Year 1 English Writing Your Own Sentences and Stories: worked examples and questions with answers
By the end of this chapter you will be able to
- Say a sentence out loud before I write it
- Put sentences in the right order to tell a story
- Use first, next, then, after that and finally
- Plan a short story with pictures
- Read my writing back and check that it makes sense
- Write a label, a list and a caption
- Write a short sentence from dictation, using the sounds and tricky words I know
You should already know
- Sentences, capital letters and full stops (Chapter 6)
- The sounds and spellings taught in Chapters 1 to 3
- Tricky words (Chapter 4)
Where this leads
- Getting ready for the phonics check (Chapter 12)
- Longer stories and recounts in Year 2
National Curriculum for England, Key Stage 1 English, Year 1. Content: Say a sentence out loud before writing it, Write sentences in order to tell a story or recount, Use first, next, then, after that and finally to put events in order, Re-read writing to check it makes sense, Plan writing with pictures, Write labels, lists and captions, Write simple sentences from dictation using taught sounds and tricky words.
- 11.1 Say it, then write it: Worksheet (PDF) · Answers (PDF) · lesson page
- 11.2 Sentences in order: first, next, then, after that, finally: Worksheet (PDF) · Answers (PDF) · lesson page
- 11.3 Planning a story with pictures: Worksheet (PDF) · Answers (PDF) · lesson page
- 11.4 Reading my writing back to check: Worksheet (PDF) · Answers (PDF) · lesson page
- 11.5 Labels, lists and captions: Worksheet (PDF) · Answers (PDF) · lesson page
- 11.6 Writing sentences from dictation: Worksheet (PDF) · Answers (PDF) · lesson page
- Check-up and end-of-chapter quiz: Worksheet (PDF) · Answers (PDF) · lesson page
Exercise P Do you remember?
Method. Look at the end of each sentence.
- Look at sentence A. It ends with the word red. There is no full stop.The bus is red
- Look at sentence B. It ends with a small dot, which is a full stop.The bus is red.
- Write the answer. B
Check. Read both out loud. Only B stops with a dot. ✓
Watch out. A full stop is the small dot at the end of a sentence that tells something.
Method. A sentence makes sense on its own and tells a whole idea.
- Read A. It tells us where, but not who did something.On the mat
- Read B. It tells us which cat, and what it did.The cat sat on the mat.
- Write the answer. B
Check. Read B out loud. It makes sense on its own. ✓
Watch out. Long is not the same as a sentence. Check that it tells a whole idea.
Method. Find the tricky word that makes sense in the gap.
- Read the sentence. Someone says hello, so we need a word for speaking.Sam ___ hello.
- Find the tricky word. The tricky word said is spelled s-a-i-d, but it sounds like sed.said
- Write the answer. said
Check. Read the sentence: Sam said hello. It makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Learn said as a tricky word. The ai does not make the sound you might expect.
Method. Look for two letters that work together.
- Say the word slowly. Listen for the sound at the start.ship
- Find the two letters. The letters s and h together make one sound, as in shop.sh
- Write the answer. sh
Check. Say ship with the letters sh at the start: sh-i-p. ✓
Watch out. Keep s and h together. They make one sound, not two.
Key words. A word is a group of letters that we say together, like cat.
Method. Say the sentence out loud. Touch a finger for each word, then count them.
- Say the sentence. Say it slowly, one word at a time.Ben has a red bag.
- Count the words. Each word is a group of letters with a space on each side.Ben / has / a / red / bag
- Write the answer. The full stop is not a word, so do not count it.5 words
Check. Count again from the last word back to the first: 5 words. ✓
Watch out. Do not count the full stop as a word.
Say it, then write it
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Writers do not start by writing. First they say the sentence out loud. Saying it helps you hear if it makes sense, and it helps you count the words.
Look at the cat. We can say: The cat is orange. Say it again, slowly, and touch a finger for each word. Then write it on paper, with a space between each word, a capital letter at the start and a full stop at the end.
Key ideas
- Say the sentence out loud before you write it.
- A sentence tells who or what it is about, and something true about it.
- Leave a space between each word.
- Start with a capital letter and end with a full stop.
Method. Look at the picture, say a sentence out loud, then write it on paper.
- Look at the picture. The picture shows a cat.a cat
- Say a sentence about it. A sentence tells who or what it is about, and something true about it.The cat is orange.
- Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave a space between words and end with a full stop.The cat is orange.
Check. Read it aloud. It is about the cat and it has 4 words. ✓
Watch out. Say the sentence before you write it. Each word should match something in the picture.
Method. Look at the picture, say a sentence out loud, then write it on paper.
- Look at the picture. The picture shows a sun.a sun
- Say a sentence about it. A sentence tells who or what it is about, and something true about it.The sun is yellow.
- Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave a space between words and end with a full stop.The sun is yellow.
Check. Read it aloud. It is about the sun and it has 4 words. ✓
Watch out. Say the sentence before you write it. Each word should match something in the picture.
Key words. A word is a group of letters that we say together, like cat.
Method. Say the sentence out loud. Touch a finger for each word, then count them.
- Say the sentence. Say it slowly, one word at a time.The dog is brown.
- Count the words. Each word is a group of letters with a space on each side.The / dog / is / brown
- Write the answer. The full stop is not a word, so do not count it.4 words
Check. Count again from the last word back to the first: 4 words. ✓
Watch out. Do not count the full stop as a word.
Watch out
Watch out: a sentence you only think about can change when you write it down. Say it out loud first, then read what you wrote, and check that it matches what you said.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Point to a toy or a picture and ask: “Tell me one sentence about it.” Say it back together, slowly. Practise on paper: your child writes the same sentence on paper, with a finger-width space between each word.
Exercise 11A Saying a sentence, then writing it
Method. Look at the picture, say a sentence out loud, then write it on paper.
- Look at the picture. The picture shows a cat.a cat
- Say a sentence about it. A sentence tells who or what it is about, and something true about it.The cat is orange.
- Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave a space between words and end with a full stop.The cat is orange.
Check. Read it aloud. It is about the cat and it has 4 words. ✓
Watch out. Say the sentence before you write it. Each word should match something in the picture.
Method. Look at the picture, say a sentence out loud, then write it on paper.
- Look at the picture. The picture shows a dog.a dog
- Say a sentence about it. A sentence tells who or what it is about, and something true about it.The dog is brown.
- Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave a space between words and end with a full stop.The dog is brown.
Check. Read it aloud. It is about the dog and it has 4 words. ✓
Watch out. Say the sentence before you write it. Each word should match something in the picture.
Method. Look at the picture, say a sentence out loud, then write it on paper.
- Look at the picture. The picture shows a ball.a ball
- Say a sentence about it. A sentence tells who or what it is about, and something true about it.The ball is red.
- Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave a space between words and end with a full stop.The ball is red.
Check. Read it aloud. It is about the ball and it has 4 words. ✓
Watch out. Say the sentence before you write it. Each word should match something in the picture.
Method. Look at the picture, say a sentence out loud, then write it on paper.
- Look at the picture. The picture shows a sun.a sun
- Say a sentence about it. A sentence tells who or what it is about, and something true about it.The sun is yellow.
- Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave a space between words and end with a full stop.The sun is yellow.
Check. Read it aloud. It is about the sun and it has 4 words. ✓
Watch out. Say the sentence before you write it. Each word should match something in the picture.
