Reading non-fiction: fact, opinion, bias and summary
By the end of this chapter you will be able to
- Sort sentences into fact and opinion, and say how a reader can check a fact
- Name loaded words, and explain the feeling they create in the reader
- Judge how reliable a text is, using named sources, specific details and balance
- Summarise paragraphs, then a whole text, keeping the main ideas only
- Quote and paraphrase accurately, and say which one is which
You should already know
- Fact and opinion, and retrieving information from a text (Year 6, Chapter 11)
- Summary of a non-fiction text (Year 6, Chapter 11)
Where this leads
- Comparing texts (Chapter 6 of this book)
- Writing to argue, persuade and analyse (Chapter 11 of this book)
National Curriculum for England, Key Stage 3 English, Year 7. Content: Read and understand non-fiction, such as reports, articles and letters (KS3 reading, R1), Distinguish fact from opinion, and identify bias and loaded language (KS3 reading, R4), Evaluate the reliability of a text, and the effect of a writer's persuasive language (KS3 reading, R4), Summarise the main ideas across several paragraphs, in the reader's own words (KS3 reading, R6), Use evidence and quotation accurately from non-fiction (KS3 reading, R7).
Exercise P Do you remember?
Method. A feeling or judgement is an opinion.
- Think about the sentence. A feeling or judgement cannot be checked in the same way as a fact.cannot be checked
- Name it. The word is opinion.opinion
- Write the answer. opinion
Check. opinion is the word. ✓
Method. A summary is shorter and keeps the main points.
- Think about the length. A summary is shorter than the original.shorter
- Think about the content. It keeps the main points only.main points
- Write the answer. A summary is a shorter version of a text that keeps only the main points.
Check. A summary keeps the main points. ✓
Method. A noun names a thing or a person.
- Look at the words. Report names a thing that tells information.report
- Check the others. Describes is a verb; the hedgehog is a noun phrase, not one word.report
- Write the answer. report
Check. report is a noun. ✓
Method. A writer of letters to the press is a correspondent.
- Think about the job. The person writes to a newspaper.writes to a newspaper
- Name the word. The word is correspondent.correspondent
- Write the answer. correspondent
Check. correspondent is the word. ✓
Method. A command usually ends with a full stop.
- Look at a command. Pick up one item today.full stop
- Name the mark. The mark is a full stop.full stop
- Write the answer. full stop
Check. A command ends with a full stop. ✓
Fact and opinion
A fact is something that can be checked, such as a date, a number or a description that others can test. An opinion is what someone thinks or feels. It may be reasonable, but it cannot be proved in the same way. Many non-fiction texts mix the two, so a reader must check each sentence.
Text 1: Hedgehogs in towns (original factual report)
1Hedgehogs were once common in British gardens, but numbers have fallen sharply in many areas of the countryside. Many now live in towns, where they find shelter under sheds and in hedges. A hedgehog may travel a long way in a single night while it searches for food. Its diet includes beetles, worms and slugs, and it sometimes eats fallen fruit.
2Hedgehogs hibernate through the winter, usually from November to March. Before this, they need to build up fat in the autumn. Gardeners can help by leaving a gap under fences, so that hedgehogs can pass between gardens. Piles of leaves and log piles also give them safe places to rest.
3Experts recommend that gardeners do not use slug pellets, because these can harm hedgehogs as well as the animals they eat.
Key ideas
- A fact can be checked against evidence, such as a date or a measurement.
- An opinion expresses a judgement or a feeling, such as heroes or should.
- Watch for opinion words: think, believe, should, must, best, heroes.
Method. Ask whether the sentence can be checked.
- Can it be checked? Yes, by looking at records about hibernation.records
- Does it give a judgement? No, it gives specific months, not a view.specific months
- Name it. The sentence is a fact.fact
- Write the answer. fact
Check. It gives specific, checkable details. ✓
Method. Look for a judgement word.
- Find the judgement word. Heroes is a value judgement.heroes
- Ask whether it can be checked. You cannot test whether someone is a hero.cannot be tested
- Name it. The sentence is an opinion.opinion
- Write the answer. opinion
Check. The judgement word shows an opinion. ✓
Method. Look at what the sentence names.
