pause
- Write the answer. Pause after the owl's call, so the audience can hear the quiet.
Check. The pause is planned with a reason. ✓
Method. Think about the mood of the stanza.
- Find the mood. The stanza is dark and small.dark and small
- Choose the volume. A soft voice suits the quiet mood.soft
- Write the answer. Soft, because the stanza describes a lamp and a quiet, dark night.
Check. The volume suits the mood. ✓
Method. Look for a word that describes the mood.
- Find the words. Dark and small describe the cottage.dark, small
- Choose the mood word. Dark suggests a quiet, still night.dark
- Write the answer. dark
Check. Dark suggests quiet. ✓
Method. Link the action to the image.
- Find the image. The sun paints the stubble gold.gold
- Plan the action. A slow lifting movement suggests the sun rising.lift your arms
- Write the answer. Lift your arms slowly, as if the sun is rising.
Check. The action links to the image. ✓
Method. Find the line, and count the stanza.
- Find the line. The line is in the second stanza.second stanza
- Check the number. The second stanza is the middle one.second
- Write the answer. second
Check. The line is in the second stanza. ✓
Method. Think about how memory works in small parts.
- Think about the parts. A stanza is a small part of the poem.small part
- Think about the memory. Small parts are easier to remember than the whole poem.easier to remember
- Write the answer. It breaks the poem into small parts, so each part is easier to remember.
Check. Small parts are easier to learn. ✓
Method. Think about how the voice changes.
- Think about the voice. The voice rises and falls.rises and falls
- Think about the meaning. This shows the feeling and meaning.feeling and meaning
- Write the answer. Intonation shows the feeling and meaning, so the audience hears the poem as the poet meant.
Check. Intonation shows meaning. ✓
Method. Find the word lamp.
- Find the word. Lamp is in the second stanza.lamp
- Copy the line. The line is keeps one lamp burning at its door.keeps one lamp burning at its door
- Write the answer. keeps one lamp burning at its door
Check. The line has the word lamp. ✓
Method. Choose the action and the volume, and link them to the stanza.
- Choose the volume. Soft at the start suits the calm field.soft
- Choose the action. A sweep of the hand suits the field.sweep
- Write the answer. Speak softly at the start, lift the voice on the sea, and sweep one hand across the field.
Check. The plan uses volume and action. ✓
Summarising non-fiction and retrieving facts
A summary gives the main ideas of a text in fewer words. Read the whole text, find the main idea of each paragraph, and combine them. A key detail is a fact that supports a main idea. To retrieve information, find the words that answer your question, and copy only what you need.
How Honey Is Made
1Honey begins as nectar, a sweet liquid that flowers produce. Worker bees visit thousands of flowers to collect it, and each bee carries the nectar back to the hive.
2Inside the hive, the bees pass the nectar from one to another. As they do, they add substances that help to change it into honey.
3Next, the bees spread the liquid across the honeycomb, which is made of six-sided wax cells. They fan their wings to speed up the drying, until the honey is thick enough to store.
4Once it is ready, the bees seal each cell with a thin layer of wax, so that the honey can be kept for later in the year.
Key ideas
- A summary includes the main ideas, and leaves out small details.
- A key detail supports a main idea.
- Record the facts in your own words, and check them against the text.
Method. Read the first paragraph, and find its key idea.
- Read the paragraph. Honey begins as nectar, which bees collect from flowers.nectar
- Find the main idea. The main idea is that honey starts as nectar, from flowers.nectar from flowers
- Write it briefly. Nectar becomes honey, through the work of the bees.nectar becomes honey
- Write the answer. nectar becomes honey
Check. The main idea is about nectar and honey. ✓
Method. Find the detail in paragraph 3.
- Find the detail. Paragraph 3 says the bees fan their wings to speed up the drying.fan their wings
- Copy the detail. The key detail is fan their wings.fan their wings
- Write the answer. fan their wings
Check. The detail is stated in paragraph 3. ✓
Method. Combine the main ideas of the two paragraphs.
- Find the ideas. Paragraph 3 is about drying; paragraph 4 is about sealing.drying, sealing
- Combine them. The bees spread, dry and seal the honey.spread, dry and seal
- Write the summary. Bees spread the nectar, fan it dry, and seal it in wax cells.Bees spread the nectar, fan it dry, and seal it in wax cells.