Method. Look at the picture, say a sentence out loud, then write it on paper.
- Look at the picture. The picture shows a book.a book
- Say a sentence about it. A sentence tells who or what it is about, and something true about it.The book is blue.
- Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave a space between words and end with a full stop.The book is blue.
Check. Read it aloud. It is about the book and it has 4 words. ✓
Watch out. Say the sentence before you write it. Each word should match something in the picture.
Method. Look at the picture, say a sentence out loud, then write it on paper.
- Look at the picture. The picture shows a fish.a fish
- Say a sentence about it. A sentence tells who or what it is about, and something true about it.The fish is orange.
- Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave a space between words and end with a full stop.The fish is orange.
Check. Read it aloud. It is about the fish and it has 4 words. ✓
Watch out. Say the sentence before you write it. Each word should match something in the picture.
Method. Look at the picture, say a sentence out loud, then write it on paper.
- Look at the picture. The picture shows a bus.a bus
- Say a sentence about it. A sentence tells who or what it is about, and something true about it.The bus is yellow.
- Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave a space between words and end with a full stop.The bus is yellow.
Check. Read it aloud. It is about the bus and it has 4 words. ✓
Watch out. Say the sentence before you write it. Each word should match something in the picture.
Method. Find the word that starts the sentence, then put the rest in an order that makes sense.
- Look at the words. One word starts the sentence. It needs a capital letter.a / ball / has / Leo
- Put the words in order. Read the words in order, and check they make sense together.Leo has a ball.
- Write the sentence. Add a capital letter at the start and a full stop at the end.Leo has a ball.
Check. Read it aloud. It makes sense and it tells a whole idea. ✓
Watch out. Put the name first, then what happens or what is true about it.
Method. Check the first letter and the end of the sentence.
- Read the sentence out loud. Listen for the places that do not sound finished.the bus is big
- Fix what is wrong. The first word needs a capital letter, and the sentence needs a full stop at the end.The bus is big.
- Write the sentence correctly. The bus is big.
Check. Read the new sentence aloud. It starts with a capital and ends with a full stop. ✓
Watch out. Change only the letters or marks that are wrong. Check the start and the end.
Key words. A word is a group of letters that we say together, like cat.
Method. Say the sentence out loud. Touch a finger for each word, then count them.
- Say the sentence. Say it slowly, one word at a time.Ella has a big bag.
- Count the words. Each word is a group of letters with a space on each side.Ella / has / a / big / bag
- Write the answer. The full stop is not a word, so do not count it.5 words
Check. Count again from the last word back to the first: 5 words. ✓
Watch out. Do not count the full stop as a word.
Method. Read the words in the order they are given. Then decide if the order makes sense.
- Read the words. Say them out loud, one after another.sun / the / is / hot
- Check the order. A sentence puts the words in an order that makes sense: the sun is hot, not sun the is hot.The sun is hot.
- Write the answer. The words are right when they are put in the right order.No. The sun is hot.
Check. Read your new sentence aloud. It makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Saying it aloud is how you hear that the words are in the wrong order.
Sentences in order: first, next, then, after that, finally
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A story, or a recount, tells what happened. It tells the events in the order they happened. Words such as first, next, then, after that and finally help us to follow the order.
Look at the party. Ali has a birthday party first. Friends come next. Then they sing. After that they eat cake. Finally Ali opens his gifts.
Key ideas
- First is the start of the story.
- Next, then and after that come in the middle.
- Finally is the end of the story.
- Put the events in the order they happen.
Method. Think about which thing happens at the start of the party.
- Read both sentences. Look for the one that could happen first.They sing a happy song. Ali has a birthday party.
- Think about the order. Before the friends come, the party has to start.The party starts, then the singing comes.
- Write the answer. The sentence that comes first is the one about the party.Ali has a birthday party.
Check. Read the story in order: party, then singing. It makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Look for the start of the story first, then the events after it.
Method. Put the first event first, then the next event.
- Look at the two sentences. One happens first, and one happens after.They sing a happy song. / Ali has a birthday party.
- Put the first event first. The party starts before the singing. Add first to the start.First Ali has a birthday party.
- Add the next event. The singing comes after. Then shows the order.First Ali has a birthday party. Then they sing a happy song.
Check. Read both sentences aloud. They are in order and they make sense. ✓
Watch out. Put first at the start, and then before the event that comes after.
Method. Write one sentence for each picture, in order, with a sequence word for each.
- Picture 1. The first picture starts the story.First Ali has a birthday party.
- Picture 2 to picture 4. Use next, then and after that for the middle pictures.Next friends come to the party. Then they sing a happy song. After that they eat birthday cake.
- Picture 5. The last picture ends the story, so use finally.First Ali has a birthday party. Next friends come to the party. Then they sing a happy song. After that they eat birthday cake. Finally Ali opens his gifts.
Check. Read the story aloud. It goes in the same order as the pictures. ✓
Watch out. Each new sentence starts with a capital letter and ends with a full stop. Words such as next and then go inside the sentence, not before it.
Watch out
Watch out: finally is for the last thing, not for the first. Do not start a story with Finally. Also write the words in the sentence in the right order, so the story runs from start to end.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask: “What happened first? What happened next? What happened at the end?” Practise on paper: draw three boxes and draw one thing that happened in each. Your child writes first, then, finally above them.
Exercise 11B Putting sentences in order
A Sam goes home.
B Sam kicks a ball.
C Sam walks to the park.
D Sam plays on the swing.
Key words. The order is the way things happen, one after another.
Method. Start with the first thing that happens. Then find the next thing, and the next, in order.
- Find the first thing. It is the sentence that comes at the start of the story.C: Sam walks to the park.
- Follow the story in order. Each sentence follows on from the one before it.C → D → B → A
- Write the letters in order. The answer is the letters, first to last.C, D, B, A
Check. Read the sentences in the order you wrote them. The story makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Do not put the last thing first. Look for “first” and “finally” clues in the story.
A Mia goes in and gets dry.
B Mia puts on her boots.
C Mia jumps in a puddle.
D Mia opens her umbrella.
Key words. The order is the way things happen, one after another.
Method. Start with the first thing that happens. Then find the next thing, and the next, in order.
- Find the first thing. It is the sentence that comes at the start of the story.B: Mia puts on her boots.
- Follow the story in order. Each sentence follows on from the one before it.B → D → C → A
- Write the letters in order. The answer is the letters, first to last.B, D, C, A
Check. Read the sentences in the order you wrote them. The story makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Do not put the last thing first. Look for “first” and “finally” clues in the story.
Key words. First is the start. Finally is the end. Next, then and after that go in between.
Method. Think about when the thing happens in the story.
- Read the sentence. Think about where it comes in the story.First Sam walks to the park.
- Pick the sequence word that shows the order. It is the first thing that happens, so it goes at the start.First = the order word
- Write the answer. First
Check. Read the story out loud with the word in place. It makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Sequence words show the order: first, next, then, after that and finally.
Method. Read the sentence with the gap. Try the word in the gap, and check it makes sense.
- Read the sentence with the gap. Think about what the sentence is saying.Sam walks to the park. ___ Sam plays on the swing.
- Try the word in the gap. The swing comes after the walk, so we need a word for the next thing. Then fits. Next is also correct.Sam walks to the park. Then Sam plays on the swing.
