Comparing texts
By the end of this chapter you will be able to
- Name a theme that runs through several texts, with evidence from each
- Compare the perspective and viewpoint of two texts
- Compare how different texts use dialogue, imagery, evidence and structure
- Support a comparison with accurate quotations from two texts
- Build on another person's point in a discussion, and respond to a challenge
You should already know
- Inference, evidence and summary (Chapter 1 of this book)
- Imagery, structure and effect in poetry and prose (Chapters 2 and 3 of this book)
Where this leads
- Spoken language: presenting, discussing and Standard English (Chapter 12 of this book)
- Writing to argue, persuade and analyse (Chapter 11 of this book)
National Curriculum for England, Key Stage 3 English, Year 7. Content: Compare writers' ideas, themes and perspectives across texts of the same and different types (KS3 reading, R5), Use evidence from two texts, quoted accurately, to support a comparison (KS3 reading, R7), Compare the methods used by different writers, and the effect of each (KS3 reading, R5), Discuss a comparison with others, building on their ideas and responding to challenge (KS3 spoken language, S2).
Exercise P Do you remember?
Method. I and we are first-person pronouns.
- Look at the pronouns. I and we speak from inside the text.I and we
- Name the viewpoint. The viewpoint is first person.first person
- Write the answer. first person
Check. I and we are first person. ✓
Method. A comparison with as or like is a simile.
- Look at the words. As though compares two things.as though
- Name the device. The device is a simile.simile
- Write the answer. simile
Check. as though makes a simile. ✓
Method. The big idea a text explores is its theme.
- Think about the big idea. A theme runs through a whole text.runs through
- Name the word. The word is theme.theme
- Write the answer. theme
Check. theme is the word. ✓
Method. The words characters say are dialogue.
- Think about the spoken words. The words characters say to each other.say to each other
- Name the word. The word is dialogue.dialogue
- Write the answer. dialogue
Check. dialogue is the word. ✓
Method. A person who takes part in a discussion is a participant.
- Think about the role. The person takes part in the talk.takes part
- Name the word. The word is participant.participant
- Write the answer. participant
Check. participant is the word. ✓
Shared themes across different texts
When you compare texts, look for a theme, an idea that runs through a text. Then show how each text develops that theme, with evidence from the words of each text. Texts of different types may explore the same theme in very different ways.
Text A: The blue tin (original story)
1Every Sunday, Grandma opened the blue tin on the windowsill and let Nadia choose one button. There were hundreds of them: horn buttons from a winter coat, tiny pearl ones from a wedding dress, and a single gold one that had no match.
2Nadia always picked the gold button, and Grandma always said the same thing: 'That one has been waiting for a long time.' This Sunday, the tin was lighter. Grandma had given most of the buttons to the new charity shop on the corner, but she had kept back the gold one.
3Nadia said nothing. She held the gold button in her pocket all afternoon, feeling its small weight, and wondered what had been waiting for so long.
Text B: The thimble (original poem)
My mother keeps the thimble in her drawer,
dented on one side from years of use.
When she sews a hem she wears it still,
as though the cloth could not be trusted without it.
I took the thimble home and set it down
beside the kettle, where the steam could reach it.
It was warm, the way a hand is warm
that has been holding something for a long time.
Text C: Why we keep things (original article)
1Many families keep objects that have little value in money: a teapot, a letter, a worn scarf. Historians who study homes say that such objects help people link the present to the past.
2Some people feel that possessions are reminders of the people and the times in our lives. This is one reason why clearing a home after a death can be so painful. Others find that keeping too much makes a home feel crowded, and that letting things go can bring relief.
3The article does not claim that every object matters. Its advice is to choose what to keep by asking whether an object is used, loved or needed.
Key ideas
- A theme is an idea that runs through a text, not only a topic.
- Compare by showing the same theme in each text, with evidence from each.
- Different types of text may develop the same theme differently.
Method. Find what each text keeps and why it matters.
