Comparing texts: themes, perspectives and methods
By the end of this chapter you will be able to
- Name a theme shared by two texts, and say how each text develops it
- Say how each writer's perspective shapes what they choose to include
- Infer a writer's attitude from word choice and evidence, then compare the attitudes
- Compare methods: tense, person, sensory language, numbers and structure
- Write a comparative paragraph and a conclusion that use evidence from both texts
You should already know
- Comparing two texts on a shared topic (Year 7, Chapter 6 of this book)
- Inference and evidence in fiction (Chapter 1 of this book)
Where this leads
- Writing to argue and evaluate: sustained argument (Chapter 11 of this book)
- Spoken language: presenting, debating and Standard English (Chapter 13 of this book)
National Curriculum for England, Key Stage 3 English, Year 8. Content: Compare the ideas and themes of two texts on the same subject (KS3 reading, R5), Compare the perspective and attitude of two writers, and infer attitude with evidence (KS3 reading, R2 and R5), Compare the methods of two writers, such as tense, sensory detail and the use of numbers (KS3 reading, R5), Use evidence from both texts accurately in a comparison (KS3 reading, R7), Discuss a comparison by building on a partner's point, and respond to a counter-point in writing (KS3 speaking and listening, S2).
Exercise P Do you remember?
Method. A book or piece of personal memories is a memoir.
- Think about the content. It is written from personal memory.personal memory
- Name the word. The word is memoir.memoir
- Write the answer. memoir
Check. memoir is the word. ✓
Method. A factual text that informs readers of progress is a report.
- Think about the purpose. It informs readers of what is happening.informs readers
- Name the word. The word is report.report
- Write the answer. report
Check. report is the word. ✓
Method. Showing how two things differ is contrast.
- Think about the meaning. A contrast shows difference.shows difference
- Name the word. The word is contrast.contrast
- Write the answer. contrast
Check. contrast is the word. ✓
Method. The feeling of a text is its tone.
- Think about the feeling. Tone is the attitude a writer shows.attitude
- Name the word. The word is tone.tone
- Write the answer. tone
Check. tone is the word. ✓
Method. Regular verbs add -ed in the past tense.
- Look at the verb. Walk is a regular verb.regular
- Add the ending. Walk becomes walked.walked
- Write the answer. walked
Check. walked is the past tense. ✓
Comparing themes and ideas
Text 1: A memoir paragraph (invented, first person)
1The old bridge at Carrow had a voice of its own. Every cart that crossed it rattled the planks, and every child who ran over it was told to mind the gaps where the boards had split. My brother and I knew the sound of every wagon by its wheels, long before we could see who was driving it.
2We used to lean over the parapet in summer and drop sticks into the river, racing them to the reeds on the far side. The water was brown and cool, and it smelt of mud and mint. Nobody thought the bridge would ever be anything but there.
3When the new road was planned, the council sent men in orange jackets to measure the stones. My father shook his head at them and said nothing. I think he knew that something was ending, though none of us had the words for it yet.
4I still walk past the place where the bridge stood. Sometimes I stop, and listen for the rattle that is no longer there, and I hear only the traffic and my own breathing.
Text 2: A council project update (invented)
1Project update: the Carrow Crossing will open in autumn, providing a safer and wider route for people and vehicles. The new bridge will carry two traffic lanes, a dedicated cycle path and a footway on each side.
2The old bridge has been assessed as unsafe for heavy vehicles. Its stone piers show cracks, and the timber deck has reached the end of its design life. Repairs were considered, but the survey concluded that replacement would cost less over forty years.
3The construction team is ahead of schedule, with 60 per cent of the foundations complete. Work will continue on weekdays between seven and five, and noise levels will be monitored throughout.
4We recognise that the old bridge matters to many residents. A memorial plaque will be fixed to the new parapet, recording the bridge's history and its years of service to the village.
Key ideas
- A theme is an idea that runs through a text, such as change, memory or loss.
- Two texts may share a theme but treat it in different ways.
- Compare by naming the shared idea, then saying how each text develops it, using evidence from both.
Method. Look at what happens to the bridge in each text.