- Write the word. Then
Check. Read the whole sentence again. It makes sense with Then. ✓
Watch out. Try each choice in the gap. Only one choice makes the sentence sensible.
Key words. First is the start. Finally is the end. Next, then and after that go in between.
Method. Think about when the thing happens in the story.
- Read the sentence. Think about where it comes in the story.Finally Sam goes home.
- Pick the sequence word that shows the order. Finally tells us the last thing in the story.finally = the order word
- Write the answer. finally
Check. Read the story out loud with the word in place. It makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Sequence words show the order: first, next, then, after that and finally.
Key words. Finally is a sequence word. It tells us the order things happen.
Method. Put the new word at the front, then check the capital letter.
- Look at the sentence. It is the sentence we want to change.Sam goes home.
- Add the word at the front. Finally tells us that this is the last thing in the story.Finally + Sam goes home.
- Write the sentence. The first word has a capital letter. Names keep their capital letters too.Finally Sam goes home.
Check. Read the new sentence aloud. It makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Start the new word with a capital letter. Keep the names with capital letters.
Key words. Finally is a sequence word. It tells us the order things happen.
Method. Put the new word at the front, then check the capital letter.
- Look at the sentence. It is the sentence we want to change.Ali opens his gifts.
- Add the word at the front. Picture 5 is the last thing in the party story.Finally + Ali opens his gifts.
- Write the sentence. The first word has a capital letter. Names keep their capital letters too.Finally Ali opens his gifts.
Check. Read the new sentence aloud. It makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Start the new word with a capital letter. Keep the names with capital letters.
A They eat birthday cake.
B Ali opens his gifts.
C Friends come to the party.
D Ali has a birthday party.
E They sing a happy song.
Key words. The order is the way things happen, one after another.
Method. Start with the first thing that happens. Then find the next thing, and the next, in order.
- Find the first thing. It is the sentence that comes at the start of the story.D: Ali has a birthday party.
- Follow the story in order. Each sentence follows on from the one before it.D → C → E → A → B
- Write the letters in order. The answer is the letters, first to last.D, C, E, A, B
Check. Read the sentences in the order you wrote them. The story makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Do not put the last thing first. Look for “first” and “finally” clues in the story.
Method. Find the sentence in the story, then find the one that comes next.
- Find the sentence. Friends come to the party is picture 2.Friends come to the party.
- Look at the next picture. The next picture is picture 3, with the singing.They sing a happy song.
- Write the sentence. They sing a happy song.
Check. Read the two sentences in order. They make sense. ✓
Watch out. Look at the picture numbers, not the words, to find what comes next.
Method. Think about the word finally.
- Read the word. Finally means the last one, or at the end.finally
- Think about a story. The last thing that happens is put at the end, with finally.the last event in the story
- Write the reason. It tells us the last thing that happens in the story.
Check. Read the story and check finally is at the end. ✓
Watch out. Finally is used once, at the end. It is not used at the start.
Method. Read the sentences in the order they are written. Then decide if the order is right.
- Read the first sentence. Finally is for the last thing in the story.Finally Leo goes to bed.
- Read the second sentence. First is for the first thing in the story. Leo has tea before he goes to bed.First Leo has his tea.
- Decide. Going to bed is the last thing, so finally should be on the bed sentence, and first on the tea sentence. These are swapped.No. First Leo has his tea, and finally he goes to bed.
Check. Read the corrected story aloud. It is in order. ✓
Watch out. Check the word first and the word finally against what happens in the story.
Planning a story with pictures
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Before you write a story, plan it with pictures. Draw a box for each thing that happens. Then look at your boxes and write one sentence under each one.
Here is a plan for a day at the park. There is one picture for each sentence. Pictures 1 to 4 go in order, from left to right.
Key ideas
- A plan has one picture for each sentence.
- Read the pictures from left to right.
- Write one sentence under each picture, in the same order.
- Join the sentences together to make a story.
Method. Look at picture 1, say what is happening, then write one sentence.
- Look at picture 1. The first picture shows Sam with the trees, by the path.Sam walks to the park.
- Say what is happening. The sentence says who, and what they do.Sam walks to the park.
- Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter and end with a full stop.Sam walks to the park.
Check. Read it aloud. It matches picture 1. ✓
Watch out. Write the sentence that matches the picture, not one about another picture.
Method. Look at picture 2, then start the sentence with the word then.
- Look at picture 2. Sam is on the swing.Sam plays on the swing.
- Add the sequence word. Then shows that this is the next thing in the story.Then Sam plays on the swing.
- Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter, because it starts the sentence.Then Sam plays on the swing.
Check. Read the story so far: Sam walks to the park. Then Sam plays on the swing. ✓
Watch out. Then starts with a capital letter when it begins a sentence.
Method. Join your four sentences in order. Add a sequence word to each one after the first.
- Start with picture 1. The story begins with the first sentence.Sam walks to the park.
- Add the next sentences. Use then, after that and finally for pictures 2, 3 and 4.Then Sam plays on the swing. After that Sam kicks a ball. Finally Sam goes home.
- Write the whole story. Read it aloud from start to end. It makes sense.Sam walks to the park. Then Sam plays on the swing. After that Sam kicks a ball. Finally Sam goes home.
Check. Read the story aloud. Each picture is in the story, in order. ✓
Watch out. Each sentence still needs its own full stop.
Watch out
Watch out: a plan is in order only when the pictures are in order. If a picture is out of place, the sentence under it will be out of place too. Look at each picture from left to right.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Ask: “What happens in this box?” Practise on paper: your child draws three or four boxes and draws one thing in each. Then they say each sentence aloud and write it under its picture.
Exercise 11C Planning and writing from pictures
Method. Look at the picture number, then write the sentence for it.
- Look at picture 2. Find the second box in the plan.Sam is on the swing.
- Say the sentence. Say it aloud first.Sam plays on the swing.
- Write it. Sam plays on the swing.
Check. Check it matches picture 2. ✓
Watch out. Each picture has one sentence. Do not add a sentence for a different picture.
Method. Look at picture 3, then write its sentence.
- Look at picture 3. Sam is kicking a ball.Sam kicks a ball.
- Say the sentence. Check the sentence says what is in the picture.Sam kicks a ball.
- Write it. Sam kicks a ball.
Check. Read it aloud. It matches picture 3. ✓
Watch out. Look for the thing in the picture, such as the ball.
Method. Look at picture 1 in the rain plan, then write its sentence.
- Look at picture 1. Mia is putting on her boots.Mia puts on her boots.
- Say the sentence. The sentence says who, and what she does.Mia puts on her boots.
- Write it. Mia puts on her boots.
Check. Read it aloud. It matches picture 1. ✓
Watch out. Write the sentence about the boots, which is the picture.
Method. Look at picture 2 in the rain plan, then start with then.
- Look at picture 2. Mia has her umbrella open.Mia opens her umbrella.
- Add the sequence word. Then tells us this comes next.Then Mia opens her umbrella.
- Write it. Then Mia opens her umbrella.
Check. Read the story so far. It makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Then starts with a capital letter.
Method. Look at picture 3 in the rain plan, then start with after that.
- Look at picture 3. Mia is in a puddle.Mia jumps in a puddle.
- Add the sequence words. After that tells us it comes later in the story.After that Mia jumps in a puddle.
- Write it. After that Mia jumps in a puddle.
Check. Read it aloud. It makes sense and matches picture 3. ✓
Watch out. After that has two words, and both go before the sentence.