- Text A. Nadia keeps the gold button, which has a past.gold button
- Text B. The speaker keeps the thimble, which has a history.thimble
- Text C. Objects link the present to the past.present to the past
- Name the theme. All three texts explore memory and the past.memory and the past
- Write the answer. memory, and the things that link us to the past
Check. The theme is shared across the three texts. ✓
Method. Look at what the article says about the theme.
- Find the claim. Historians say objects link the present to the past.link the present
- Find the reason. Some possessions remind people of the people they have lost.reminders
- Name the approach. The article explains the idea, rather than showing it through a character.explains the idea
- Write the answer. it explains why people keep objects that link to the past
Check. The article explains the idea. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Nadia holds the button and wonders about the waiting, so her feelings show the theme.Text A fits
- Reject the other choices. Text C explains the theme in general terms, rather than through one character.Text C do not fit
- Write the answer. Text A
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a theme is an idea, not a topic. "Buttons" is a topic; "memory" is a theme.
Exam tip
Exam tip. When you compare, write the shared theme first, then give one piece of evidence from each text.
Exercise 6A Practice: shared themes
Method. Think about the main idea that runs through the text.
- Find the main idea. All three texts explore what is kept from the past.keeping the past
- Name the theme. The theme is keeping the past.keeping the past
- Write the answer. keeping the past
Check. The theme is shared across the texts. ✓
Method. Look at the form of each text.
- Look at the form. Text A has narrative and dialogue, with characters.narrative
- Write the letter. Text A is the story.A
- Write the answer. A
Check. Text A is the story. ✓
Method. Look at the form of each text.
- Look at the form. Text B has short lines and stanzas.short lines
- Write the letter. Text B is the poem.B
- Write the answer. B
Check. Text B is the poem. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Nadia holds the button all afternoon and wonders what has been waiting.Text A fits
- Reject the other choices. Text B is about a grown child, and Text C is a general article.Text B and Text C do not fit
- Write the answer. Text A
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Compare the objects.
- The button. Grandma says the button has been waiting for a long time.waiting for a long time
- The thimble. The mother keeps the thimble and wears it still.wears it still
- Write the answer. both objects carry a history, so the owner keeps them because of the past they hold.
Check. Both objects link to memory. ✓
Method. Search the text for the words the question asks for.
- Find the place in the text. Grandma says this Every Sunday.That one has been waiting for a long time.
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no changes.That one has been waiting for a long time.
- Write the answer. That one has been waiting for a long time.
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Search the text for the words the question asks for.
- Find the place in the text. The first paragraph says this.help people link the present to the past
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no changes.help people link the present to the past
- Write the answer. help people link the present to the past
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Text C gives this as one view, that keeping too much can crowd a home.Text C fits
- Reject the other choices. Texts A and B do not discuss crowded homes.Text A and Text B do not fit
- Write the answer. Text C
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Think about the voice of each text.
- Text B. The speaker uses I and my mother.I and my mother
- Reason. The poem is personal and private.personal and private
- Write the answer. Text B, because it is written in the first person and describes the speaker's own mother and thimble.
Check. The reason is linked to the voice. ✓
Method. Find the object that has no match.
- Find the object. The text says a single gold one that had no match.a single gold one
- Write the answer. a single gold one
Check. The words are copied exactly. ✓
Method. Find the dented object.
- Find the object. The thimble is dented on one side.thimble
- Write the answer. thimble
Check. The thimble is dented. ✓
Method. Look for what the article says about every object.
- Find the claim. The article does not claim that every object matters.does not claim
- Answer. So it does not agree with the idea.no
- Write the answer. no
Check. The article does not claim it. ✓
Method. Compare the views each text gives.
- Text A. It shows one view, through Nadia.one view
- Text C. It shows more than one view.more than one view
- Write the answer. Text C is the most balanced, because it gives the view that keeping too much can crowd a home.
Check. The comparison is supported. ✓
Perspective and viewpoint
The perspective is the position from which a text is told, and whose feelings shape it. The viewpoint is the grammatical person: I or we (first person) or he, she or they (third person). A text can be objective (balanced, outside) or personal (inside one voice).