- Read Text 1. The bridge is ending, as the new road is planned.something was ending
- Read Text 2. The bridge is being replaced by a new crossing.the new bridge
- Name the shared theme. Both texts are about change in the village.change in the village
- Write the answer. change in the village
Check. The shared theme is named from both texts. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The memoir keeps returning to what has gone, such as the rattle that is no longer there.memory and loss fits
- Reject the other choices. Cost savings and the speed of work are the report's focus, not the memoir's.cost savings and the speed of the work do not fit
- Write the answer. memory and loss
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Find one detail from each text, then compare the two.
- Text 1. The memoir says something was ending.something was ending
- Text 2. The report says the new bridge will carry two traffic lanes.The new bridge will carry two traffic lanes
- Compare. The memoir mourns, but the report welcomes the change.Text 1 treats change as a loss, while Text 2 treats it as progress and safety.
- Write the answer. Text 1 treats change as a loss, while Text 2 treats it as progress and safety.
Check. Both texts are compared with evidence. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a shared theme is not the same as a shared view. Say how the two writers differ in what they do with the theme.
Exam tip
Exam tip. Write "Both texts ... However, Text 1 ... while Text 2 ..." to compare the idea in one sentence.
Exercise 6A Practice: comparing themes and ideas
Method. Find the phrase in the text, then copy it exactly.
- Find the place in the text. The first sentence describes the bridge.had a voice of its own
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no change, so that they match the text.had a voice of its own
- Write the answer. had a voice of its own
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Find the phrase in the text, then copy it exactly.
- Find the place in the text. The first paragraph gives the opening time.will open in autumn
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no change, so that they match the text.will open in autumn
- Write the answer. will open in autumn
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Both texts are about the bridge being replaced or lost, which is change.change in the village fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.a love of the sea and a dispute about money and a plan for a school do not fit
- Write the answer. change in the village
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The report stresses that the new crossing is safer and wider, which the memoir does not mention.safety and a wider route fits
- Reject the other choices. Mint and wheels are memoir details, not the report's focus.the smell of mint and the sound of wheels do not fit
- Write the answer. safety and a wider route
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Name the theme, then find the evidence.
- Name the theme. The memoir is about memory and loss.memory
- Quote the evidence. The rattle is gone.the rattle that is no longer there
- Write the answer. the memoir remembers the bridge through sound, as in "the rattle that is no longer there"
Check. The theme is explained with a quotation. ✓
Method. Take one detail from each text, then compare them.
- Text 1. The memoir describes the bridge with sound and memory.The old bridge at Carrow had a voice of its own
- Text 2. The second text takes a different view.Its stone piers show cracks
- Compare. The comparison shows the difference.Text 1 describes the bridge through memories and sound, while Text 2 describes it through its cracks and its unsafe condition.
- Write the answer. Text 1 describes the bridge through memories and sound, while Text 2 describes it through its cracks and its unsafe condition.
Check. The comparison uses evidence from both texts. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The report says a memorial plaque will record the bridge's years of service, which values it.the bridge's years of service to the village fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.the cost of the wagon and the speed of traffic and the reeds on the far side do not fit
- Write the answer. the bridge's years of service to the village
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Find a point that both texts make about people.
- Text 1. The memoir shows the bridge as part of childhood.my brother and I knew the sound
- Text 2. The report recognises that the bridge matters to residents.recognise that the old bridge matters to many residents
- Write the answer. the bridge matters to people in the village, as shown by the memoir's memories and the report's "matters to many residents"
Check. A shared idea is named with evidence from both texts. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The report describes what will happen in the future, using will.The new bridge will carry two traffic lanes fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.Nobody thought the bridge would ever be anything but there. and Something was ending. and My father shook his head at them. do not fit
- Write the answer. The new bridge will carry two traffic lanes
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Take one detail from each text, then compare them.
- Text 1. The memoir ends in memory and loss.I still walk past the place where the bridge stood
- Text 2. The second text takes a different view.A memorial plaque will be fixed to the new parapet
- Compare. The comparison shows the difference.Text 1 ends with the narrator listening for a lost sound, while Text 2 ends with a plaque that will honour the bridge's past.