- Look at the words. It names three kinds of food.three kinds of food
- Check the claim. These foods can be checked by observing hedgehogs.observing
- Judge. So it is a fact, with no judgement.a fact
- Write the answer. yes, because it names foods that can be checked
Check. It names checkable foods. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a sentence can contain a fact and an opinion. Look at each part separately.
Exam tip
Exam tip. When you sort fact and opinion, say which words make it a fact, or which words show a judgement.
Exercise 5A Practice: fact and opinion
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The claim is historical and can be checked against records.fact fits
- Reject the other choices. A opinion cannot be checked in the same way, or it expresses a feeling or judgement.opinion do not fit
- Write the answer. fact
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The foods can be observed and checked.fact fits
- Reject the other choices. A opinion cannot be checked in the same way, or it expresses a feeling or judgement.opinion do not fit
- Write the answer. fact
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. It describes where hedgehogs are, which can be checked by counting.fact fits
- Reject the other choices. A opinion cannot be checked in the same way, or it expresses a feeling or judgement.opinion do not fit
- Write the answer. fact
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Heroes is a judgement, so it is a view, not a checkable fact.opinion fits
- Reject the other choices. A fact cannot be checked in the same way, or it expresses a feeling or judgement.fact do not fit
- Write the answer. opinion
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Saying what break times are for is a view about how they should be used.opinion fits
- Reject the other choices. A fact cannot be checked in the same way, or it expresses a feeling or judgement.fact do not fit
- Write the answer. opinion
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The writer reports a situation that can be checked with the school.fact fits
- Reject the other choices. A opinion cannot be checked in the same way, or it expresses a feeling or judgement.opinion do not fit
- Write the answer. fact
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. I think signals a personal view.opinion fits
- Reject the other choices. A fact cannot be checked in the same way, or it expresses a feeling or judgement.fact do not fit
- Write the answer. opinion
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Look for a judgement word, such as heroes, should or must.
- Find a judgement word. Heroes shows a view.heroes
- Quote the sentence. The headteachers who ban phones are heroes.The headteachers who ban phones are heroes
- Write the answer. "The headteachers who ban phones are heroes"
Check. The sentence is exact and an opinion. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. It gives specific months that can be checked.Hedgehogs hibernate from November to March. fits
- Reject the other choices. The other two use must and should, which are judgements.Parents, you must act now. and The rest of us should be ashamed. do not fit
- Write the answer. Hedgehogs hibernate from November to March.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Look for words that judge.
- Find two words. Heroes and ashamed are judgement words.heroes, ashamed
- Say what they show. They show the writer's judgement of others.judgement
- Write the answer. heroes and ashamed, which show judgement and strong feeling.
Check. Two opinion words are named. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Recommend is an opinion about what should be done, even when experts say it.Experts recommend that gardeners do not use slug pellets fits
- Reject the other choices. The first and third sentences describe what is or was the case, which can be checked.Many now live in towns and Hedgehogs were once common in British gardens do not fit
- Write the answer. Experts recommend that gardeners do not use slug pellets
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The writer reports their own experience, which is a fact about the writer.fact fits
- Reject the other choices. A opinion cannot be checked in the same way, or it expresses a feeling or judgement.opinion do not fit
- Write the answer. fact
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Think about what makes a statement a fact.
- A fact can be checked. It can be tested against evidence.tested against evidence
- An unchecked claim. If it is not checked, it may be wrong.may be wrong
- Write the answer. a fact is a claim that can be checked and found true, while an unchecked claim may still be false.
Check. The difference is explained. ✓
Method. Ask whether the writer shows the evidence.
- Check the claim. The writer says the evidence is clear.says the evidence is clear
- Check the support. No study or figure is named.no study
- Write the answer. an opinion, because the writer claims the evidence without showing it.
Check. The claim is not supported by evidence. ✓
Bias and loaded language
Bias is a one-sided view that favours one side, without showing the other fairly. Loaded language (emotive language) uses words that carry strong feelings, such as sad, robbed or heroes. A neutral word, such as phones, reports without pushing the reader.
Key ideas
- Bias favours one side and does not show the other side fairly.
- Loaded words carry strong feeling; neutral words report without pushing.
- Name the loaded word, then say what feeling it creates in the reader.
Method. Name the word, then the feeling it creates.