Key ideas
- Perspective: whose position or feelings shape the text.
- Viewpoint: first person (I, we) or third person (he, she, they).
- Objective texts stand back; personal texts speak from inside one voice.
Method. Look at the pronouns and the focus.
- Find the pronouns. Text A uses she and her, and names Nadia.she
- Find the focus. The narrative follows Nadia's feelings.follows Nadia
- Name the perspective. The perspective is Nadia's, in the third person.Nadia, in the third person
- Write the answer. Nadia, in the third person
Check. The pronouns show third person. ✓
Method. Look at the pronouns.
- Find the pronouns. The poem uses I and my mother.I and my mother
- Find the relationship. The speaker is the daughter of the mother.daughter
- Name the perspective. The perspective is the daughter's, in the first person.the daughter
- Write the answer. the speaker, a daughter, who uses I
Check. The speaker is the daughter. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Text C speaks about people in general, and considers different views.Text C fits
- Reject the other choices. Texts A and B are told from inside one character or speaker.Text A and Text B do not fit
- Write the answer. Text C
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: "we" and "our" in Text C include the reader. Do not call it personal just because it uses a pronoun.
Exam tip
Exam tip. Compare perspective by naming whose view shapes each text, then the viewpoint, then the effect on the reader.
Exercise 6B Practice: perspective and viewpoint
Method. Look for the first-person pronoun.
- Look for the pronoun. I took the thimble home.I took
- Write the pronoun. The pronoun is I.I
- Write the answer. I
Check. I is first person. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Text A uses she and names Nadia and Grandma.Text A fits
- Reject the other choices. Text B uses I, and Text C uses we and they in general.Text B and Text C do not fit
- Write the answer. Text A
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Compare the voice of each.
- Text B. It is one speaker's memory of a mother.one speaker
- Text C. It describes many families and gives several views.many families
- Write the answer. Text C is general and balanced, while Text B is personal and emotional, from one speaker.
Check. The difference is explained. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The speaker's memory of the mother and the warm thimble is the most emotional.Text B fits
- Reject the other choices. Text A is also emotional, but the poem focuses more on feeling.Text A and Text C do not fit
- Write the answer. Text B
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Find the character whose feelings are shown.
- Find the character. The narrative follows Nadia.Nadia
- Quote the evidence. She held the gold button in her pocket all afternoon.held the gold button
- Write the answer. Nadia's feelings, as in "She held the gold button in her pocket all afternoon"
Check. The feelings are shown and quoted. ✓
Method. Search the text for the words the question asks for.
- Find the place in the text. The second stanza gives this.When she sews a hem she wears it still
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no changes.When she sews a hem she wears it still
- Write the answer. When she sews a hem she wears it still
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Text C uses our lives, which includes the reader.Text C fits
- Reject the other choices. Texts A and B do not address the reader as we.Text A and Text B do not fit
- Write the answer. Text C
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Think about what the reader sees.
- The effect. The reader sees Nadia's actions and infers her feelings.infers her feelings
- The alternative. First person would show her thoughts directly.directly
- Write the answer. to show Nadia's feelings from outside, so the reader sees her thoughts through her actions.
Check. The third person gives an outside view. ✓
Method. Find the name in the text.
- Find the name. The character who chooses the button is Nadia.Nadia
- Write the name. The name is Nadia.Nadia
- Write the answer. Nadia
Check. Nadia is named. ✓
Method. Look for the possessive pronoun about lives.
- Find the pronoun. Our lives includes the reader.our lives
- Write the answer. our
Check. our is copied. ✓
Method. Find the pronoun that refers to a woman.
- Find the pronoun. She is used for Grandma in the story.She
- Write the answer. she
Check. she refers to a woman. ✓
Method. Infer the feeling from the evidence.
- Find the evidence. When she sews a hem she wears it still.wears it still
- Infer the feeling. The speaker admires the mother's habit, so the feeling is respect.respect
- Write the answer. loving and respectful, as shown by she wears it still when she sews.