- Write the answer. Bees spread the nectar, fan it dry, and seal the honey in wax cells
Check. The summary keeps the key ideas. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a summary is not a copy. Use your own words, and leave out the small details that are not key.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask your child to read one paragraph of a non-fiction book, then to tell you its main idea in three words.
Exercise 11C Practice: summarising and retrieving facts
Method. Find the words in the text that answer the question.
- Find the words. The text says: visit thousands of flowers to collect it.visit thousands of flowers to collect it
- Copy the answer. The text states what the bees visit.thousands of flowers
- Write the answer. thousands of flowers
Check. The fact is stated in the text. ✓
Watch out. Copy only the words that answer the question.
Method. Find the words in the text that answer the question.
- Find the words. The text says: six-sided wax cells.six-sided wax cells
- Copy the answer. The text describes the cells as six-sided.six-sided
- Write the answer. six-sided
Check. The fact is stated in the text. ✓
Watch out. Copy only the words that answer the question.
Method. Find the words in the text that answer the question.
- Find the words. The text says: a thin layer of wax.a thin layer of wax
- Copy the answer. The text names the sealing material.a thin layer of wax
- Write the answer. a thin layer of wax
Check. The fact is stated in the text. ✓
Watch out. Copy only the words that answer the question.
Method. Find the words in the text that answer the question.
- Find the words. The text says: the honeycomb, which is made of six-sided wax cells.the honeycomb, which is made of six-sided wax cells
- Copy the answer. The text names the structure.honeycomb
- Write the answer. honeycomb
Check. The fact is stated in the text. ✓
Watch out. Copy only the words that answer the question.
Method. Find the main idea of each paragraph, then combine them in fewer words.
- Find the main idea. Each paragraph has one key idea.paragraph ideas
- Combine the ideas. Write one sentence that covers the key ideas in fewer words.Inside the hive, the bees pass the nectar and change it.
- Write the answer. Inside the hive, the bees pass the nectar and change it.
Check. The summary keeps the key ideas. ✓
Watch out. A summary is shorter than the text, and it uses your own words where you can.
Method. Find the detail, then rewrite it.
- Find the detail. The bees seal each cell with a thin layer of wax.seal each cell
- Rewrite it. The honey is stored safely in sealed wax cells.stored safely
- Write the answer. Bees seal each cell with wax, so the honey can be stored for later.
Check. The key detail is recorded. ✓
Method. Look at the main idea across the paragraphs.
- Look at the title. The title is How Honey Is Made.How Honey Is Made
- Name the main idea. The main idea is the process of making honey.how bees make honey
- Write the answer. how bees make honey
Check. The main idea is the process. ✓
Method. Choose three facts, one from each main idea.
- Choose the facts. Nectar, cells and sealing are three key facts.nectar, cells, sealing
- Write the record. Each fact is a short bullet point.a short bullet
- Write the answer. Nectar is collected from flowers; cells are six-sided; the cells are sealed with wax.
Check. The three facts are correct. ✓
Method. Look for the drying process.
- Find the process. Paragraph 3 describes the drying.drying
- Write the number. Paragraph 3 is the third paragraph.three
- Write the answer. three
Check. Paragraph 3 describes the drying. ✓
Method. Find the main idea, then write it in your own words.
- Find the main idea. Bees collect nectar and carry it back.collect nectar
- Write the summary. Bees collect nectar and carry it to the hive.carry it to the hive
- Write the answer. Bees collect nectar from flowers and carry it back to the hive.
Check. The summary keeps the key idea. ✓
Method. Look for the word that describes the cells.
- Find the cells. The cells are wax cells.wax cells
- Find the description. The cells are six-sided.six-sided
- Write the answer. six-sided
Check. six-sided describes the cells. ✓
Method. Think about the purpose of a summary.
- Think about the purpose. A summary is shorter than the text.shorter
- Think about the content. It keeps the main ideas and key details.main ideas
- Write the answer. The summary keeps only the main ideas and key details, so it is shorter and clear.
Check. A summary keeps the key points. ✓
Distinguishing fact from opinion
A fact can be checked and shown to be true. An opinion is a view or a feeling, which may not be shared by everyone. Words such as should, best, important and in my view often show an opinion.