Method. Look at picture 4 in the rain plan, then start with finally.
- Look at picture 4. Mia is back inside, and dry.Mia goes in and gets dry.
- Add the sequence word. Finally tells us this is the last thing in the story.Finally Mia goes in and gets dry.
- Write it. Finally Mia goes in and gets dry.
Check. Read the whole rain story aloud when you finish. ✓
Watch out. Finally is for the last picture.
Method. Think about which picture comes first in the story.
- Look at the plan. The boots come before she goes out with the umbrella.boots, umbrella
- Think about the order. Putting on boots comes before opening the umbrella and jumping in the puddle.boots first
- Write the answer. No. The boots picture comes first.
Check. Read the plan in order: boots, umbrella, puddle, home. ✓
Watch out. The first picture is always the one that happens first, not the one that looks nicest.
Method. Subtract the pictures Lia has from the sentences she wants.
- Count the sentences she wants. She wants 6 sentences, so she needs 6 pictures.6 sentences
- Count the pictures she has. She has 4 pictures.4 pictures
- Find the difference. Take the pictures she has from the sentences she wants.6 − 4 = 2
- Write the answer. 2 more pictures
Check. Check: 4 + 2 = 6 pictures. ✓
Watch out. One picture for each sentence. Count the gap, not the total.
Method. Use one sentence for each picture, in order, starting each with a sequence word.
- Picture 1. It starts the story, so use first.First Mia puts on her boots.
- Pictures 2 and 3. Use then and after that for the middle pictures.Then Mia opens her umbrella. After that Mia jumps in a puddle.
- Picture 4. The last picture is the end, so use finally.First Mia puts on her boots. Then Mia opens her umbrella. After that Mia jumps in a puddle. Finally Mia goes in and gets dry.
Check. Read the story aloud. It has four sentences, one for each picture. ✓
Watch out. Use the sequence words in order: first, then, after that, finally.
Method. Plan two pictures, then write two sentences in order.
- Plan two pictures. Draw a first picture and a second picture about the dog.dog, then the next thing the dog does
- Write the first sentence. Start with first.First the dog ...
- Write the second sentence. Start with then, so the reader knows it comes next.Then the dog ...
Check. Read your two sentences aloud. They are in order. ✓
Watch out. Any true story about the dog is right, as long as the two sentences are in order.
Method. Think about whether the story runs in the order that things happen.
- Read the plan. Tom has the swing before the walk.swing, then walk
- Think about what happens first. Sam must walk to the park before he can play on the swing.walk, then swing
- Write the answer. No. Sam walks to the park first, then plays on the swing.
Check. Read the plan aloud in the right order. It makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Think about what must happen before the next thing can happen.
Reading my writing back to check
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Good writers read their writing back. Read it aloud, slowly. Ask yourself: Does it make sense? If a sentence sounds strange, or a word is missing, change it.
Check the start and the end of each sentence too. Does it begin with a capital letter? Does it end with a full stop? Are there spaces between the words?
Key ideas
- Read your writing out loud, slowly.
- Ask: does it make sense?
- Check each sentence starts with a capital letter and ends with a full stop.
- Check that a word has not been left out, and that the words are in the right order.
Method. Check the first letter and the end of the sentence.
- Read the sentence out loud. Listen for the places that do not sound finished.the dog ran to the park
- Fix what is wrong. The first word needs a capital letter, and the sentence needs a full stop.The dog ran to the park.
- Write the sentence correctly. The dog ran to the park.
Check. Read the new sentence aloud. It starts with a capital and ends with a full stop. ✓
Watch out. Change only the letters or marks that are wrong. Check the start and the end.
Method. Read the sentence with the gap. Try each word in the gap.
- Read the sentence with the gap. Think about what Sam did.Sam went ___ the park.
- Try the words in the gap. Went to is the way we say where someone is going. Go and on do not make sense here.went to the park
- Write the word that makes sense. to
Check. Read the sentence with to in it: Sam went to the park. ✓
Watch out. Read the whole sentence with each word in the gap. Only one makes sense.
Method. Read each sentence. Look for the one that does not make sense.
- Read sentence 1. Sam has a red ball. This makes sense.Sam has a red ball.
- Read sentence 2 and 3. Sam kicks the ball. That makes sense too. A ball cannot be a bus.The ball is a bus.
- Write the answer. The sentence that does not make sense is the one about the bus.The ball is a bus.
Check. Read the story without the last sentence. It makes sense. ✓
Watch out. A sentence can have correct words and still not make sense.
Watch out
Watch out: a full stop or a capital letter can be missing and you may not notice when you read it in your head. Reading it aloud helps you hear where the sentence should stop, and where a word is missing.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Read your child’s writing back in a sensible voice, and ask: “Does that make sense?” Let your child find the mistake first. Practise on paper: write a short sentence with one mistake, and ask your child to find and fix it.
Exercise 11D Reading back and fixing mistakes
Method. Check the first letter and the end of the sentence.
- Read the sentence out loud. Listen for the places that do not sound finished.the cat sat on the mat
- Fix what is wrong. The first word needs a capital letter, and the sentence needs a full stop.The cat sat on the mat.
- Write the sentence correctly. The cat sat on the mat.
Check. Read the new sentence aloud. It starts with a capital and ends with a full stop. ✓
Watch out. Change only the letters or marks that are wrong. Check the start and the end.
Method. Check the first letter and the end of the sentence.
- Read the sentence out loud. Listen for the places that do not sound finished.Leo has a big dog
- Fix what is wrong. The sentence needs a full stop at the end.Leo has a big dog.
- Write the sentence correctly. Leo has a big dog.
Check. Read the new sentence aloud. It starts with a capital and ends with a full stop. ✓
Watch out. Change only the letters or marks that are wrong. Check the start and the end.
Method. Read the sentence with the gap. Try the word in the gap, and check it makes sense.
- Read the sentence with the gap. Think about what the sentence is saying.Mia ___ a red bag.
- Try the word in the gap. The gap needs a word that tells us what Mia owns. Has makes sense.Mia has a red bag.
- Write the word. has
Check. Read the whole sentence again. It makes sense with has. ✓
Watch out. Try each choice in the gap. Only one choice makes the sentence sensible.
Method. Read the sentence with the gap. Try the word in the gap, and check it makes sense.
- Read the sentence with the gap. Think about what the sentence is saying.The cat ___ on the mat.
- Try the word in the gap. Sat is a word for what the cat did. Sun and sock do not make sense.The cat sat on the mat.
- Write the word. sat
Check. Read the whole sentence again. It makes sense with sat. ✓
Watch out. Try each choice in the gap. Only one choice makes the sentence sensible.
Method. A sentence makes sense on its own and tells a whole idea.
- Read it out loud. Does it make sense on its own?Ben can run fast.
- Check what it tells us. It tells us who (Ben) and what he can do (run fast).a whole idea
- Write the answer. Yes
Check. Read it again. It makes sense. ✓
Watch out. A sentence can be short. Check that it tells a whole idea, not just a place or a thing.
Method. Check the first letter and the end of the sentence.
- Read the sentence out loud. Listen for the places that do not sound finished.I like to play in the sun
- Fix what is wrong. The sentence needs a full stop at the end.I like to play in the sun.
- Write the sentence correctly. I like to play in the sun.