Check. The feeling is supported. ✓
Method. Compare the viewpoint and the focus.
- Text A. Nadia's memory is told by a narrator.narrator
- Text B. The speaker's own memory is told directly.own memory
- Write the answer. Text B, because it is the speaker's own memory, told in the first person.
Check. The comparison is supported. ✓
Comparing methods: dialogue, imagery, evidence and structure
A method is the way a writer creates effect: dialogue in fiction, imagery in poetry, evidence and examples in non-fiction, and structure (the order of ideas) in all three. Compare methods by saying what each does, and what effect it has on the reader.
Key ideas
- A method is the way the writer creates an effect.
- Compare methods by naming each one and its effect on the reader.
- Different text types use different methods to explore one theme.
Method. Look for speech in the text.
- Find speech. Text A has Grandma's words, in quotation marks.quotation marks
- Explain the method. Dialogue shows Grandma's attitude to the button.attitude
- Name the text. Text A uses dialogue.Text A
- Write the answer. Text A
Check. Text A has dialogue. ✓
Method. Look for like or as.
- Find as though. As though compares two things.as though
- Name the device. A comparison with as is a simile.simile
- Explain the effect. It shows the mother needs the thimble.needs the thimble
- Write the answer. simile
Check. The comparison is a simile. ✓
Method. Look at where each text gets its ideas.
- Text C. Historians who study homes say the objects help.Historians
- Text A. Text A is a story and offers no outside evidence.no outside evidence
- Compare. Text C uses an outside source; Text A relies on the story.outside source
- Write the answer. Text C refers to historians; Text A uses no outside evidence
Check. The difference in evidence is explained. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: comparing methods is not listing them. Say what each method does, and compare the effect.
Exam tip
Exam tip. For comparison, use "whereas" or "in contrast" to link two texts, and name the method and its effect in each.
Exercise 6C Practice: comparing methods
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Text A has speech in quotation marks.Text A fits
- Reject the other choices. Text B and Text C do not use speech between characters.Text B and Text C do not fit
- Write the answer. Text A
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Look for as though.
- Look for as though. As though compares the mother to the cloth.as though
- Name the device. A comparison with as is a simile.simile
- Write the answer. simile
Check. as though makes a simile. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Text C refers to historians who study homes.Text C fits
- Reject the other choices. Texts A and B do not refer to outside sources.Text A and Text B do not fit
- Write the answer. Text C
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Look for words about touch or sight.
- Text B. The thimble is dented and warm.dented and warm
- Text A. The button is small and weighs little.small weight
- Write the answer. Text B, because it describes the thimble as dented and warm, which the reader can feel.
Check. The comparison is supported. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Text A lists horn buttons, tiny pearl ones and a single gold one.Text A fits
- Reject the other choices. Text B has no list, and Text C does not list objects.Text B and Text C do not fit
- Write the answer. Text A
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Think about why a writer would not overclaim.
- Look at the claim. The article does not claim every object matters.does not claim
- Explain the choice. Balance makes the argument fairer.fairer
- Write the answer. to stay balanced, so that it gives more than one view of keeping things.
Check. The balance is explained. ✓
Method. Look at the layout.
- Look at the layout. Text B has two stanzas separated by a gap.two stanzas
- Write the letter. Text B is the poem.B
- Write the answer. B
Check. Text B has stanzas. ✓
Method. Name the stages in order.
- The ritual. Grandma and Nadia choose buttons Every Sunday.Every Sunday
- The change. The tin was lighter; most buttons are given away.lighter
- The ending. Nadia holds the gold button and wonders.wondered
- Write the answer. it moves from the Sunday ritual, to the change in the tin, to Nadia holding the button and wondering.
Check. The stages are in order. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Text A says waiting for a long time; Text B says for a long time.Text A and Text B fits
- Reject the other choices. Text C does not use the phrase.Text B and Text C and Text A and Text C do not fit
- Write the answer. Text A and Text B
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Choose one method and explain its effect.