Why Bees Deserve Our Care (a persuasive article)
1Bees are the most important insects in the world, and everyone should take care of them.
2Some people think bees only make honey, but bees pollinate many crops, which means they help plants to produce fruit and seeds.
3In my view, every school should plant flowers, because a garden full of nectar gives bees a place to feed.
4Some would argue that gardens are only for pleasure. However, a pleasant garden is also a home for bees, and that makes it worth the effort.
Key ideas
- A fact can be checked.
- An opinion shows a view, a feeling, or what should happen.
- Look for words such as should, best, important and in my view.
Method. Ask whether it can be checked.
- Test the sentence. Bees pollinate crops, which can be checked.can be checked
- Decide. A statement that can be checked is a fact.fact
- Write the answer. fact
Check. The sentence is a fact. ✓
Method. Look for a judgement word, such as most important.
- Look for the judgement. Most important is a judgement, not something that can be checked.most important
- Decide. A judgement is an opinion.opinion
- Write the answer. opinion
Check. The sentence is an opinion. ✓
Method. Look for the words that show a view.
- Look for the words. In my view shows that the writer is giving a view.In my view
- Name the words. These words signal an opinion.In my view
- Write the answer. In my view
Check. In my view is an opinion signal. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a fact can be in an opinion text, and an opinion can be in a fact text. Decide each sentence on its own.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask your child to find one sentence in a newspaper that is a fact, and one that is an opinion. Ask them to say how they know.
Exercise 11D Practice: fact or opinion
Method. Ask whether the sentence can be proved true, or whether it shows a feeling or a view.
- Test the sentence. A fact can be checked; an opinion shows a view or a feeling.Honey begins as nectar, a sweet liquid that flowers produce.
- Decide. The statement can be checked against the text or a science book.fact
- Write the answer. fact
Check. The sentence is a fact. ✓
Watch out. Words such as should, best, important and in my view often show an opinion.
Method. Ask whether the sentence can be proved true, or whether it shows a feeling or a view.
- Test the sentence. A fact can be checked; an opinion shows a view or a feeling.Bees pollinate many crops.
- Decide. Pollinating crops is a statement that can be checked.fact
- Write the answer. fact
Check. The sentence is a fact. ✓
Watch out. Words such as should, best, important and in my view often show an opinion.
Method. Ask whether the sentence can be proved true, or whether it shows a feeling or a view.
- Test the sentence. A fact can be checked; an opinion shows a view or a feeling.Bees are the most important insects in the world.
- Decide. Most important is a judgement, so it is an opinion.opinion
- Write the answer. opinion
Check. The sentence is a opinion. ✓
Watch out. Words such as should, best, important and in my view often show an opinion.
Method. Ask whether the sentence can be proved true, or whether it shows a feeling or a view.
- Test the sentence. A fact can be checked; an opinion shows a view or a feeling.Every school should plant flowers.
- Decide. Should shows what someone thinks ought to happen, so it is an opinion.opinion
- Write the answer. opinion
Check. The sentence is a opinion. ✓
Watch out. Words such as should, best, important and in my view often show an opinion.
Method. Ask whether the sentence can be proved true, or whether it shows a feeling or a view.
- Test the sentence. A fact can be checked; an opinion shows a view or a feeling.The bees fan their wings to dry the honey.
- Decide. The statement describes an action that can be checked in the text.fact
- Write the answer. fact
Check. The sentence is a fact. ✓
Watch out. Words such as should, best, important and in my view often show an opinion.
Method. Ask whether the sentence can be proved true, or whether it shows a feeling or a view.
- Test the sentence. A fact can be checked; an opinion shows a view or a feeling.A pleasant garden is worth the effort.
- Decide. Pleasant and worth the effort are judgements, so the sentence is an opinion.opinion
- Write the answer. opinion
Check. The sentence is a opinion. ✓
Watch out. Words such as should, best, important and in my view often show an opinion.
Method. Make one statement that can be checked, and one that shows a view.
- Write the fact. Bees make honey can be checked.Bees make honey
- Write the opinion. Most beautiful is a view.most beautiful
- Write the answer. Fact: bees make honey. Opinion: bees are the most beautiful insects.
Check. One fact and one opinion are labelled. ✓
Method. Look for a word that shows a view.