- Write the answer. Text 1 ends with the narrator listening for a lost sound, while Text 2 ends with a plaque that will honour the bridge's past.
Check. The comparison uses evidence from both texts. ✓
Method. Compare the tone of the two endings.
- Choose the text. Text 2 is more positive.Text 2
- Give the reason. It describes safety and a memorial.safer and wider route
- Write the answer. Text 2 presents change more positively, because it describes safety and a plaque that honours the bridge.
Check. The judgement is supported. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The father shook his head, and the narrator still listens for the rattle, which shows deep feeling.they valued it deeply, and felt its loss fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.they did not care about it and they wanted it replaced at once and they were bored by it do not fit
- Write the answer. they valued it deeply, and felt its loss
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Take one detail from each text, then compare them.
- Text 1. The memoir describes children racing sticks and the planks rattling.every child who ran over it was told to mind the gaps
- Text 2. The second text takes a different view.has been assessed as unsafe for heavy vehicles
- Compare. The comparison shows the difference.The report treats the old bridge as unsafe, while the memoir treats the bridge as safe, familiar and loved.
- Write the answer. The report treats the old bridge as unsafe, while the memoir treats the bridge as safe, familiar and loved.
Check. The comparison uses evidence from both texts. ✓
Method. Think about what each writer is for.
- Think about the memoir. It values the bridge as memory.memory
- Think about the report. It values the bridge as a structure.structure
- Write the answer. the memoir values the bridge as memory, while the report values it as a structure to be judged by its safety and cost.
Check. The disagreement is explained. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The report compares the cost of repair and replacement over forty years.replacement would cost less over forty years fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.the bridge had a voice and the reeds on the far side and the smell of mud and mint do not fit
- Write the answer. replacement would cost less over forty years
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. First the agreement, then the disagreement.
- Agreement. Both texts accept that the bridge is changing.changing
- Disagreement. Text 1 sees loss, while Text 2 sees benefit.loss
- Write the answer. both accept that the bridge is changing, but the memoir sees loss, while the report sees the new bridge as a benefit.
Check. The agreement and disagreement are explained. ✓
Perspectives and attitudes
A reader can ask: who is writing, why, and what does the writer want the reader to feel?
Key ideas
- Perspective is the position from which a writer writes, such as a family member or an engineer.
- Attitude is the writer's feeling towards the subject, shown through word choice and emphasis.
- Compare two writers by naming each attitude and quoting the word or phrase that shows it.
Method. Read the text for feelings, then name the attitude.
- Find the feeling. The narrator still walks past the bridge.I still walk past the place where the bridge stood
- Find the word. The narrator listens for the rattle that is no longer there.the rattle that is no longer there
- Name the attitude. The attitude is affection and regret.affection and regret
- Write the answer. affection and regret
Check. The attitude is inferred from the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The report uses technical terms such as design life and foundations, which suggests a professional writer.an engineer or council official fits
- Reject the other choices. The text does not describe a child, and it does not describe a passing traveller.a child at the bridge and a passing traveller do not fit
- Write the answer. an engineer or council official
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Find the attitude, and the evidence for it.
- Find the phrase. The report recognises that the old bridge matters.recognise that the old bridge matters to many residents
- Find the action. A memorial plaque will be fixed.A memorial plaque will be fixed to the new parapet
- Name the attitude. The report shows respect, with a plaque to honour the past.respect, with a plaque to honour it
- Write the answer. respect, with a plaque to honour it
Check. The attitude is inferred. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: do not say an attitude without quoting a word or phrase that shows it. "The writer is sad" is weaker than "The writer regrets the loss, shown by ..."
Exam tip
Exam tip. Name the perspective, then the attitude, then the evidence. Repeat for the second text, and compare.
Exercise 6B Practice: perspectives and attitudes
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The first person and the memories of childhood show that the writer is a grandmother remembering.a grandmother remembering childhood fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.a council engineer and a builder and a newspaper editor do not fit
- Write the answer. a grandmother remembering childhood
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The report is a project update, with technical terms and figures.a council engineer writing a project update fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.a child at the river and a grandmother and a traveller on the bridge do not fit
- Write the answer. a council engineer writing a project update
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Find the phrase in the text, then copy it exactly.