- Choose. Dialogue in Text A is the method.Dialogue
- Explain. The repeated line shows the button matters.the button matters
- Write the answer. the dialogue in Text A, because Grandma's repeated words show the button matters to the family.
Check. The choice is explained. ✓
Method. Compare the last lines.
- Text A. She wondered what had been waiting for so long.wondered
- Text B. The thimble is warm, and the speaker feels its history.feels its history
- Write the answer. Text A, because Nadia wonders what has been waiting, which leaves a question open.
Check. The endings are compared. ✓
Using evidence from two texts
A strong comparison uses evidence from both texts. Quote short, exact phrases, in quotation marks, and say what each quotation shows. Then link the two quotations with a comparison word, such as whereas or in contrast.
Key ideas
- Use one quotation from each text, exact and in quotation marks.
- Link them with a comparison word: whereas, in contrast, similarly.
- Say what each quotation shows before you compare.
Method. Find a quotation from each text, then say what it shows.
- Text A. The gold button is kept, waiting for a long time.waiting for a long time
- Text B. The thimble is still worn by the mother.wears it still
- Link them. Both objects are kept because of their history.their history
- Write the answer. "waiting for a long time" and "wears it still"
Check. Both quotations are exact. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The poem says dented on one side from years of use, word for word.dented on one side from years of use fits
- Reject the other choices. The other two change or leave out words, so they are not accurate.dented from years of use and dented from long use do not fit
- Write the answer. dented on one side from years of use
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Keep the meaning, and change the words.
- Find the advice. The article asks whether an object is used, loved or needed.used, loved or needed
- Paraphrase. Keep an object if you use it, love it, or need it.use it, love it or need it
- Write the answer. choose what to keep by asking if an object is used, loved or needed
Check. The paraphrase keeps the meaning. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a quotation must be exact. Check each word against the text, including small words such as the and a.
Exam tip
Exam tip. Quote one phrase from each text, then link them with whereas or similarly. Name the shared idea.
Exercise 6D Practice: evidence from two texts
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The poem uses these exact words.dented on one side from years of use fits
- Reject the other choices. The other two leave out or change words.dented from years of use and dented from long use do not fit
- Write the answer. dented on one side from years of use
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Search the text for the words the question asks for.
- Find the place in the text. The second paragraph explains this.she had kept back the gold one
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no changes.she had kept back the gold one
- Write the answer. she had kept back the gold one
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Choose one phrase from each text, then say what they share.
- Text A. The button has been waiting.waiting
- Text B. The thimble holding something from the past.holding something
- Write the answer. "That one has been waiting for a long time" and "It was warm ... that has been holding something"
Check. Both quotations are exact. ✓
Method. Keep the meaning, and change the words.
- Find the advice. Asking whether an object is used, loved or needed.used, loved or needed
- Paraphrase. Keep what you use, love or need.use, love or need
- Write the answer. Keep the things you use, love or need, and let go of the rest.
Check. The paraphrase keeps the meaning. ✓
Method. Look for quotation marks.
- Look for quotation marks. The poem has none from the article.none
- Answer. So it does not quote Text C.no
- Write the answer. no
Check. No direct quotation. ✓
Method. Search the text for the words the question asks for.
- Find the place in the text. The second paragraph says this.letting things go can bring relief
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no changes.letting things go can bring relief
- Write the answer. letting things go can bring relief
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Text C says it is painful because objects remind people of those they have lost.Text C fits
- Reject the other choices. Texts A and B do not discuss clearing a home.Text A and Text B do not fit
- Write the answer. Text C
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Find the detail in Text A that is a reminder.
- Text C. Objects are reminders of people.reminders of the people
- Text A. Grandma's words about the button are repeated each week.repeated each week
- Write the answer. the gold button is a reminder of Grandma, whose words about it are repeated Every Sunday.
Check. The link is made. ✓
Method. Find the stanza about sewing.