- Find the word. Argue shows that someone has a view.argue
- Decide. The writer is giving the view of others.a view
- Write the answer. argue
Check. argue shows a view. ✓
Method. Ask whether the sentence can be proved true, or whether it shows a feeling or a view.
- Test the sentence. A fact can be checked; an opinion shows a view or a feeling.The bees seal each cell with a thin layer of wax.
- Decide. Sealing the cells is an action that can be checked in the text.fact
- Write the answer. fact
Check. The sentence is a fact. ✓
Watch out. Words such as should, best, important and in my view often show an opinion.
Method. Think about whether the statement can be checked.
- Test the statement. Can it be checked?checked
- Name the difference. An opinion shows a view.view
- Write the answer. A fact can be checked, but an opinion shows a view or a feeling.
Check. A fact can be checked, an opinion gives a view. ✓
Method. Ask whether the sentence can be proved true, or whether it shows a feeling or a view.
- Test the sentence. A fact can be checked; an opinion shows a view or a feeling.The text has four paragraphs about bees.
- Decide. The number of paragraphs can be counted.fact
- Write the answer. fact
Check. The sentence is a fact. ✓
Watch out. Words such as should, best, important and in my view often show an opinion.
Comparing texts and justifying a view
When you compare texts, look at their purpose, form and language. When you contrast them, say how they are different. To justify a view, give a clear reason, and support it with evidence from the text.
| Text | Form | Purpose | Language |
|---|---|---|---|
| Harvest Moon | a poem in stanzas | to create a mood | figurative language |
| How Honey Is Made | an information text | to inform | facts, with time words |
| Why Bees Deserve Our Care | a persuasive article | to persuade | opinions and should |
Key ideas
- Compare texts by purpose, form and language.
- Justify a view with a reason, and evidence from the text.
- A presentation or debate is planned in writing, with reasons in order.
Method. Look at the kind of text and what it gives the reader.
- Look at the form. It is an information text, with facts.facts
- Name the purpose. Its purpose is to inform the reader about honey.inform
- Write the answer. inform
Check. The purpose is to inform. ✓
Method. Find a feature of persuasion, and link it to the view.
- Find the feature. The article says every school should plant flowers.should plant flowers
- Give the reason. Should and in my view try to persuade the reader to act.to persuade the reader
- Write the answer. It uses opinions and should, which tries to change the reader's mind
Check. The reason is supported by the text. ✓
Method. Compare the language of the two texts.
- Look at the poem. The poem uses metaphor and personification.metaphor
- Look at the information text. The information text uses facts and time words.facts
- Name the contrast. The poem is figurative; the information text is factual.figurative and factual
- Write the answer. the poem uses figurative language, and the information text uses facts
Check. The two texts are contrasted. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a reason must be linked to the view. A view without a reason is not justified.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask your child to choose the text they most enjoyed among three, and to give two reasons for their choice.
Exercise 11E Practice: comparing texts and justifying a view
Method. Look at the form of each text.
- Look at the forms. Harvest Moon is in stanzas, which is a poem.stanzas
- Name the title. The poem is Harvest Moon.Harvest Moon
- Write the answer. Harvest Moon
Check. Harvest Moon is the poem. ✓
Method. Look at what the article wants the reader to do.
- Look at the article. It argues that bees deserve care.deserve care
- Name the purpose. Its purpose is to persuade.persuade
- Write the answer. persuade
Check. The purpose is to persuade. ✓
Method. Think about each text's purpose.
- Look at the poem. The poem creates a mood.a mood
- Look at the information text. The information text informs the reader.informs
- Write the answer. The poem aims to create a calm mood, and the information text aims to inform the reader.
Check. The purposes differ. ✓
Method. Link the reason to a line from the poem.
- Find the evidence. A quiet sea of ripened wheat is a vivid image.a quiet sea
- Give the reason. The image creates a calm mood.calm mood
- Write the answer. The poem uses vivid images, such as a quiet sea of ripened wheat, to make the reader feel calm.
Check. The reason has evidence. ✓
Method. Think about what a science club needs.
- Find the facts. The text gives clear steps and facts.clear steps
- Give the reason. A science club can check the facts.check the facts
- Write the answer. It gives clear facts about how honey is made, which can be checked.
Check. The reason is linked to the text. ✓
Method. Look for a word that shows a feeling.
