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Year 1 · Chapter 11

Year 1 English Writing Your Own Sentences and Stories: worked examples and questions with answers

By the end of this chapter you will be able to

  • Say a sentence out loud before I write it
  • Put sentences in the right order to tell a story
  • Use first, next, then, after that and finally
  • Plan a short story with pictures
  • Read my writing back and check that it makes sense
  • Write a label, a list and a caption
  • Write a short sentence from dictation, using the sounds and tricky words I know

You should already know

  • Sentences, capital letters and full stops (Chapter 6)
  • The sounds and spellings taught in Chapters 1 to 3
  • Tricky words (Chapter 4)

Where this leads

  • Getting ready for the phonics check (Chapter 12)
  • Longer stories and recounts in Year 2

National Curriculum for England, Key Stage 1 English, Year 1. Content: Say a sentence out loud before writing it, Write sentences in order to tell a story or recount, Use first, next, then, after that and finally to put events in order, Re-read writing to check it makes sense, Plan writing with pictures, Write labels, lists and captions, Write simple sentences from dictation using taught sounds and tricky words.

Printable worksheets. Every lesson in this chapter has a free worksheet and an answer sheet to download and print.

Exercise P  Do you remember?

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FWhich sentence has a full stop at the end? A: The bus is red B: The bus is red.
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FWhich group of words is a sentence? A: On the mat B: The cat sat on the mat.
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FWrite the tricky word said in the gap: Sam ___ hello.
Hello!
4
FWhich two letters make one sound in ship?
5
FHow many words are in Ben has a red bag.?
11.1

Say it, then write it

Year 1
Say a sentence out loud before writing it, Write a sentence about a picture

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Video lesson: Say it, then write itComing soon

Writers do not start by writing. First they say the sentence out loud. Saying it helps you hear if it makes sense, and it helps you count the words.

Look at the cat. We can say: The cat is orange. Say it again, slowly, and touch a finger for each word. Then write it on paper, with a space between each word, a capital letter at the start and a full stop at the end.

Say a sentence about one of these pictures, then write it.

Key ideas

  • Say the sentence out loud before you write it.
  • A sentence tells who or what it is about, and something true about it.
  • Leave a space between each word.
  • Start with a capital letter and end with a full stop.
Worked example 11.1.1
Look at the cat. Say a sentence about it, then write it.

Method. Look at the picture, say a sentence out loud, then write it on paper.

  1. Look at the picture. The picture shows a cat.
    a cat
  2. Say a sentence about it. A sentence tells who or what it is about, and something true about it.
    The cat is orange.
  3. Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave a space between words and end with a full stop.
    The cat is orange.

Check. Read it aloud. It is about the cat and it has 4 words. ✓

Watch out. Say the sentence before you write it. Each word should match something in the picture.

Worked example 11.1.2
Look at the sun. Say a sentence about it, then write it.

Method. Look at the picture, say a sentence out loud, then write it on paper.

  1. Look at the picture. The picture shows a sun.
    a sun
  2. Say a sentence about it. A sentence tells who or what it is about, and something true about it.
    The sun is yellow.
  3. Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave a space between words and end with a full stop.
    The sun is yellow.

Check. Read it aloud. It is about the sun and it has 4 words. ✓

Watch out. Say the sentence before you write it. Each word should match something in the picture.

Worked example 11.1.3
Say this sentence out loud: The dog is brown. How many words are in it?

Key words. A word is a group of letters that we say together, like cat.

Method. Say the sentence out loud. Touch a finger for each word, then count them.

  1. Say the sentence. Say it slowly, one word at a time.
    The dog is brown.
  2. Count the words. Each word is a group of letters with a space on each side.
    The / dog / is / brown
  3. Write the answer. The full stop is not a word, so do not count it.
    4 words

Check. Count again from the last word back to the first: 4 words. ✓

Watch out. Do not count the full stop as a word.

Watch out

Watch out: a sentence you only think about can change when you write it down. Say it out loud first, then read what you wrote, and check that it matches what you said.

Exam tip

Grown-up tip. Point to a toy or a picture and ask: “Tell me one sentence about it.” Say it back together, slowly. Practise on paper: your child writes the same sentence on paper, with a finger-width space between each word.

Exercise 11A  Saying a sentence, then writing it

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FLook at the cat. Write a sentence that tells its colour.
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FLook at the dog. Write a sentence that tells its colour.
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FLook at the ball. Write a sentence that tells its colour.
4
FLook at the sun. Write a sentence that tells its colour.
5
FLook at the book. Write a sentence that tells its colour.
6
FLook at the fish. Write a sentence that tells its colour.
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FLook at the bus. Write a sentence that tells its colour.
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FPut these words in the right order to make a sentence: a / ball / has / Leo
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FWrite this sentence with a capital letter and a full stop: the bus is big
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FHow many words are in Ella has a big bag.?
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RAli says: sun the is hot. Is it a sentence? Write the words in the right order.
11.2

Sentences in order: first, next, then, after that, finally

Year 1
Write sentences in order to tell a story or recount, Use first, next, then, after that and finally

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Video lesson: Sentences in order: first, next, then, after that, finallyComing soon

A story, or a recount, tells what happened. It tells the events in the order they happened. Words such as first, next, then, after that and finally help us to follow the order.