- Find the phrase. When she sews a hem she wears it still.wears it still
- Write the answer. When she sews a hem she wears it still
Check. The phrase is copied exactly. ✓
Method. Find the verb about keeping.
- Find the verb. She had kept back the gold one.kept back
- Write the answer. kept
Check. kept is copied exactly. ✓
Method. Choose one quotation, and explain its strength.
- Choose the quotation. That one has been waiting for a long time.waiting
- Explain the strength. It shows that the object has been valued across years.valued across years
- Write the answer. "That one has been waiting for a long time", because it shows the button is valued over years.
Check. The choice is explained. ✓
Method. Use a comparison word to link your two quotations.
- Text A. Nadia holds the gold button.holds the gold button
- Text C. Objects remind people of the past.reminders of the people
- Write the answer. Whereas Text A shows Nadia's feelings about the button, Text C explains that objects remind people of the past.
Check. The comparison uses two quotations. ✓
Building on other people's ideas in discussion
A good discussion builds on other people's points. A participant says what they agree with, adds a new reason or piece of evidence, and responds to a challenge with a reasoned answer. This section is written, so you can plan what you would say.
| Purpose | Sentence starter |
|---|---|
| Agree and extend | I agree with ..., and I would add that ... |
| Build on a point | Building on what ... said, I think ... |
| Challenge politely | I want to challenge that, because ... |
| Respond to a challenge | You may be right that ..., but the text shows ... |
Key ideas
- Build on: refer to the point before, and add a new reason or quotation.
- Challenge politely: name the point, then give a reason and evidence.
- Respond with evidence, not with a repeat of your first point.
Method. Refer to the point before, then add evidence.
- Refer to the point. Sam said that the objects hold memories.Sam said
- Add evidence. The button has been waiting for a long time.waiting for a long time
- Build. So the button shows memory across years.across years
- Write the answer. Building on what Sam said, the gold button shows memory
Check. The response builds on the point. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. It refers to the point and adds a quotation as evidence.Building on that, the first person makes the thimble feel personal, as in "I took the thimble home". fits
- Reject the other choices. The other responses either ignore the point or add no evidence.I do not agree, because the sky is blue. and Next question. do not fit
- Write the answer. Building on that, the first person makes the thimble feel personal, as in "I took the thimble home".
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Name the challenge, then answer it with a reason from the text.
- Name the challenge. The classmate says the article is too general.too general
- Answer with a reason. Text C gives advice on what to keep.advice on what to keep
- Respond fairly. You may be right that it is general, but it gives a balanced view.balanced view
- Write the answer. You may be right that it is general, but it gives a balanced view and advice
Check. The reply responds to the challenge. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: building on a point is not repeating it. Add a new reason, quotation or example.
Exam tip
Exam tip. In a discussion, refer to the speaker's point first, then add one new reason with evidence.
Exercise 6E Practice: building on ideas
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. It names a challenge and gives a reason to follow.I want to challenge that, because ... fits
- Reject the other choices. The other starters agree or move on without a challenge.Yes, I agree, and ... and Next question. do not fit
- Write the answer. I want to challenge that, because ...
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. It refers to the point and adds evidence from Text A.Building on that, the gold button shows memory, as in "waiting for a long time". fits
- Reject the other choices. The other responses do not refer to the point, or add no evidence.I have a dog. and Who wants to go first? do not fit
- Write the answer. Building on that, the gold button shows memory, as in "waiting for a long time".
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Agree, then add one new reason.
- Agree. I agree that Text A shows loss.shows loss
- Add a reason. The tin was lighter after the buttons are given away.tin was lighter
- Write the answer. I agree that Text A shows loss, and I would add that the tin was lighter after the buttons are given away.
Check. The response agrees and adds. ✓
Method. Name the challenge, then answer with evidence.
- The challenge. Text C does not help.does not help
- The reply. The article gives a balanced view and advice.balanced view
- Write the answer. You may be right that the article is general, but it does give a balanced view that helps the reader decide.