- Find the word. Sad is an emotive adjective.sad
- Explain the feeling. It makes the reader feel the scene is unhappy.unhappy
- Name the effect. The effect is sympathy, and a feeling of gloom.sympathy and gloom
- Write the answer. it creates sympathy and gloom
Check. The word creates a feeling. ✓
Method. Look at how the writer treats the two sides.
- Look at the praise. She calls headteachers heroes.heroes
- Look at the other side. She dismisses the safety argument quickly.dismisses
- Judge. So the writer is biased towards one view.biased
- Write the answer. yes, because she calls headteachers heroes and uses only one side
Check. The writer favours one side. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Phones is a neutral word that names the device without judgement.phones fits
- Reject the other choices. The other two words carry strong feelings and judgement.addictive machines and screens of doom do not fit
- Write the answer. phones
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: do not say a word is loaded just because it is strong. Explain the feeling it creates, and why the writer chooses it.
Exam tip
Exam tip. For bias, quote the loaded word, say what it makes the reader feel, and say which side it favours.
Exercise 5B Practice: bias and loaded language
Method. Find the emotive word, then say what it makes the reader feel.
- Find the word. The writer chooses this word.sad
- Explain the effect. The adjective makes the scene seem unhappy and hopeless.sympathy and gloom
- Write the answer. sad, which suggests sympathy and gloom.
Check. The loaded word and its effect are named. ✓
Method. Find the emotive word, then say what it makes the reader feel.
- Find the word. The writer chooses this word.robbed
- Explain the effect. Robbed suggests that something has been taken unfairly, which provokes anger.anger and a sense of injustice
- Write the answer. robbed, which suggests anger and a sense of injustice.
Check. The loaded word and its effect are named. ✓
Method. Find the emotive word, then say what it makes the reader feel.
- Find the word. The writer chooses this word.addictive
- Explain the effect. Addictive suggests harm and loss of control, which frightens the reader.fear and a sense that phones are dangerous
- Write the answer. addictive, which suggests fear and a sense that phones are dangerous.
Check. The loaded word and its effect are named. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Phones names the object without judgement.phones fits
- Reject the other choices. Addictive machines and screens of doom both carry strong negative feeling.addictive machines and screens of doom do not fit
- Write the answer. phones
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. It speaks directly to the reader, and uses must to push them to act.Parents, you must act now. fits
- Reject the other choices. The other two are a view and a claim, not a direct appeal.Break times are for playing. and Some will say children need phones. do not fit
- Write the answer. Parents, you must act now.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Search the text for the words the question asks for.
- Find the place in the text. The writer claims the evidence is clear, but names none.The evidence is clear
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no changes.The evidence is clear
- Write the answer. The evidence is clear
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Think about which side the praise supports.
- Find the praise. Heroes is a strong term of praise.strong praise
- Explain the bias. It supports phone bans without showing the other side fairly.without showing the other side
- Write the answer. it praises one side, and so presents only the view that phone bans are good.
Check. The bias is explained. ✓
Method. Find the adjective about the scene.
- Find the adjective. The scene is described as sad.sad
- Write the answer. sad
Check. sad is copied exactly. ✓
Method. Think about the feeling the adjective gives.
- Think about the feeling. Sad makes the reader feel sorry for the children.sorry for the children
- Name the feeling. The feeling is sympathy.sympathy
- Write the answer. sympathy
Check. Sympathy is the feeling. ✓
Method. Compare the tone and the vocabulary of each text.
- Text 1. Text 1 uses neutral, specific language.neutral
- Text 2. Text 2 uses loaded words and direct appeals.loaded words
- Write the answer. Text 2 is more persuasive, because its loaded words and direct appeals push the reader to agree.
Check. The comparison is reasoned. ✓
Method. Remove the words that push the reader.
- Remove the push. Must is strong, so replace it with a neutral verb.neutral verb
- Explain the change. The sentence now reports rather than demands.reports rather than demands
- Write the answer. Schools are considering a phone ban at lunchtime; the change is that the words no longer push the reader.
Check. The rewrite is neutral. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Calling headteachers heroes praises only one side of the debate.The headteachers who ban phones are heroes. fits
- Reject the other choices. The first sentence presents another view, even if the writer then rejects it.Some will say children need phones for safety. and Break times are for playing and talking. do not fit
- Write the answer. The headteachers who ban phones are heroes.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Find the emotive word, then say what it makes the reader feel.