- Look at the poem. The owl's call is slow and patient.patient
- Name the feeling. Patient shows a calm feeling.patient
- Write the answer. patient
Check. patient is a feeling word in the poem. ✓
Method. Write the point, then the reason.
- Write the point. Every school should plant flowers.Every school should plant flowers
- Write the reason. Bees need nectar from flowers.because bees need nectar
- Write the answer. Every school should plant flowers, because bees need nectar.
Check. The point is supported by a reason. ✓
Method. Look for the text with the most views and judgements.
- Look at the texts. The persuasive article uses should and in my view.should, in my view
- Name the title. The persuasive article is Why Bees Deserve Our Care.Why Bees Deserve Our Care
- Write the answer. Why Bees Deserve Our Care
Check. The article uses the most opinions. ✓
Method. Give one point for each text, in order.
- Point one. The poem creates a mood.the poem
- Points two and three. The information text gives facts, and the article gives a view.facts, view
- Write the answer. 1 the poem creates a mood; 2 the information text gives facts; 3 the article gives a view.
Check. The three points cover the texts. ✓
Method. Give a reason and point to the evidence.
- Choose the text. How Honey Is Made is the most useful.How Honey Is Made
- Give the evidence. It says the bees fan their wings to dry the honey.fan their wings
- Write the answer. How Honey Is Made, because it gives clear facts, such as the bees fan their wings to dry the honey.
Check. The view is justified with evidence. ✓
Chapter summary
| Skill | Method |
|---|---|
| Figurative language | Metaphor (one thing is another), simile (like or as), personification (human action), alliteration (repeated sound). |
| Poems | Learn one stanza at a time; plan intonation, volume and action for performance. |
| Summary | Find the main idea of each paragraph, and combine them in fewer words, with key details. |
| Fact and opinion | A fact can be checked; an opinion shows a view or feeling, often with should or in my view. |
| Comparing texts | Compare form, purpose and language, and justify a view with a reason and evidence. |
Can you…?
- I can name a metaphor, simile, personification or alliteration, and explain its effect
- I can plan how to perform a poem, using intonation, volume and action
- I can summarise the main ideas from more than one paragraph
- I can tell a fact from an opinion, and give a reason
- I can compare two texts and justify a view with a reason
Key terms
- figurative language
- language that goes beyond the literal meaning, such as metaphor or simile
- metaphor
- a comparison that says one thing is another, without like or as
- alliteration
- the repetition of the same sound at the start of words close together
- stanza
- a group of lines in a poem
- intonation
- the rise and fall of the voice when speaking or reading aloud
- summary
- a short version of a text that keeps the main ideas and key details
- fact
- a statement that can be checked and shown to be true
- opinion
- a view or feeling that someone holds, which may not be shared by everyone
Exercise 11Z Check-up
Method. Name the device, then explain what it makes the reader picture or feel.
- Find the words. The poem says: every stalk bends low to listen.every stalk bends low to listen
- Explain the effect. The stalks are given a human action, so the reader sees them as alert.personification
- Write the answer. personification
Check. The effect is explained. ✓
Watch out. Name the device first, such as simile, metaphor, personification or alliteration.
Method. Count the groups of lines.
- Count. The poem has three groups of lines.three groups
- Write the answer. three
Check. The poem has three stanzas. ✓
Method. Find the main idea of each paragraph, then combine them in fewer words.
- Find the main idea. Each paragraph has one key idea.paragraph ideas
- Combine the ideas. Write one sentence that covers the key ideas in fewer words.Bees spread the nectar and fan it until it is thick enough.
- Write the answer. Bees spread the nectar and fan it until it is thick enough.
Check. The summary keeps the key ideas. ✓
Watch out. A summary is shorter than the text, and it uses your own words where you can.
Method. Find the words in the text that answer the question.
- Find the words. The text says: six-sided wax cells.six-sided wax cells
- Copy the answer. The text describes the cells.six-sided
- Write the answer. six-sided
Check. The fact is stated in the text. ✓
Watch out. Copy only the words that answer the question.
Method. Ask whether the sentence can be proved true, or whether it shows a feeling or a view.
- Test the sentence. A fact can be checked; an opinion shows a view or a feeling.Bees pollinate many crops.
- Decide. Pollinating crops is a statement that can be checked.fact
- Write the answer. fact
Check. The sentence is a fact. ✓
Watch out. Words such as should, best, important and in my view often show an opinion.