- Find the place in the text. The second paragraph gives the judgement about safety.unsafe for heavy vehicles
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no change, so that they match the text.unsafe for heavy vehicles
- Write the answer. unsafe for heavy vehicles
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Read the detail about the father, then infer the feeling.
- Find the detail. The father shook his head at the men.shook his head at them
- Infer. The gesture shows he is unhappy with the plans.unhappy
- Write the answer. resentful or sad about the change, as the father shook his head at the council's men.
Check. The attitude is inferred with evidence. ✓
Method. Find the phrase about cost and infer the attitude.
- Find the phrase. Replacement would cost less over forty years.replacement would cost less over forty years
- Infer. The writer takes a practical view of cost.practical
- Write the answer. practical and businesslike, because it compares repair and replacement over forty years.
Check. The attitude is inferred with evidence. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The report uses formal language and states its plans with confidence, such as will open in autumn.formal and confident fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.angry and bitter and frightened and tense and playful and silly do not fit
- Write the answer. formal and confident
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The memoir looks back fondly at the past, which is nostalgic.nostalgic fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.businesslike and formal and technical do not fit
- Write the answer. nostalgic
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Take one detail from each text, then compare them.
- Text 1. The memoir is emotional, looking back.I still walk past the place where the bridge stood
- Text 2. The second text takes a different view.We recognise that the old bridge matters to many residents
- Compare. The comparison shows the difference.Text 1 has an emotional attitude, looking back with regret, while Text 2 has a practical attitude, looking forward with respect.
- Write the answer. Text 1 has an emotional attitude, looking back with regret, while Text 2 has a practical attitude, looking forward with respect.
Check. The comparison uses evidence from both texts. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Recognise shows the writer acknowledges that residents care about the bridge.We recognise that the old bridge matters to many residents. fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.The construction team is ahead of schedule. and Work will continue on weekdays. and The new bridge will carry two traffic lanes. do not fit
- Write the answer. We recognise that the old bridge matters to many residents.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Think about who each writer is.
- Text 1. The writer remembers the bridge as a child.my brother and I
- Text 2. The writer reports as a council professional.Project update
- Write the answer. the grandmother writes from memory as a resident, while the engineer writes from the council's professional view.
Check. The perspectives are explained. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The father shook his head and said nothing, which suggests quiet distrust.a quiet distrust fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.great enthusiasm and total indifference and warm welcome do not fit
- Write the answer. a quiet distrust
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Find the image of memory and say what it shows.
- Find the image. The writer listens for a rattle that is gone.the rattle that is no longer there
- Infer. The writer cherishes the memory.cherishes
- Write the answer. the writer values memory, as shown by still listening for the rattle that is no longer there.
Check. The attitude to memory is inferred. ✓
Method. Take one detail from each text, then compare them.
- Text 1. The memoir uses "we" and "my father".My father shook his head at them
- Text 2. The second text takes a different view.the old bridge matters to many residents
- Compare. The comparison shows the difference.Text 1 describes people as a family and a community, while Text 2 describes residents as a group who matter to the council.
- Write the answer. Text 1 describes people as a family and a community, while Text 2 describes residents as a group who matter to the council.
Check. The comparison uses evidence from both texts. ✓
Method. Link each perspective to the credibility of its attitude.
- Text 1. Memory makes the feeling seem real.memory
- Text 2. Expertise makes the plans seem reliable.expertise
- Write the answer. the grandmother writes from direct memory, so her feelings seem real, while the engineer writes from expertise, so the plans seem reliable.
Check. Both perspectives are linked to credibility. ✓
Comparing methods: tense, sensory detail and numbers
| Method | Text 1 (memoir) | Text 2 (project update) |
|---|---|---|
| Person | first person: I, my, we | third person or impersonal |
| Tense | past tense, with present in the last line | present and future: will open, will carry |
| Detail | senses: sound, smell, touch | numbers, dates, measures |
| Structure | ends with a return to the present | ends with a plaque for the future |
Key ideas
- A method is the way a writer builds meaning: person, tense, sensory detail, numbers, structure.