Check. The reply uses evidence. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. It acknowledges the point before giving a different view.You may be right, but the text shows something different. fits
- Reject the other choices. The other two dismiss the speaker.You are wrong, and your point is silly. and Nobody cares what you think. do not fit
- Write the answer. You may be right, but the text shows something different.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Look at the sentence starters in the table.
- Look at the starters. Building on what ... said refers back.refers back
- Write the word. The word is Building.Building
- Write the answer. Building
Check. The starter refers back to a point. ✓
Method. Think about how a discussion works.
- Listening. Referring back shows you have heard the point.heard the point
- Connection. The discussion stays on one line of thought.one line of thought
- Write the answer. it shows you have listened, and it keeps the discussion connected.
Check. The reason is explained. ✓
Method. Refer to the idea, then add a quotation.
- Refer to the idea. Objects are reminders.reminders
- Add evidence. Grandma's words make the button a reminder.make the button a reminder
- Write the answer. Building on that, Grandma's words make the button a reminder, as in "waiting for a long time"
Check. The idea is built on, with evidence. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. It closes the discussion and adds no point.I have nothing to add. fits
- Reject the other choices. The other two refer back and add a reason or challenge.Building on that, the thimble is still used. and I want to challenge that, because the text shows the opposite. do not fit
- Write the answer. I have nothing to add.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Name the shared theme in one sentence.
- Shared theme. All three texts explore memory.memory
- Sum up. People keep things because of the past.keep things
- Write the answer. All three texts show that people keep things because of their memories.
Check. The theme is summed up. ✓
Chapter summary
| Skill | Method |
|---|---|
| Theme | An idea that runs through a text; show it in each text with evidence. |
| Perspective and viewpoint | Whose view shapes the text, and whether it uses first or third person. |
| Methods | Dialogue, imagery, evidence and structure; compare each method by its effect. |
| Evidence from two texts | One exact quotation from each text, in quotation marks, linked by a comparison word. |
| Building on ideas | Refer to the point, add a new reason or quotation, and respond to a challenge with evidence. |
Can you…?
- I can name a theme shared by texts of different types, with evidence from each
- I can compare the perspective and viewpoint of two texts
- I can compare the methods writers use, and their effects
- I can support a comparison with exact quotations from two texts
- I can build on a point in a discussion, and respond to a challenge politely
Key terms
- theme
- an idea that runs through a text
- perspective
- the position from which a text is told, and whose view shapes it
- viewpoint
- the grammatical person used, such as first person or third person
- objective
- balanced and from outside, rather than personal
- method
- the way a writer creates an effect, such as dialogue or imagery
- build on
- to refer to someone's point and add a new reason or evidence
Exercise 6Z Check-up
Method. Think about the main idea that runs through the text.
- Find the main idea. Each text is about what is kept from the past.keeping the past
- Name the theme. The theme is keeping the past.keeping the past
- Write the answer. keeping the past
Check. The theme is shared across the texts. ✓
Method. Look at the form.
- Look at the form. Text A is a narrative with dialogue.narrative
- Write the letter. Text A is the story.A
- Write the answer. A
Check. Text A is the story. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The speaker uses I.Text B fits
- Reject the other choices. Text A uses she, and Text C uses we and they.Text A and Text C do not fit
- Write the answer. Text B
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. It considers many families and more than one view.Text C fits
- Reject the other choices. Texts A and B are told from inside one voice.Text A and Text B do not fit
- Write the answer. Text C
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Look for as though.
- Look for as though. As though compares the mother to the cloth.as though
- Name the device. It is a simile.simile
- Write the answer. simile
Check. as though makes a simile. ✓
Method. Look for words about touch or sight.
- Text B. The thimble is dented and warm.dented and warm
- Reason. The reader can feel it.can feel
- Write the answer. Text B, because the thimble is dented and warm.
Check. The detail is named. ✓
Method. Search the text for the words the question asks for.
- Find the place in the text. The last paragraph says this.The article does not claim that every object matters
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no changes.The article does not claim that every object matters
- Write the answer. The article does not claim that every object matters
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Choose one phrase from each text.