Method. Ask whether the sentence can be proved true, or whether it shows a feeling or a view.
- Test the sentence. A fact can be checked; an opinion shows a view or a feeling.Every school should plant flowers.
- Decide. Should shows what ought to happen, so it is an opinion.opinion
- Write the answer. opinion
Check. The sentence is a opinion. ✓
Watch out. Words such as should, best, important and in my view often show an opinion.
Method. Name the device, then explain what it makes the reader picture or feel.
- Find the words. The poem says: a quiet sea of ripened wheat.a quiet sea of ripened wheat
- Explain the effect. The field is called a sea, with no like or as.metaphor
- Write the answer. metaphor
Check. The effect is explained. ✓
Watch out. Name the device first, such as simile, metaphor, personification or alliteration.
Method. Look at the purpose of each text.
- Look at the purpose. The text informs the reader about how honey is made.informs
- Write the answer. How Honey Is Made
Check. How Honey Is Made is an information text. ✓
Method. Link a reason to an image.
- Find the image. A quiet sea of ripened wheat.quiet sea
- Give the reason. It creates a calm feeling.calm feeling
- Write the answer. The images, such as a quiet sea of ripened wheat, create a calm feeling.
Check. The reason is supported by an image. ✓
Method. Think about whether a statement can be checked.
- Think about the fact. A fact can be checked.checked
- Think about the opinion. An opinion shows a view.view
- Write the answer. A fact can be checked, but an opinion shows a view or a feeling.
Check. Fact and opinion differ. ✓
Total 15 marks. Allow about 15 minutes.
Exercise 11X Practice test questions
Method. Look for a human action given to a thing.
- Find the action. Stalks cannot listen, but the poem says they do.listen
- Name the device. Giving a plant a human action is personification.personification
- Write the answer. personification
Check. The stalks are given a human action. ✓
Method. Name the device, then explain its effect.
- Name the device. A comparison without like or as is a metaphor.metaphor
- Explain the effect. The reader pictures the wheat as wide and calm.wide and calm
- Write the answer. The metaphor makes the wheat seem wide and calm, like the sea.
Check. The effect is explained. ✓
Method. Look for the same sound at the start of words close together.
- Find the repeated sound. Slow and patient repeat the s sound.slow, sound
- Name the device. Repeating the same sound at the start of words is alliteration.alliteration
- Write the answer. alliteration
Check. The repeated sound is alliteration. ✓
Method. Count the groups of lines.
- Count the groups. Each group of four lines is a stanza.four lines each
- Count them. There are three stanzas.three
- Write the answer. three
Check. The poem has three stanzas. ✓
Method. Find the main idea of the paragraph, and write it briefly.
- Find the main idea. Bees collect nectar and carry it back.collect nectar
- Write the summary. Bees collect nectar from flowers and take it back to the hive.take it back to the hive
- Write the answer. Bees collect nectar from flowers and take it back to the hive.
Check. The summary keeps the key idea. ✓
Method. Find the description of the cells.
- Find the cells. The text describes wax cells.wax cells
- Find the word. The word is six-sided.six-sided
- Write the answer. six-sided
Check. six-sided describes the cells. ✓
Method. Ask whether it can be checked, or whether it shows a view.
- Test the sentence. Most important is a judgement, not something that can be checked.most important
- Decide. A judgement is an opinion.opinion
- Write the answer. opinion
Check. The sentence is an opinion. ✓
Method. Give a reason, and point to the evidence.
- Give the reason. The text explains each step clearly.each step
- Give the evidence. The bees fan their wings to dry the honey.fan their wings
- Write the answer. It explains each step clearly, such as the bees fanning their wings to dry the honey.
Check. The view is justified with evidence. ✓
Method. Name the purpose of each text.
- Look at the poem. The poem creates a mood.a mood
- Look at the information text. The information text informs the reader.informs
- Write the answer. The poem creates a calm mood, while the information text informs the reader about honey.
Check. The purposes differ. ✓
Method. Use a word that shows a view.
- Choose the view. Every school should plant flowers is a view.should plant flowers
- Check the label. Should shows that this is an opinion.should
- Write the answer. Every school should plant flowers for bees.
Check. The sentence is an opinion. ✓