- Compare two methods by naming each one, quoting an example from each text, and explaining the effect.
- A method is a choice; the effect depends on the reader and the purpose of the text.
Method. Find the verbs about the new bridge.
- Find the verbs. The report uses will open and will carry.will open
- Name the tense. The verbs use will, which is the future tense.will
- Explain the effect. The future tense makes the plans sound certain.future tense
- Write the answer. future tense
Check. The tense is named and explained. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Smelt of mud and mint describes what the narrator can smell.sensory detail, through smell fits
- Reject the other choices. The phrase has no numbers and is not in the future tense.numbers and the future tense do not fit
- Write the answer. sensory detail, through smell
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Find the numbers in each text.
- Find the numbers in Text 2. The report gives 60 per cent and forty years.60 per cent
- Find the numbers in Text 1. The memoir gives no figures.no figures
- Compare. Numbers give the report a measured tone, while the memoir uses senses.Text 2 uses numbers to measure, while Text 1 uses none.
- Write the answer. Text 2 uses numbers to measure, while Text 1 uses none.
Check. The comparison of numbers is made. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: "Text 1 uses detail" is not a method comparison. Name the method (sensory detail, tense, numbers) and show how each text uses it.
Exam tip
Exam tip. Write "Text 1 uses ..., for example ..., while Text 2 uses ..., for example ..., which ..."
Exercise 6C Practice: comparing methods
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The memoir uses I, my and we, which is first person.first person fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.second person and third person only and no person at all do not fit
- Write the answer. first person
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The memoir describes past events, such as "The old bridge at Carrow had a voice".past tense fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.future tense and present perfect only and imperative do not fit
- Write the answer. past tense
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Find the phrase in the text, then copy it exactly.
- Find the place in the text. The second paragraph describes the water.smelt of mud and mint
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no change, so that they match the text.smelt of mud and mint
- Write the answer. smelt of mud and mint
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Name the method, quote the text, then compare how it works.
- Find the method. Find a sound in the memoir.the planks
- Compare the effect. The effect is compared with the other text.sensory detail through sound, as in the planks rattling and the rattle that is no longer there
- Write the answer. sensory detail through sound, as in the planks rattling and the rattle that is no longer there.
Check. The method is compared and supported. ✓
Method. Name the method, quote the text, then compare how it works.
- Find the method. Find a number in the report.60 per cent of the foundations complete
- Compare the effect. The effect is compared with the other text.numerical detail, as in 60 per cent of the foundations complete, which gives a measured tone
- Write the answer. numerical detail, as in 60 per cent of the foundations complete, which gives a measured tone.
Check. The method is compared and supported. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The verb will and the factual detail of lanes show the report's method.future tense and factual detail fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.simile and metaphor and first person narration and a rhetorical question do not fit
- Write the answer. future tense and factual detail
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The rattle that is gone shows absence, using an image of sound.a memory image that conveys absence fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.a list of numbers and a future plan and a formal title do not fit
- Write the answer. a memory image that conveys absence
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Take one detail from each text, then compare them.
- Text 1. The memoir returns to the present.I still walk past the place where the bridge stood
- Text 2. The second text takes a different view.A memorial plaque will be fixed
- Compare. The comparison shows the difference.Text 1 ends with a return to the present and a sense of loss, while Text 2 ends with a plaque that looks to the future.
- Write the answer. Text 1 ends with a return to the present and a sense of loss, while Text 2 ends with a plaque that looks to the future.
Check. The comparison uses evidence from both texts. ✓
Method. Name the method, quote the text, then compare how it works.
- Find the method. Link the voice to the effect on the reader.My father shook his head at them
- Compare the effect. The effect is compared with the other text.the first person makes the memoir personal and emotional, while the impersonal voice makes the report seem objective
- Write the answer. the first person makes the memoir personal and emotional, while the impersonal voice makes the report seem objective.
Check. The method is compared and supported. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Design life is a technical term used in the report, and it is not used in the memoir.technical terms such as design life fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.first person and sensory detail and a list of sounds do not fit
- Write the answer. technical terms such as design life
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Take one detail from each text, then compare them.