- Find the word. The writer chooses this word.ashamed
- Explain the effect. Ashamed makes the reader feel guilty, which pushes them towards the writer's view.guilt, and pressure on the reader to act
- Write the answer. ashamed, which suggests guilt, and pressure on the reader to act.
Check. The loaded word and its effect are named. ✓
Judging reliability
Reliability means how far a reader can trust a text. A reliable text names its sources, gives checkable details, shows more than one side, and states its purpose. An unreliable text makes unsupported claims, uses vague sources, or hides evidence.
Key ideas
- A reliable text names sources and gives checkable details.
- Balance: a reliable text shows more than one side fairly.
- Purpose: check whether the text is to inform, persuade or entertain.
Method. Check whether the claim is supported.
- Find the claim. The evidence is clear.the evidence is clear
- Check the support. No study, survey or figure is named.no study
- Judge. Without support, the claim cannot be fully trusted.cannot be fully trusted
- Write the answer. not fully, because it names no study for its claim
Check. The claim is unsupported. ✓
Method. Look at the details.
- Find the detail. It gives specific months.November to March
- Compare. Text 2 gives a general claim without detail.general claim
- Judge. Specific details can be checked, so Text 1 is more reliable.can be checked
- Write the answer. it gives specific, checkable details, such as November to March
Check. The detail can be checked. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. A named study with figures can be checked by the reader.a named study with figures fits
- Reject the other choices. Strong feeling and a catchy title do not show evidence.the writer feeling strongly and a catchy title do not fit
- Write the answer. a named study with figures
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a strong feeling is not evidence. A text can sound certain and still have no reliable support.
Exam tip
Exam tip. When you judge reliability, give a judgement, then a reason from the text, then say what would make it more reliable.
Exercise 5C Practice: judging reliability
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The reader can check a named study and its figures.a named study with figures fits
- Reject the other choices. A catchy title and strong feeling do not show evidence.a catchy title and a strong feeling do not fit
- Write the answer. a named study with figures
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Look for a named source.
- Look for a study. The letter says no study is named.no study is named
- Answer. So it does not name a study.no
- Write the answer. no
Check. No study is named. ✓
Method. Look at what the writer asks for.
- Look at the request. The writer asks to see the figures.see the figures
- Look at the balance. The writer says both sides should be heard.both sides should be heard
- Write the answer. it asks for the figures and says both sides should be heard.
Check. The balance is shown. ✓
Method. Think about what a reader needs to check the claim.
- Find the claim. Bullying reports have fallen by a third.fallen by a third
- Say what would help. A named source and published figures would let readers check it.let readers check
- Write the answer. a named source and the actual figures from the school, so readers can check them.
Check. The claim could be checked with a named source. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. A factual report gives details and does not demand action.it uses specific details and no direct appeal to the reader fits
- Reject the other choices. The other two are direct appeals and praise, which are persuasive.it says you must act now and it calls people heroes do not fit
- Write the answer. it uses specific details and no direct appeal to the reader
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Think about what a purpose changes.
- Name the purposes. Texts inform, persuade or entertain.inform, persuade
- Link to reliability. A persuasive text may leave out the other side.leave out the other side
- Write the answer. to see whether it aims to inform, persuade or entertain, so the reader can judge its balance.
Check. The purpose affects the reader's judgement. ✓
Method. Look at the heading of each text.
- Look at the heading. Text 3 begins Dear Editor.Dear Editor
- Write the number. The letter is Text 3.3
- Write the answer. 3
Check. Text 3 is a letter. ✓
Method. Ask what support the claim has.
- Find the claim. The evidence is clear.the evidence is clear
- Write the question. The reader should ask which evidence supports it.which evidence
- Write the answer. Which study shows that the evidence is clear?
Check. The question checks the support. ✓
Method. Ask whether it can be checked.
- Ask whether it can be checked. The school's rule can be checked with the school.can be checked
- Name it. It is a fact.fact
- Write the answer. fact
Check. It is checkable. ✓
Method. Look for the word think.
- Look for the word think. Think shows a personal view.think
- Name it. It is an opinion.opinion
- Write the answer. opinion
Check. It is an opinion. ✓
Method. Think about what makes a text believable.
- Look at the details. Specific months and facts can be checked.can be checked
- Look at the tone. The tone is neutral and does not push the reader.neutral
- Write the answer. its specific details can be checked, and its tone is neutral.