Check. Read the new sentence aloud. It starts with a capital and ends with a full stop. ✓
Watch out. Change only the letters or marks that are wrong. Check the start and the end.
Method. Read the sentence with the gap. Try the word in the gap, and check it makes sense.
- Read the sentence with the gap. Think about what the sentence is saying.Sam went ___ the park.
- Try the word in the gap. Went to is how we say where someone is going.Sam went to the park.
- Write the word. to
Check. Read the whole sentence again. It makes sense with to. ✓
Watch out. Try each choice in the gap. Only one choice makes the sentence sensible.
Method. Read each sentence and find the one that does not make sense.
- Read the first sentence. The dog ran fast, which makes sense.The dog ran fast.
- Read the second sentence. A bus is not a cat, so this does not make sense.The bus is a cat.
- Write the answer. The bus is a cat.
Check. Read the first sentence again. It makes sense on its own. ✓
Watch out. Look for the sentence with words that do not match.
Method. Check the capital letter at the start. Leo is a name, so it needs a capital.
- Read the first word. The first word is Leo. It is a name.leo
- Check the first letter. The first letter of a sentence needs a capital, and so does a name.Leo
- Write the answer. Mia is not right. The first word must start with a capital letter.No. The first word needs a capital letter, because Leo is a name.
Check. Read the corrected sentence: Leo has a red hat. ✓
Watch out. Look at the first letter of the sentence. It needs a capital letter, not a small one.
Method. Think about the start and the end of the sentence.
- Look at the first letter. It is a small letter, but it should be a capital.we
- Look at the end. The sentence has no full stop at the end.the shop
- Write the answer. A capital letter at the start (We), and a full stop at the end.
Check. Read it again: We went to the shop. ✓
Watch out. Check the first letter and the last mark every time.
Method. Think about what happens when you say your writing out loud.
- Say the writing aloud. You can hear if a word is missing or in the wrong place.the ear hears a gap
- Listen for mistakes. A sentence that does not sound right does not make sense.it sounds wrong
- Write the answer. Reading aloud helps you hear mistakes, such as missing words or sentences that do not make sense.
Check. Read your answer aloud. It explains the reason. ✓
Watch out. Your ears can find a mistake that your eyes can miss.
Labels, lists and captions
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Some writing is short. A label names one thing in a picture, in one or two words. A list puts several things one under another, one on each line. A caption is a whole sentence that tells us about a picture.
Look at these things for drawing and writing. Each one could have a label.
Key ideas
- A label is one or two words that name one thing.
- A list has one thing on each line.
- A caption is a sentence, with a capital letter and a full stop.
- A caption tells us about the picture.
Method. Find the thing with a point, then write its name as a label.
- Look at the picture. Find the thing with a point at one end.the thing with a point
- Say its name. Say the name of the thing, in one word.pencil
- Write the label. pencil
Check. Check the spelling: p-e-n-c-i-l. ✓
Watch out. A label is one word here, not a sentence.
Key words. A list is things written one under another.
Method. Write each thing on its own line, one under the other.
- Look at the picture. Find each thing in the picture.ball, book, bus
- Write one thing on each line. Each thing gets its own line, so it is easy to read.ball
book
bus - Check the list. Count the things in the list and in the picture.3 things
Check. Check that each thing in the list is in the picture. ✓
Watch out. Do not write the things in one long line. A list has one thing on each line.
Method. A caption is a sentence that tells us about the picture.
- Look at the picture. The picture shows a fish.a fish
- Read the two captions. A caption must be a whole sentence about the fish. A is a sentence. B is one word.A: The fish is orange. B: fish
- Choose the caption. A: The fish is orange.
Check. Read A out loud. It tells us about the picture. ✓
Watch out. A caption is a whole sentence. One word is a label, not a caption.
Watch out
Watch out: a list is not one long line. Put each thing on its own line. A caption is a whole sentence, so it needs a capital letter and a full stop. A label does not need a full stop.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Walk around the house with your child, and ask them to label three things with one word each. Practise on paper: make a list of three toys, one on each line. Then write one caption about your child’s favourite toy.
Exercise 11E Labels, lists and captions
Key words. A label names one thing, in one or two words.
Method. A label is one or two words that name one thing.
- Look at the picture. Find the pencil.the pencil
- Say what it is in one word. A label names the thing and nothing else.pencil
- Write the label. pencil
Check. Check the spelling letter by letter: p · e · n · c · i · l. ✓
Watch out. A label is short. Write the name of the thing, not a sentence.
Key words. A label names one thing, in one or two words.
Method. A label is one or two words that name one thing.
- Look at the picture. Find the ruler.the ruler
- Say what it is in one word. A label names the thing and nothing else.ruler
- Write the label. ruler
Check. Check the spelling letter by letter: r · u · l · e · r. ✓
Watch out. A label is short. Write the name of the thing, not a sentence.
Key words. A label names one thing, in one or two words.
Method. A label is one or two words that name one thing.
- Look at the picture. Find the rubber.the rubber
- Say what it is in one word. A label names the thing and nothing else.rubber
- Write the label. rubber
Check. Check the spelling letter by letter: r · u · b · b · e · r. ✓
Watch out. A label is short. Write the name of the thing, not a sentence.
Key words. A label names one thing, in one or two words.
Method. A label is one or two words that name one thing.
- Look at the picture. Find the crayon.the crayon
- Say what it is in one word. A label names the thing and nothing else.crayon
- Write the label. crayon
Check. Check the spelling letter by letter: c · r · a · y · o · n. ✓
Watch out. A label is short. Write the name of the thing, not a sentence.
Key words. A list is things written one under another.
Method. Write each thing on its own line, one under the other.
- Look at the picture. Find each animal in the picture.cat, dog, fish
- Write one thing on each line. Each thing gets its own line, so it is easy to read.cat
dog
fish - Check the list. Count the things in the list and in the picture.3 things
Check. Check that each thing in the list is in the picture. ✓
Watch out. Do not write the things in one long line. A list has one thing on each line.
Key words. A list is things written one under another.
Method. Write each thing on its own line, one under the other.
- Look at the picture. Find each thing in the picture.ball, book, bus
- Write one thing on each line. Each thing gets its own line, so it is easy to read.ball
book
bus - Check the list. Count the things in the list and in the picture.3 things
Check. Check that each thing in the list is in the picture. ✓
Watch out. Do not write the things in one long line. A list has one thing on each line.
Method. A caption is a whole sentence about the picture.
- Look at the picture. It shows a cat.a cat
- Read the captions. A caption must be a sentence. B is just words with no full stop and no sense.A: The cat is orange. B: Cat orange
- Choose the caption. A: The cat is orange.
Check. Read A out loud. It tells us about the cat. ✓
Watch out. A caption tells us something about the picture in a whole sentence.
Key words. A caption is a sentence that tells about a picture.
Method. A caption is a sentence. It tells us about the picture.
- Look at the picture. The picture shows a sun.a sun
- Write a sentence about it. A caption is a whole sentence, so it needs a capital letter and a full stop.The sun is yellow.
- Check the caption. It must match the picture.The sun is yellow.
Check. Read the caption. Does it match the sun? ✓
Watch out. A caption is a sentence. A label is only a word or two.
Method. Each thing needs its own line in a list.
- Read the list. The things are all on one line.ball book bus
- Put each thing on its own line. A list has one thing on each line, one under the other.ball
book
bus - Write the list. Put each thing on its own line.