- Text A. The button has been waiting.waiting
- Text B. The thimble is still worn.wears it still
- Write the answer. "waiting for a long time" and "wears it still"
Check. Both are exact. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. It refers to the point and adds a new quotation.Building on that, the thimble shows care, as in "wears it still". fits
- Reject the other choices. The other two repeat or move on without adding evidence.I said that already. and Next. do not fit
- Write the answer. Building on that, the thimble shows care, as in "wears it still".
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Name each ending, then compare.
- Text A. Nadia wonders what has been waiting.wondered
- Text B. The thimble is warm.warm
- Write the answer. Text A leaves Nadia wondering, while Text B ends with the speaker feeling the thimble's warmth.
Check. The endings are compared. ✓
Total 23 marks. Allow about 23 minutes.
Exercise 6X Practice test questions
Method. Find what each phrase says about the object.
- Phrase one. The button has been waiting, so it has a past.a past
- Phrase two. The thimble is warm from its history.history
- Name the theme. Both show memory and the past.memory and the past
- Write the answer. memory and the past
Check. Both phrases show the past. ✓
Method. Look at what the sentence does and does not say.
- Look at the words. Nadia says nothing.says nothing
- Explain what it shows. Her silence shows she is thoughtful, not stated.thoughtful
- Write the answer. Nadia is quiet and thoughtful, so her feelings are shown rather than stated.
Check. The silence is explained. ✓
Method. Find the pronoun, then the effect.
- Find the pronoun. I took the thimble home.I took
- Explain the effect. The first person makes the memory feel personal.personal
- Write the answer. First person, which makes the memory personal to the speaker.
Check. The viewpoint is first person. ✓
Method. Name the feature, then explain its effect.
- Name the feature. The sentence gives a reason.gives a reason
- Explain the effect. It helps the reader understand why objects matter.understand
- Link to the theme. It links the objects to the theme of memory.links to the theme
- Write the answer. It gives a reason, which helps the reader understand why objects matter.
Check. The feature is named and explained. ✓
Method. Name the method, then the effect.
- Name the method. The writer uses close detail, such as the pocket and the afternoon.close detail
- Explain the effect. It makes the reader feel the object and Nadia's attention.attention
- Write the answer. Close detail; it makes the reader feel the button's weight and Nadia's attention.
Check. The method and effect are given. ✓
Method. Name the device, then say what it shows.
- Name the device. As though compares the mother to the cloth.simile
- Say what it shows. The mother needs the thimble.needs the thimble
- Write the answer. A simile; it shows the mother needs the thimble to sew well.
Check. The simile shows her need. ✓
Method. Find one quotation from each text, then link them.
- Text A. The button has been waiting for a long time.waiting for a long time
- Text C. Objects are reminders of the people in our lives.reminders of the people
- Link them. Both show objects that link to the past.link to the past
- Write the answer. "waiting for a long time" in Text A links to "reminders of the people" in Text C, because both show objects that link to the past.
Check. Both quotations are exact. ✓
Method. Read what Grandma has done, then say what it shows.
- Find the action. Grandma gave most of the buttons away.gave most
- Explain what it shows. The tin is much emptier, and the gold button has been kept.kept
- Write the answer. The tin is much emptier, and Grandma has kept back the gold button.
Check. The change in the tin is explained. ✓
Method. Refer to the point, then add a quotation.
- Refer to the point. The classmate says the thimble shows care.shows care
- Add a reason. The mother wears it still when she sews.wears it still
- Build. So the care is shown in daily use.daily use
- Write the answer. Building on that, the mother still wears the thimble when she sews, as in "wears it still".
Check. The response builds on the point. ✓
Method. Look for a balanced view in each text.
- Look at Text C. It says that keeping too much can crowd a home.crowded
- Give the reason. It does not claim that every object matters.does not claim
- Write the answer. Text C, because it does not claim that every object matters.
Check. Text C gives more than one view. ✓