Check. The reason is linked to the text. ✓
Method. Think about what a reader can check.
- Look at the phrase. Experts recommend names no one.names no one
- Explain the effect. The reader cannot test the advice.cannot test
- Write the answer. because the reader cannot check who the experts are or what they found.
Check. The phrase is vague. ✓
Method. Judge the text against each criterion, then say what the total judgement is.
- Criterion one: sources. No study or source is named.no source
- Criterion two: balance. It says both sides should be heard.both sides should be heard
- Judgement. The letter is partly reliable.partly reliable
- Write the answer. it is partly reliable: it names no source, but it is balanced and asks for the figures to be shared.
Check. Two criteria are used. ✓
Summarising the main ideas across paragraphs
A main idea is the point that a paragraph is about. To summarise, state the main idea of each paragraph, then join the ideas into a shorter whole, in your own words. Do not copy long phrases, and do not add your own opinion.
Key ideas
- A paragraph has one main idea; find it first.
- A summary joins the main ideas, in order, in your own words.
- Leave out examples, repeated detail and your own opinion.
Method. Find the main idea, not the detail.
- Find the decline. Numbers have fallen in the countryside.fallen
- Find the move. Many now live in towns.live in towns
- Write the main idea. Hedgehogs are declining, and many now live in towns.declining, and many now live in towns
- Write the answer. Hedgehogs are declining, and many now live in towns
Check. The two main points are kept. ✓
Method. Combine the main idea of each paragraph.
- Paragraph 1. Hedgehogs are declining and live in towns.declining
- Paragraph 2. Gardeners can help with gaps and leaves.help with gaps
- Paragraph 3. Experts advise against slug pellets.against slug pellets
- Join them. The summary keeps the three main ideas.three main ideas
- Write the answer. Hedgehogs are declining, but gardeners can help with gaps, leaves and no slug pellets
Check. All three paragraphs are covered. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The diet is a detail; the summary needs the main points about decline and help.Its diet includes beetles, worms and slugs fits
- Reject the other choices. The decline and the gardeners' help are main ideas.Hedgehogs are declining in the countryside and Gardeners can help by leaving a gap under fences do not fit
- Write the answer. Its diet includes beetles, worms and slugs
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a summary keeps the main ideas, not the examples. A detail such as a list of foods is not a main idea.
Exam tip
Exam tip. Write the main idea of each paragraph in a few words, then join them into one shorter summary.
Exercise 5D Practice: summarising across paragraphs
Method. Find the two main ideas in paragraph 2.
- Hibernation. Hedgehogs hibernate through the winter.hibernate
- Help. Gardeners can leave gaps and leaves for them.gaps and leaves
- Write the answer. hedgehogs hibernate from November to March, and gardeners can help them by leaving gaps and leaves.
Check. Both ideas are kept. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. It states the main idea: pellets harm animals, so advice is against them.Slug pellets can harm hedgehogs and other animals, so experts advise against them. fits
- Reject the other choices. The other two add ideas that are not in paragraph 3.Experts are famous, and they write many books. and Gardens are beautiful places in summer. do not fit
- Write the answer. Slug pellets can harm hedgehogs and other animals, so experts advise against them.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Count the sentences in paragraph 2.
- Count the sentences. Each sentence ends with a full stop.4 sentences
- Write the number. There are this many sentences.4
- Write the answer. 4
Check. The count is 4. ✓
Method. Look for the word hibernate.
- Find the word. Hibernate appears in paragraph 2.paragraph 2
- Write the number. The number is 2.2
- Write the answer. 2
Check. Paragraph 2 is about hibernation. ✓
Method. Find the scene, then the writer's judgement.
- The scene. Children sit in silence over screens.in silence
- The judgement. The writer says something has gone badly wrong.gone badly wrong
- Write the answer. the lunchtime scene shows children absorbed in screens, and the writer calls it a bad problem.
Check. The scene and judgement are summarised. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The writer argues for phone bans throughout the column.Phones should be banned at lunchtime. fits
- Reject the other choices. Cold sandwiches is a detail, and the safety view is the opposing argument that is rejected.Sandwiches go cold. and Children should carry phones for safety. do not fit
- Write the answer. Phones should be banned at lunchtime.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Plan three main ideas, then join them.