Check. Read the list down the page. It is easy to read. ✓
Watch out. One thing on each line makes a list easy to read.
Method. A label names a thing in one or two words. A caption is a whole sentence.
- Read A. It is one word, so it is a label.book
- Read B. It is a whole sentence with a capital and a full stop, so it is a caption.The book is blue.
- Write the answer. A is a label. B is a caption.
Check. Check A has one word and B has a whole sentence. ✓
Watch out. Count the words. Labels are short. Captions are whole sentences.
Key words. A label names one thing, in one or two words.
Method. A label is one or two words that name one thing.
- Look at the picture. Find the fish.the fish
- Say what it is in one word. A label names the thing and nothing else.fish
- Write the label. fish
Check. Check the spelling letter by letter: f · i · s · h. ✓
Watch out. A label is short. Write the name of the thing, not a sentence.
Key words. A caption is a sentence that tells about a picture.
Method. A caption is a sentence. It tells us about the picture.
- Look at the picture. The picture shows a dog.a dog
- Write a sentence about it. A caption is a whole sentence, so it needs a capital letter and a full stop.The dog is brown.
- Check the caption. It must match the picture.The dog is brown.
Check. Read the caption. Does it match the dog? ✓
Watch out. A caption is a sentence. A label is only a word or two.
Method. Write one label for each picture, in one or two words.
- Look at the first picture. It shows a book.book
- Look at the second picture. It shows a ball.ball
- Write the labels. Write them on one line, separated by a comma, or on two lines.book, ball
Check. Check each label names the thing next to it. ✓
Watch out. A label is short. One or two words is enough.
Method. Think about the job of each one.
- Think about a label. A label names one thing in one or two words.one word
- Think about a caption. A caption is a whole sentence that tells us about the picture.a sentence
- Write the answer. A label names the thing. A caption is a sentence that tells us what is happening in the picture.
Check. Read both out loud. A label is a name. A caption is a sentence. ✓
Watch out. Think of the label as a name tag, and the caption as the story about the picture.
Writing sentences from dictation
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Dictation means a grown-up reads a sentence aloud, and you write it down. Say each word slowly. Then think about the sounds in it. Use the letters you have learned for each sound. Sounds such as sh in ship need two letters. Tricky words, such as the, said and I, are written the way you learned them.
Look at how cat is written. Start the pencil at the top of each letter, and follow the arrow to the end.
Key ideas
- Say each word slowly, one sound at a time.
- Choose a letter, or two letters, for each sound.
- Tricky words are written the way you learned them.
- Start with a capital letter and end with a full stop.
Method. Say the sentence slowly, then write each word.
- Say each word. Listen to each sound in each word.The · cat · sat
- Write the letters. The is a tricky word. Cat uses c, a and t. Sat uses s, a and t.The, c-a-t, s-a-t
- Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter and end with a full stop.The cat sat.
Check. Read it back. It makes sense, with a capital letter and a full stop. ✓
Watch out. Write the tricky word the the way you learned it, not as it sounds.
Key words. A tricky word does not follow the usual sound, so it is learned by sight.
Method. Say each word slowly, one sound at a time. Write the letters for each sound, then the whole sentence.
- Say each word slowly. Hear each sound, then choose the letter or letters for it.Sam · has · a · red · bag
- Write the letters for each word. Some sounds need two letters, such as sh in ship. Tricky words are written as learned.Sam: s - a - m
has: tricky word, write it as you learned it
a: tricky word, write it as you learned it
red: r - e - d
bag: b - a - g - Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave spaces, and end with a full stop.Sam has a red bag.
Check. Read your sentence to the grown-up and check each word against the answer. ✓
Watch out. Check the tricky words first. Then check the capital letter at the start and the full stop at the end.
Key words. A tricky word does not follow the usual sound, so it is learned by sight.
Method. Say each word slowly, one sound at a time. Write the letters for each sound, then the whole sentence.
- Say each word slowly. Hear each sound, then choose the letter or letters for it.I · see · the · ship
- Write the letters for each word. Some sounds need two letters, such as sh in ship. Tricky words are written as learned.I: tricky word, write it as you learned it
see: s - ee
the: tricky word, write it as you learned it
ship: sh - i - p - Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave spaces, and end with a full stop.I see the ship.
Check. Read your sentence to the grown-up and check each word against the answer. ✓
Watch out. Check the tricky words first. Then check the capital letter at the start and the full stop at the end.
Watch out
Watch out: write the tricky words the way you learned them. said sounds like sed, but it is spelled s-a-i-d. Also remember the capital letter for I, and the full stop at the end.
Exam tip
Grown-up tip. Read the sentence aloud, slowly, from the page. Cover the sentence, and let your child write it on paper. Then uncover it and check together, word by word. Ask: “What sound is at the start of ship?” Let your child name the letters. Practise on paper: write c-a-t, s-a-t and m-a-t, one under the other, and then join them up.
Exercise 11F Dictation with sounds and tricky words
Key words. A tricky word does not follow the usual sound, so it is learned by sight.
Method. Say each word slowly, one sound at a time. Write the letters for each sound, then the whole sentence.
- Say each word slowly. Hear each sound, then choose the letter or letters for it.The · dog · is · in · the · sun
- Write the letters for each word. Some sounds need two letters, such as sh in ship. Tricky words are written as learned.The: tricky word, write it as you learned it
dog: d - o - g
is: tricky word, write it as you learned it
in: i - n
the: tricky word, write it as you learned it
sun: s - u - n - Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave spaces, and end with a full stop.The dog is in the sun.
Check. Read your sentence to the grown-up and check each word against the answer. ✓
Watch out. Check the tricky words first. Then check the capital letter at the start and the full stop at the end.
Key words. A tricky word does not follow the usual sound, so it is learned by sight.
Method. Say each word slowly, one sound at a time. Write the letters for each sound, then the whole sentence.
- Say each word slowly. Hear each sound, then choose the letter or letters for it.Ben · can · hop
- Write the letters for each word. Some sounds need two letters, such as sh in ship. Tricky words are written as learned.Ben: b - e - n
can: c - a - n
hop: h - o - p - Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave spaces, and end with a full stop.Ben can hop.
Check. Read your sentence to the grown-up and check each word against the answer. ✓
Watch out. Check the tricky words first. Then check the capital letter at the start and the full stop at the end.
Key words. A tricky word does not follow the usual sound, so it is learned by sight.
Method. Say each word slowly, one sound at a time. Write the letters for each sound, then the whole sentence.
- Say each word slowly. Hear each sound, then choose the letter or letters for it.She · has · a · cup
- Write the letters for each word. Some sounds need two letters, such as sh in ship. Tricky words are written as learned.She: tricky word, write it as you learned it
has: tricky word, write it as you learned it
a: tricky word, write it as you learned it
cup: c - u - p - Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave spaces, and end with a full stop.She has a cup.
Check. Read your sentence to the grown-up and check each word against the answer. ✓
Watch out. Check the tricky words first. Then check the capital letter at the start and the full stop at the end.
Key words. A tricky word does not follow the usual sound, so it is learned by sight.
Method. Say each word slowly, one sound at a time. Write the letters for each sound, then the whole sentence.
- Say each word slowly. Hear each sound, then choose the letter or letters for it.We · see · the · rain
- Write the letters for each word. Some sounds need two letters, such as sh in ship. Tricky words are written as learned.We: tricky word, write it as you learned it
see: s - ee
the: tricky word, write it as you learned it
rain: r - ai - n - Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave spaces, and end with a full stop.We see the rain.