- Text 1. The memoir moves from the past to the present.I still walk past the place where the bridge stood
- Text 2. The second text takes a different view.The new bridge will carry two traffic lanes
- Compare. The comparison shows the difference.Text 1 moves between the past and the present, while Text 2 looks to the future from the present.
- Write the answer. Text 1 moves between the past and the present, while Text 2 looks to the future from the present.
Check. The comparison uses evidence from both texts. ✓
Method. Think about the purpose of a memoir.
- Think about the purpose. A memoir aims to share memories.memories
- Think about the effect. Senses make memory vivid.vivid
- Write the answer. the senses make the past feel present and personal, while numbers would make it feel distant.
Check. The reason is explained. ✓
Method. Name two methods and link each to a purpose.
- Memoir method. Senses and first person share memory.senses
- Report method. Numbers and future tense inform.future tense
- Write the answer. the memoir uses senses and personal voice to share memory, while the report uses numbers, future tense and technical terms to inform.
Check. The methods are linked to the purposes. ✓
Writing a comparative paragraph and conclusion
A conclusion should bring the comparison together in one clear statement, not repeat each text in turn.
Key ideas
- A comparative paragraph states a comparison, supports it with evidence from both texts, and explains the effect.
- A comparative conclusion states the main difference or similarity, and why it matters.
- In a discussion, build on a partner's point: "I agree that ..., and I would add ...", or "I disagree, because ...".
Method. Name both texts, then the comparison.
- Name the shared idea. Both texts are about change.change
- Name the difference. They respond to it differently.differently
- Write the sentence. The sentence names the comparison.Both texts describe change in the village, but they respond to it differently.
- Write the answer. Both texts describe change in the village, but they respond to it differently.
Check. The opening sentence compares the texts. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. It states the main difference and why it matters, which is what a conclusion does.The memoir values the bridge as memory, while the report values it as a safe structure, so the texts disagree on what matters most. fits
- Reject the other choices. The other two choices are facts, not conclusions about the comparison.The bridge is old. and The report is long and the memoir is short. do not fit
- Write the answer. The memoir values the bridge as memory, while the report values it as a safe structure, so the texts disagree on what matters most.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Think of a counter-point, then respond with evidence.
- Name the point. A partner might say the report has no feeling.no feeling
- Respond with evidence. It recognises residents and plans a plaque.recognise
- Give the answer. The report is unemotional, but it does express respect.the report is unemotional, but it does express respect
- Write the answer. the report is unemotional, but it does express respect
Check. The counter-point is answered with evidence. ✓
Watch out
Watch out: a conclusion is not a summary of each text in turn. Name the difference or similarity, and say why it matters.
Exam tip
Exam tip. Use a comparative connective, such as whereas, while or by contrast, and quote from each text in every comparison.
Exercise 6D Practice: comparative paragraphs and conclusions
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Whereas introduces a contrast, which is the job of a comparative connective.whereas fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.because and sadly and for example do not fit
- Write the answer. whereas
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. It names both texts and states the comparison in one sentence.Both writers describe the old bridge, but they write from very different perspectives. fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.The old bridge is a bridge. and Text 1 is a memoir, and it has four paragraphs. and I like both texts. do not fit
- Write the answer. Both writers describe the old bridge, but they write from very different perspectives.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Take one detail from each text, then compare them.
- Text 1. The memoir describes loss.the rattle that is no longer there
- Text 2. The second text takes a different view.A memorial plaque will be fixed
- Compare. The comparison shows the difference.Text 1 describes the bridge's loss through memory, while Text 2 describes its value through safety and a plaque.
- Write the answer. Text 1 describes the bridge's loss through memory, while Text 2 describes its value through safety and a plaque.
Check. The comparison uses evidence from both texts. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. By contrast signals a difference, which is what a comparative link does.By contrast, fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.Dear Editor, and Once upon a time, and In conclusion, it was nice. do not fit
- Write the answer. By contrast,
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. State the main difference and why it matters.