- Main claim. Phones rob children of conversation.rob children
- Praise. Headteachers who ban phones are praised.praised
- Call to act. Parents should act now.act now
- Write the answer. The writer says phones are robbing children of conversation at lunchtime, praises headteachers who ban them, and urges parents to act.
Check. Three main ideas, in 25 words or fewer. ✓
Method. Find the main request.
- The problem. No study is named.no study
- The request. The school should share its data.share its data
- Write the answer. the writer asks for evidence, since the column names no study, and asks the school to share its data.
Check. The main request is summarised. ✓
Method. Find the main idea of the paragraph.
- Find the main idea. Slug pellets can harm hedgehogs and other animals.harm hedgehogs
- Write the answer. slug pellets can harm hedgehogs
Check. The main idea is kept. ✓
Method. Look for the advice.
- Look for the advice. Paragraph 3 advises against slug pellets.advises against
- Write the answer. 3
Check. Paragraph 3 has the advice. ✓
Method. Think about what a summary is for.
- The purpose. A summary reports what the text says.reports
- The risk. Adding opinion changes the meaning.changes the meaning
- Write the answer. because a summary should report the main points accurately, without adding the reader's or writer's judgement.
Check. The summary is accurate. ✓
Method. Write one sentence about each main idea.
- Hedgehogs. They are declining and live in towns.declining
- Gardeners. They can help with gaps, leaves and no slug pellets.gaps, leaves
- Write the answer. Hedgehogs are declining and now live in towns. Gardeners can help them with gaps, leaves and no slug pellets.
Check. Two sentences, each with one main idea. ✓
Method. Keep the main point, then replace the loaded words with neutral ones.
- Main point. Phones should be restricted at lunchtime.restricted
- Neutral wording. Use talk less, not robbed of conversation.talk less
- Write the answer. Phones at lunchtime should be restricted, because children talk less and may need to contact parents.
Check. The main point is kept without loaded words. ✓
Using evidence and paraphrase accurately across texts
A quotation copies the exact words, in quotation marks. A paraphrase states the same idea in your own words, without quotation marks. Both must match the text. Compare texts by saying where they agree, and where they disagree.
Key ideas
- A quotation copies exact words, in quotation marks.
- A paraphrase gives the same idea in your own words, and must be accurate.
- When comparing texts, say what each says, then where they agree or disagree.
Method. Find the time, then copy it exactly.
- Find the time. The text gives the months.November to March
- Copy it. Copy the words exactly.November to March
- Check the accuracy. The words match the text.match the text
- Write the answer. November to March
Check. The months are quoted exactly. ✓
Method. Keep the meaning, and change the words.
- Keep the meaning. The writer says the evidence is obvious.the evidence is obvious
- Check for quotation marks. A paraphrase has no quotation marks.no quotation marks
- Write the answer. the writer says the proof is obvious
Check. The paraphrase keeps the meaning. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The text says the evidence is clear, which matches exactly.the evidence is clear fits
- Reject the other choices. Obvious and strong are not in the text.the evidence is obvious and the evidence is strong do not fit
- Write the answer. the evidence is clear
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a paraphrase must keep the same meaning. If you change "clear" to "strong", the meaning has changed.
Exam tip
Exam tip. Quote with quotation marks and exact words. Paraphrase without quotation marks, and check the meaning is the same.
Exercise 5E Practice: accurate evidence and comparing texts
Method. Search the text for the words the question asks for.
- Find the place in the text. Paragraph 2 gives the months.November to March
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no changes.November to March
- Write the answer. November to March
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Search the text for the words the question asks for.
- Find the place in the text. Paragraph 1 describes the children.heads bent over glowing screens
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no changes.heads bent over glowing screens
- Write the answer. heads bent over glowing screens
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The text says clear.the evidence is clear fits
- Reject the other choices. Obvious and strong are not in the text.the evidence is obvious and the evidence is strong do not fit
- Write the answer. the evidence is clear
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Find the sentence about headteachers, then copy it exactly.
- Find the sentence. The headteachers who ban phones are heroes.The headteachers
- Copy it with quotation marks. The exact words are in quotation marks.in quotation marks
- Write the answer. "The headteachers who ban phones are heroes"
Check. The quotation is exact. ✓
Method. Look for quotation marks.