Check. Read your sentence to the grown-up and check each word against the answer. ✓
Watch out. Check the tricky words first. Then check the capital letter at the start and the full stop at the end.
Key words. A tricky word does not follow the usual sound, so it is learned by sight.
Method. Say each word slowly, one sound at a time. Write the letters for each sound, then the whole sentence.
- Say each word slowly. Hear each sound, then choose the letter or letters for it.Tom · and · Mum · go · to · the · shop
- Write the letters for each word. Some sounds need two letters, such as sh in ship. Tricky words are written as learned.Tom: t - o - m
and: a - n - d
Mum: m - u - m
go: tricky word, write it as you learned it
to: tricky word, write it as you learned it
the: tricky word, write it as you learned it
shop: sh - o - p - Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave spaces, and end with a full stop.Tom and Mum go to the shop.
Check. Read your sentence to the grown-up and check each word against the answer. ✓
Watch out. Check the tricky words first. Then check the capital letter at the start and the full stop at the end.
Key words. A tricky word does not follow the usual sound, so it is learned by sight.
Method. Say each word slowly, one sound at a time. Write the letters for each sound, then the whole sentence.
- Say each word slowly. Hear each sound, then choose the letter or letters for it.Dad · put · the · bag · on · the · bed
- Write the letters for each word. Some sounds need two letters, such as sh in ship. Tricky words are written as learned.Dad: d - a - d
put: tricky word, write it as you learned it
the: tricky word, write it as you learned it
bag: b - a - g
on: o - n
the: tricky word, write it as you learned it
bed: b - e - d - Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave spaces, and end with a full stop.Dad put the bag on the bed.
Check. Read your sentence to the grown-up and check each word against the answer. ✓
Watch out. Check the tricky words first. Then check the capital letter at the start and the full stop at the end.
Method. Put the letters for each sound together, in order, to make one word.
- Look at the sounds. The letters f, r, o and g are the sounds in the word.f - r - o - g
- Join the letters in order. Read the letters from left to right, one after another.f r o g
- Write the word. frog
Check. Read frog out loud. It is one word. ✓
Watch out. Read the letters from left to right. Do not change the order.
Method. Put the letters for each sound together to make one word.
- Look at the sounds. The sh is one sound, so use both letters together.sh - i - p
- Join the letters in order. Read them from left to right.sh i p
- Write the word. ship
Check. Read ship out loud. It has four letters but three sounds. ✓
Watch out. Keep the letters s and h together. They make one sound.
Method. Find the tricky word that makes sense in the gap.
- Read the sentence. Someone says a word, so we need the word for speaking.Sam ___ “Hello.”
- Try the tricky word. Said is the word we use when someone speaks.Sam said “Hello.”
- Write the answer. said
Check. Read the sentence: Sam said Hello. It makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Said is a tricky word. Write it as s-a-i-d.
Key words. A tricky word does not follow the usual sound, so it is learned by sight.
Method. Say each word slowly, one sound at a time. Write the letters for each sound, then the whole sentence.
- Say each word slowly. Hear each sound, then choose the letter or letters for it.I · see · a · bee · in · the · tree
- Write the letters for each word. Some sounds need two letters, such as sh in ship. Tricky words are written as learned.I: tricky word, write it as you learned it
see: s - ee
a: tricky word, write it as you learned it
bee: b - ee
in: i - n
the: tricky word, write it as you learned it
tree: tr - ee - Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave spaces, and end with a full stop.I see a bee in the tree.
Check. Read your sentence to the grown-up and check each word against the answer. ✓
Watch out. Check the tricky words first. Then check the capital letter at the start and the full stop at the end.
Method. Check the first letter and the last mark of the sentence.
- Read the sentence. Ben is a name, so it needs a capital letter.ben can hop.
- Fix the start and the end. Use a capital B for Ben, and add a full stop after hop.Ben can hop.
- Write the answer. Ben can hop.
Check. Read it aloud. It starts with a capital and ends with a full stop. ✓
Watch out. Names need a capital letter, even in the middle of a sentence.
Chapter summary
| Skill | Method |
|---|---|
| Say it first | Say the sentence out loud, touch a finger for each word, then write it. |
| Order the story | Use first, next, then, after that and finally, in the order things happen. |
| Plan with pictures | Draw one picture for each sentence, in order. Write one sentence under each picture. |
| Read it back | Read it aloud. Check it makes sense, and check the capital letters, full stops and spaces. |
| Labels, lists and captions | A label is one or two words. A list has one thing on each line. A caption is a sentence. |
| Dictation | Say each word slowly. Choose a letter, or two letters, for each sound. Write tricky words as learned. |
Can you…?
- I can say a sentence out loud before I write it
- I can put sentences in order to tell a story
- I can use first, next, then, after that and finally
- I can plan a short story with pictures
- I can read my writing back and check that it makes sense
- I can write a label, a list and a caption
- I can write a short sentence from dictation, using the sounds and tricky words I know
Key terms
- recount
- a story that tells what happened, in the order it happened
- sequence word
- a word that shows the order of events, such as first, next, then, after that and finally
- plan
- a set of pictures or notes that shows what you will write, before you write it
- label
- one or two words that name a thing in a picture
- list
- several things written one under another, one on each line
- caption
- a whole sentence that tells us about a picture
- dictation
- a sentence that a grown-up reads aloud for you to write down
- tricky word
- a word that does not follow the usual sounds, so it is learned by sight
- read back
- to read your own writing again, to check it
Exercise 11Z Check-up
Key words. A word is a group of letters that we say together, like cat.
Method. Say the sentence out loud. Touch a finger for each word, then count them.
- Say the sentence. Say it slowly, one word at a time.We went to the park.
- Count the words. Each word is a group of letters with a space on each side.We / went / to / the / park
- Write the answer. The full stop is not a word, so do not count it.5 words
Check. Count again from the last word back to the first: 5 words. ✓
Watch out. Do not count the full stop as a word.
Key words. First is the start. Finally is the end. Next, then and after that go in between.
Method. Think about when the thing happens in the story.
- Read the sentence. Think about where it comes in the story.Finally Ali opens his gifts.
- Pick the sequence word that shows the order. Finally tells us the last thing in the story.finally = the order word
- Write the answer. finally
Check. Read the story out loud with the word in place. It makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Sequence words show the order: first, next, then, after that and finally.
A They eat birthday cake.
B Ali has a birthday party.
C Ali opens his gifts.
Key words. The order is the way things happen, one after another.
Method. Start with the first thing that happens. Then find the next thing, and the next, in order.
- Find the first thing. It is the sentence that comes at the start of the story.B: Ali has a birthday party.
- Follow the story in order. Each sentence follows on from the one before it.B → A → C
- Write the letters in order. The answer is the letters, first to last.B, A, C
Check. Read the sentences in the order you wrote them. The story makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Do not put the last thing first. Look for “first” and “finally” clues in the story.
Method. Check the first letter and the end of the sentence.
- Read the sentence out loud. Listen for the places that do not sound finished.the cat sat
- Fix what is wrong. The first word needs a capital letter, and the sentence needs a full stop.The cat sat.
- Write the sentence correctly. The cat sat.