- State the difference. The memoir mourns, but the report welcomes.mourns
- Say why it matters. The difference shows two views of the bridge.two views
- Write the answer. the memoir mourns change, while the report welcomes it as progress, so the texts respond to change in opposite ways.
Check. The conclusion states a clear difference. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Agreement that builds on the partner's point, and adds a detail, is the best discussion move.I agree that the bridge matters, and I would add that its loss is felt by families. fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.I do not care what you think. and The bridge is grey. and Let us stop discussing. do not fit
- Write the answer. I agree that the bridge matters, and I would add that its loss is felt by families.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Respond with evidence from the report.
- Name the counter-point. The partner says the report has no feeling.no feeling
- Give the evidence. The report recognises residents and plans a plaque.We recognise that the old bridge matters
- Write the answer. I disagree, because the report says that the old bridge matters to many residents and plans a memorial plaque.
Check. The counter-point is answered. ✓
Method. Take one detail from each text, then compare them.
- Text 1. The memoir focuses on family.My father shook his head at them
- Text 2. The second text takes a different view.the old bridge matters to many residents
- Compare. The comparison shows the difference.Text 1 focuses on family members, such as the father, while Text 2 focuses on residents as a group the council must consider.
- Write the answer. Text 1 focuses on family members, such as the father, while Text 2 focuses on residents as a group the council must consider.
Check. The comparison uses evidence from both texts. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. It states a shared point and a difference, and links them to meaning.Both texts show the bridge as important, but only the memoir shows what it means to the people who lived beside it. fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.The bridge is important. and The report is better than the memoir. and The memoir is a letter. do not fit
- Write the answer. Both texts show the bridge as important, but only the memoir shows what it means to the people who lived beside it.
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Name a method in each text, quote it, then compare.
- Memoir. The memoir uses smell.smelt of mud and mint
- Report. The report uses numbers.60 per cent of the foundations complete
- Write the answer. The memoir uses sensory detail, as in "smelt of mud and mint", to make the past vivid. The report uses numbers, as in "60 per cent of the foundations complete", to make the plans seem measured.
Check. Two methods are compared with quotations. ✓
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Exercise 6Z Check-up
Method. Find the phrase in the text, then copy it exactly.
- Find the place in the text. The last paragraph describes the narrator's visit.I still walk past the place where the bridge stood
- Copy the words exactly. Copy them with no change, so that they match the text.I still walk past the place where the bridge stood
- Write the answer. I still walk past the place where the bridge stood
Check. The words are copied exactly from the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. Both texts are about the bridge changing or being lost.change in the village fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.a love of football and the history of a school and a plan for a holiday do not fit
- Write the answer. change in the village
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The report is a formal update, so it uses an impersonal voice.an impersonal, factual voice fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.first person I and second person you and a poem do not fit
- Write the answer. an impersonal, factual voice
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Take one detail from each text, then compare them.
- Text 1. The memoir treats the bridge as memory.The old bridge at Carrow had a voice of its own
- Text 2. The second text takes a different view.has been assessed as unsafe for heavy vehicles
- Compare. The comparison shows the difference.Text 1 treats the bridge as a memory of childhood, while Text 2 treats it as a structure that is unsafe.
- Write the answer. Text 1 treats the bridge as a memory of childhood, while Text 2 treats it as a structure that is unsafe.
Check. The comparison uses evidence from both texts. ✓
Method. Find the detail, and infer the attitude.
- Find the detail. The father shook his head at them.shook his head at them
- Infer. The gesture shows distrust.distrust
- Write the answer. resentful, because the father shook his head at them.
Check. The attitude is inferred. ✓
Method. Name the method, quote the text, then compare how it works.
- Find the method. Find a number in the report.60 per cent of the foundations complete
- Compare the effect. The effect is compared with the other text.numbers, as in 60 per cent of the foundations complete
- Write the answer. numbers, as in 60 per cent of the foundations complete.
Check. The method is compared and supported. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The report uses will open, which is the future tense.future tense, such as will open fits
- Reject the other choices. The other options do not match the texts or the method named in the question.past tense, such as had a voice and imperative and present perfect do not fit
- Write the answer. future tense, such as will open
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence or the text.