- Look for quotation marks. The letter says the evidence is clear, without marks.without marks
- Answer. So it paraphrases, and does not quote directly.no
- Write the answer. no
Check. No quotation marks are used. ✓
Method. Keep the meaning, and change the words.
- Find the request. The school should share its data with parents.share its data
- Paraphrase. The writer wants the school to share information.share information
- Write the answer. The writer wants the school to share its data with parents.
Check. The paraphrase keeps the meaning. ✓
Method. Look for the words fallen by a third.
- Look for the fraction. Text 3 says bullying reports have fallen by a third.by a third
- Write the number. The text is Text 3.3
- Write the answer. 3
Check. Text 3 gives a fraction. ✓
Method. Search the text for the words the question asks for.
- Find the place in the text. The writer states this directly.I have not seen the figures myself
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no changes.I have not seen the figures myself
- Write the answer. I have not seen the figures myself
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Say what each text says about evidence, then where they differ.
- Text 2. It says the evidence is clear.evidence is clear
- Text 3. It says no study is named and asks for figures.asks for figures
- Write the answer. Text 2 says the evidence is clear, but Text 3 says no study is named and asks for the figures.
Check. The disagreement is explained. ✓
Method. Find the verb about the data.
- Find the verb. The school should share its data.share
- Write the answer. share
Check. share is copied exactly. ✓
Method. Find the phrase about sides.
- Find the phrase. The writer says both sides should be heard.both sides should be heard
- Write the answer. both sides should be heard
Check. The phrase is copied exactly. ✓
Method. Use one idea from each text.
- Text 2. The claim is that the evidence is clear.evidence is clear
- Text 3. The letter asks for the figures.asks for the figures
- Write the answer. Text 2 claims the evidence is clear, but Text 3 notes that no study is named, so parents should see the figures.
Check. Both texts are used. ✓
Method. Judge each text by its use of evidence and balance.
- Reason one. Text 3 asks for figures.asks for figures
- Reason two. Text 3 says both sides should be heard.both sides should be heard
- Write the answer. Text 1 is not about phones; Text 3 is the most helpful, because it asks for evidence and balance.
Check. Two reasons are given. ✓
Chapter summary
| Skill | Method |
|---|---|
| Fact | A statement that can be checked against evidence, such as a date or a measurement. |
| Opinion | A judgement or feeling, often with words such as should, must, heroes or ashamed. |
| Bias and loaded language | Bias favours one side; loaded words carry strong feeling. Name the word and its effect. |
| Reliability | Named sources, checkable details, balance and a clear purpose make a text more reliable. |
| Summary | State the main idea of each paragraph, join them in your own words, and leave out the detail. |
| Quotation and paraphrase | Quote exact words in quotation marks; paraphrase in your own words, keeping the same meaning. |
Can you…?
- I can sort sentences into fact and opinion, and say how a fact can be checked
- I can name loaded language and explain its effect on the reader
- I can judge the reliability of a text, using sources, detail and balance
- I can summarise the main ideas of several paragraphs in my own words
- I can quote and paraphrase accurately, and compare two texts
Key terms
- fact
- something that can be checked against evidence
- opinion
- a view, feeling or judgement that cannot be proved in the same way as a fact
- bias
- a one-sided view that favours one side
- loaded language
- words that carry strong feelings, also called emotive language
- reliability
- how far a reader can trust a text, based on sources and evidence
- paraphrase
- the same meaning, in your own words, without quotation marks
- main idea
- the central point that a paragraph or text is about
Exercise 5Z Check-up
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The months can be checked.fact fits
- Reject the other choices. A opinion cannot be checked in the same way, or it expresses a feeling or judgement.opinion do not fit
- Write the answer. fact
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Must is a judgement, not a checkable fact.opinion fits
- Reject the other choices. A fact cannot be checked in the same way, or it expresses a feeling or judgement.fact do not fit
- Write the answer. opinion
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Find the emotive word, then say what it makes the reader feel.
- Find the word. The writer chooses this word.robbed
- Explain the effect. It suggests something has been taken unfairly.anger and a sense of injustice
- Write the answer. robbed, which suggests anger and a sense of injustice.