Check. Read the new sentence aloud. It starts with a capital and ends with a full stop. ✓
Watch out. Change only the letters or marks that are wrong. Check the start and the end.
Method. Read the sentence with the gap. Try the word in the gap, and check it makes sense.
- Read the sentence with the gap. Think about what the sentence is saying.Sam ___ to the park.
- Try the word in the gap. Went makes sense: Sam went to the park.Sam went to the park.
- Write the word. went
Check. Read the whole sentence again. It makes sense with went. ✓
Watch out. Try each choice in the gap. Only one choice makes the sentence sensible.
Key words. A label names one thing, in one or two words.
Method. A label is one or two words that name one thing.
- Look at the picture. Find the rubber.the rubber
- Say what it is in one word. A label names the thing and nothing else.rubber
- Write the label. rubber
Check. Check the spelling letter by letter: r · u · b · b · e · r. ✓
Watch out. A label is short. Write the name of the thing, not a sentence.
Method. Choose the sentence that tells us about the sun.
- Read caption A. The sun is yellow is a whole sentence about the picture.The sun is yellow.
- Read caption B. Sun yellow is only two words, with no sense as a sentence.sun yellow
- Write the answer. A: The sun is yellow.
Check. Read A out loud. It tells us about the sun. ✓
Watch out. A caption is a whole sentence, with a capital letter and a full stop.
Key words. A tricky word does not follow the usual sound, so it is learned by sight.
Method. Say each word slowly, one sound at a time. Write the letters for each sound, then the whole sentence.
- Say each word slowly. Hear each sound, then choose the letter or letters for it.Pat · and · Sam · sit · on · a · mat
- Write the letters for each word. Some sounds need two letters, such as sh in ship. Tricky words are written as learned.Pat: p - a - t
and: a - n - d
Sam: s - a - m
sit: s - i - t
on: o - n
a: tricky word, write it as you learned it
mat: m - a - t - Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave spaces, and end with a full stop.Pat and Sam sit on a mat.
Check. Read your sentence to the grown-up and check each word against the answer. ✓
Watch out. Check the tricky words first. Then check the capital letter at the start and the full stop at the end.
Method. Write one sentence for each step, in order, with the sequence words.
- Step 1. The first thing is the swim.First Tom swims.
- Step 2. The next thing is drying off. Use then.Then Tom gets dry.
- Step 3. The last thing is lunch. Use finally.First Tom swims. Then Tom gets dry. Finally Tom eats lunch.
Check. Read the three sentences in order. They make a story. ✓
Watch out. Keep the order of the pictures, and start each sentence with its sequence word.
Method. Think about what happens when you check your writing again.
- Read your writing again. You can see if the sentences make sense.Does it make sense?
- Check the small things. You can find a missing word, a capital letter or a full stop.capital, full stop, spaces
- Write the reason. It shows if each sentence makes sense, and if a word, a capital or a full stop is missing.
Check. Read your answer aloud. It gives one clear reason. ✓
Watch out. Read it again with fresh eyes, and the mistakes often show.
Total 14 marks. Allow about 14 minutes.
Exercise 11X End-of-chapter quiz
Key words. A word is a group of letters that we say together, like cat.
Method. Say the sentence out loud. Touch a finger for each word, then count them.
- Say the sentence. Say it slowly, one word at a time.The big cat sat down.
- Count the words. Each word is a group of letters with a space on each side.The / big / cat / sat / down
- Write the answer. The full stop is not a word, so do not count it.5 words
Check. Count again from the last word back to the first: 5 words. ✓
Watch out. Do not count the full stop as a word.
Method. A sentence makes sense on its own and tells a whole idea.
- Read A. It tells us where, but not who did something.In the park
- Read B. It tells us who, and what Sam does.Sam plays.
- Write the answer. B: Sam plays.
Check. Read B aloud. It makes sense on its own. ✓
Watch out. A sentence tells a whole idea, even when it is short.
Key words. First is the start. Finally is the end. Next, then and after that go in between.
Method. Think about when the thing happens in the story.
- Read the sentence. Think about where it comes in the story.First Sam walks to the park.
- Pick the sequence word that shows the order. First shows the start of the story.First = the order word
- Write the answer. B
Check. Read the story out loud with the word in place. It makes sense. ✓
Watch out. Sequence words show the order: first, next, then, after that and finally.
Key words. A label names one thing, in one or two words.
Method. A label is one or two words that name one thing.
- Look at the picture. Find the ruler.the ruler
- Say what it is in one word. A label names the thing and nothing else.ruler
- Write the label. ruler
Check. Check the spelling letter by letter: r · u · l · e · r. ✓
Watch out. A label is short. Write the name of the thing, not a sentence.
Method. A caption is a whole sentence that tells us about the picture.
- Look at the picture. It shows a book.a book
- Read the two captions. A is a whole sentence about the book. B is one word.A: The book is blue. B: book
- Choose the caption. A: The book is blue.
Check. Read A aloud. It tells us about the book. ✓
Watch out. A caption is a whole sentence. One word is a label, not a caption.
Method. Check the first letter and the end of the sentence.
- Read the sentence out loud. Listen for the places that do not sound finished.ben went to the shop
- Fix what is wrong. Ben is a name, so it needs a capital letter. The sentence needs a full stop.Ben went to the shop.
- Write the sentence correctly. Ben went to the shop.
Check. Read the new sentence aloud. It starts with a capital and ends with a full stop. ✓
Watch out. Change only the letters or marks that are wrong. Check the start and the end.
Method. Write one sentence for each picture, starting with the sequence words.
- Picture 1. The first picture starts the story.First Mia puts on her boots.
- Picture 2. The next picture uses then.Then Mia opens her umbrella.
- Write both sentences. First Mia puts on her boots. Then Mia opens her umbrella.
Check. Read both sentences aloud. They are in order. ✓
Watch out. Start the first sentence with First and the second with Then.
Key words. A tricky word does not follow the usual sound, so it is learned by sight.
Method. Say each word slowly, one sound at a time. Write the letters for each sound, then the whole sentence.
- Say each word slowly. Hear each sound, then choose the letter or letters for it.The · dog · ran · to · the · van
- Write the letters for each word. Some sounds need two letters, such as sh in ship. Tricky words are written as learned.The: tricky word, write it as you learned it
dog: d - o - g
ran: r - a - n
to: tricky word, write it as you learned it
the: tricky word, write it as you learned it
van: v - a - n - Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave spaces, and end with a full stop.The dog ran to the van.
Check. Read your sentence to the grown-up and check each word against the answer. ✓
Watch out. Check the tricky words first. Then check the capital letter at the start and the full stop at the end.
Method. Read the sentence with the gap. Try the word in the gap, and check it makes sense.
- Read the sentence with the gap. Think about what the sentence is saying.Tom ___ a bat.
- Try the word in the gap. Has tells us what Tom owns. Is and was do not make sense here.Tom has a bat.
- Write the word. has
Check. Read the whole sentence again. It makes sense with has. ✓
Watch out. Try each choice in the gap. Only one choice makes the sentence sensible.
Method. Think about what reading again tells you.
- Think about the first reading. When you write, you may miss a word or a full stop.missing word
- Think about the second reading. A second read helps you check that it all makes sense.does it make sense?
- Write the reason. It helps you find missing words and mistakes, and check that the writing makes sense.
Check. Read your answer aloud. It gives a clear reason. ✓
Watch out. Read your writing back before you say it is finished.