- Read what the question asks for. Decide what the sentence or the text needs.
- Test the choice. The memoir focuses on the past and the sense of loss.memory and loss fits
- Reject the other choices. Cost and road safety are the report's focus, not the memoir's.cost savings and road safety do not fit
- Write the answer. memory and loss
Check. The choice fits the sentence or the text. ✓
Method. Compare the feelings in each text.
- Choose the text. Text 1 is more emotional.Text 1
- Give the reason. It recalls sounds and smells.smelt of mud and mint
- Write the answer. Text 1, because it recalls the sounds and smells of the bridge.
Check. The judgement is supported. ✓
Method. Take one detail from each text, then compare them.
- Text 1. The memoir mourns.something was ending
- Text 2. The second text takes a different view.will open in autumn
- Compare. The comparison shows the difference.Text 1 mourns the change, while Text 2 welcomes it as progress and safety.
- Write the answer. Text 1 mourns the change, while Text 2 welcomes it as progress and safety.
Check. The comparison uses evidence from both texts. ✓
Total 21 marks. Allow about 21 minutes.
Exercise 6X Practice test questions
Method. Look at what both texts say about the bridge.
- Read Text A. The bridge has a memory and a voice.voice
- Read Text B. The bridge is being replaced by a new one.new bridge
- Write the answer. change
Check. The shared theme is change. ✓
Method. Name the method, then the effect.
- Name the method. Sound is sensory detail.sensory detail
- Explain the effect. The sound brings back memories.memories
- Write the answer. The sound of the planks rattling is a sensory detail that brings back childhood memories of the bridge.
Check. The method and effect are given. ✓
Method. Look at the verbs about the new bridge.
- Find the verb. The verb will open shows the future.will open
- Name the tense. The tense is the future tense.future tense
- Write the answer. future tense, such as will open
Check. The tense is named. ✓
Method. Name each text's attitude, then quote each.
- Text A. Text A mourns the change.mourns
- Text B. Text B welcomes the change.welcomes
- Compare. The texts respond in opposite ways.opposite ways
- Write the answer. Text A mourns change, as in "something was ending", while Text B welcomes it, as in "will open in autumn".
Check. The comparison uses both quotations. ✓
Method. Name the method and give an example.
- Name the method. The method is numbers.numbers
- Give an example. The example is 60 per cent of the foundations.60 per cent
- Write the answer. numbers, such as 60 per cent of the foundations complete, give a measured tone.
Check. The method and example are given. ✓
Method. Read the detail, then infer the attitude.
- Read the detail. The father shook his head.shook his head
- Infer the attitude. The gesture shows distrust.distrust
- Write the answer. Text A shows distrust, because the father shook his head at the men and said nothing.
Check. The attitude is inferred from the detail. ✓
Method. Name each perspective, then compare.
- Name Text A's perspective. Text A is a resident remembering.resident
- Name Text B's perspective. Text B is a council professional.council
- Write the answer. Text A is written by a resident remembering the bridge, while Text B is written by a council engineer.
Check. The perspectives are named. ✓
Method. Name a method in each text, quote, then compare.
- Text A. Text A uses sensory detail.smelt of mud and mint
- Text B. Text B uses numbers.60 per cent
- Compare. The two methods build meaning differently.differently
- Write the answer. Text A uses sensory detail, as in "smelt of mud and mint", while Text B uses numbers, as in "60 per cent".
Check. The methods are compared with quotations. ✓
Method. Name the connective, then use it.
- Name the connective. Whereas signals a contrast.whereas
- Use it in a sentence. Text A remembers, whereas Text B plans.whereas Text B plans
- Write the answer. Text A remembers the bridge fondly, whereas Text B plans its replacement.
Check. The connective is used to compare. ✓
Method. Disagree, then give evidence from the text.
- State the disagreement. The partner says there is no feeling.no feeling
- Give the evidence. Text B recognises residents and plans a plaque.recognises
- Write the answer. I disagree, because Text B recognises that the bridge matters to many residents and plans a plaque.
Check. The response is supported by evidence. ✓