Check. The loaded word and its effect are named. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Phones names the object without judgement.phones fits
- Reject the other choices. The other two carry strong negative feeling.addictive machines and screens of doom do not fit
- Write the answer. phones
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The reader can check it.a named study with figures fits
- Reject the other choices. Feeling and titles do not show evidence.a strong feeling and a catchy title do not fit
- Write the answer. a named study with figures
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Look at how the writer treats the two sides.
- Praise. The headteachers are called heroes.heroes
- Balance. The other side is quickly dismissed.dismissed
- Write the answer. yes, because it calls headteachers heroes and gives only one side.
Check. The bias is supported. ✓
Method. Count the sentences.
- Count the sentences. Each sentence ends with a full stop.4
- Write the number. The count is this.4
- Write the answer. 4
Check. The count is 4. ✓
Method. Find the main idea.
- Find the main idea. Slug pellets can harm animals.harm animals
- Write the summary. So experts advise against them.advise against
- Write the answer. slug pellets can harm hedgehogs and other animals, so experts advise against them.
Check. The main idea is kept. ✓
Method. Keep the meaning, and change the words.
- Keep the meaning. The writer says the proof is obvious.proof is obvious
- Check the form. There are no quotation marks.no quotation marks
- Write the answer. the writer says the proof is obvious, but gives no study.
Check. The paraphrase keeps the meaning. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The text covers the decline and the gardeners' help.Hedgehogs are declining, and gardeners can help them fits
- Reject the other choices. The other two are not the main ideas of the text.Hedgehogs are noisy and Gardens are full of slugs do not fit
- Write the answer. Hedgehogs are declining, and gardeners can help them
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Total 20 marks. Allow about 20 minutes.
Exercise 5X Practice test questions
Method. Look for a judgement word.
- Find the judgement word. Heroes is a value judgement.heroes
- Name it. The sentence is an opinion.opinion
- Write the answer. opinion
Check. Heroes shows a judgement. ✓
Method. Ask whether the sentence can be checked.
- Check the detail. The months can be checked.can be checked
- Check for judgement. It has no judgement word.no judgement
- Write the answer. It is a fact, because it gives months that can be checked.
Check. The months can be checked. ✓
Method. Look at the support for the claim.
- Find the claim. The evidence is clear.evidence is clear
- Check the support. No study or figures are named.no study
- Write the answer. No study or figures are named, so the reader cannot check the claim.
Check. The claim is unsupported. ✓
Method. Think about what a reader needs to check the claim.
- Find the claim. Bullying reports have fallen by a third.fallen by a third
- Say what would help. A named source and figures would let the reader check it.let the reader check
- Write the answer. A named source and the school's published figures would let readers check it.
Check. The claim could then be checked. ✓
Method. Find the loaded word, then the feeling.
- Find the word. Heroes is a strong word of praise.heroes
- Explain the feeling. It praises, and pushes the reader to agree.pushes the reader
- Write the answer. Heroes; it praises the headteachers and pushes the reader to agree.
Check. The loaded word is named. ✓
Method. Look for a name or a source.
- Look for a name. No experts are named.no name
- Explain the effect. The reader cannot test the advice.cannot test
- Write the answer. No experts are named, so the reader cannot check who they are or what they found.
Check. The source is vague. ✓
Method. Find the main idea, then the two examples.
- Find the main idea. Gardeners can help hedgehogs.can help
- Find the examples. Gaps under fences and piles of leaves or logs.gaps and piles
- Write the answer. Gardeners can help hedgehogs with gaps under fences and piles of leaves.
Check. The main idea and examples are kept. ✓
Method. Ask what the sentence reports.
- Look at the sentence. It reports the writer's own experience.own experience
- Decide. It is a fact about the writer.fact
- Write the answer. It is a fact about the writer, who has not seen the figures.
Check. It reports an experience. ✓
Method. Keep the meaning and change the words.
- Keep the meaning. The writer says the evidence is obvious.evidence is obvious
- Check the form. There are no quotation marks.no quotation marks
- Write the answer. The writer says the proof is obvious.
Check. The paraphrase keeps the meaning. ✓
Method. Find the two main ideas, then join them.
- Find the decline. Hedgehogs are declining in the countryside.declining
- Find the move. Many now live in towns.live in towns
- Join them. The summary keeps both main ideas.both main ideas
- Write the answer. Hedgehogs are declining in the countryside, and many now live in towns.
Check. Both ideas are kept in one sentence. ✓