Look at the party. Ali has a birthday party first. Friends come next. Then they sing. After that they eat cake. Finally Ali opens his gifts.

firstnextthenafter thatfinally
Five pictures, in order: first, next, then, after that, finally.

Key ideas

  • First is the start of the story.
  • Next, then and after that come in the middle.
  • Finally is the end of the story.
  • Put the events in the order they happen.
Worked example 11.2.1
Which sentence comes first in the birthday story? A: Ali opens his gifts. B: Ali has a birthday party.

Method. Think about which thing happens at the start of the party.

  1. Read both sentences. Look for the one that could happen first.
    They sing a happy song.   Ali has a birthday party.
  2. Think about the order. Before the friends come, the party has to start.
    The party starts, then the singing comes.
  3. Write the answer. The sentence that comes first is the one about the party.
    Ali has a birthday party.

Check. Read the story in order: party, then singing. It makes sense. ✓

Watch out. Look for the start of the story first, then the events after it.

Worked example 11.2.2
Put these two sentences in order, using first and then: They sing a happy song. Ali has a birthday party.

Method. Put the first event first, then the next event.

  1. Look at the two sentences. One happens first, and one happens after.
    They sing a happy song. / Ali has a birthday party.
  2. Put the first event first. The party starts before the singing. Add first to the start.
    First Ali has a birthday party.
  3. Add the next event. The singing comes after. Then shows the order.
    First Ali has a birthday party. Then they sing a happy song.

Check. Read both sentences aloud. They are in order and they make sense. ✓

Watch out. Put first at the start, and then before the event that comes after.

Worked example 11.2.3
Use all five sequence words to tell the birthday story, one sentence for each picture.

Method. Write one sentence for each picture, in order, with a sequence word for each.

  1. Picture 1. The first picture starts the story.
    First Ali has a birthday party.
  2. Picture 2 to picture 4. Use next, then and after that for the middle pictures.
    Next friends come to the party. Then they sing a happy song. After that they eat birthday cake.
  3. Picture 5. The last picture ends the story, so use finally.
    First Ali has a birthday party. Next friends come to the party. Then they sing a happy song. After that they eat birthday cake. Finally Ali opens his gifts.

Check. Read the story aloud. It goes in the same order as the pictures. ✓

Watch out. Each new sentence starts with a capital letter and ends with a full stop. Words such as next and then go inside the sentence, not before it.

Watch out

Watch out: finally is for the last thing, not for the first. Do not start a story with Finally. Also write the words in the sentence in the right order, so the story runs from start to end.

Exam tip

Grown-up tip. Ask: “What happened first? What happened next? What happened at the end?” Practise on paper: draw three boxes and draw one thing that happened in each. Your child writes first, then, finally above them.

Exercise 11B  Putting sentences in order

1
FPut these sentences in story order. Write the letters, first to last.
A  Sam goes home.
B  Sam kicks a ball.
C  Sam walks to the park.
D  Sam plays on the swing.
2
FPut these sentences in story order. Write the letters, first to last.
A  Mia goes in and gets dry.
B  Mia puts on her boots.
C  Mia jumps in a puddle.
D  Mia opens her umbrella.
3
FWrite the sequence word for the gap: ___ Sam walks to the park.
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FFill the gap with a sequence word: Sam walks to the park. ___ Sam plays on the swing.
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FWhich sequence word tells us the last thing in a story? Write it: first, next or finally.
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FWrite this sentence with Finally at the start: Sam goes home.
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PSLook at picture 5. Write its sentence and begin it with Finally.
firstnextthenafter thatfinally
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PSPut these sentences in the birthday story in order. Write the letters, first to last.
A  They eat birthday cake.
B  Ali opens his gifts.
C  Friends come to the party.
D  Ali has a birthday party.
E  They sing a happy song.
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PSIn the birthday story, which sentence comes after Friends come to the party.? Write it.
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RWhy does the word finally go near the end of a story? Explain.
?Think about the endof the story.
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RLeo wrote: Finally Leo goes to bed. First Leo has his tea. Is the order right? Explain.
11.3

Planning a story with pictures

Year 1
Plan writing with pictures, Write a short story in order

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Video lesson: Planning a story with picturesComing soon

Before you write a story, plan it with pictures. Draw a box for each thing that happens. Then look at your boxes and write one sentence under each one.

Here is a plan for a day at the park. There is one picture for each sentence. Pictures 1 to 4 go in order, from left to right.

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A plan with four pictures. Each picture needs one sentence.

Key ideas

  • A plan has one picture for each sentence.
  • Read the pictures from left to right.
  • Write one sentence under each picture, in the same order.
  • Join the sentences together to make a story.
Worked example 11.3.1
Write the sentence for picture 1 of the park plan.
1234

Method. Look at picture 1, say what is happening, then write one sentence.

  1. Look at picture 1. The first picture shows Sam with the trees, by the path.
    Sam walks to the park.
  2. Say what is happening. The sentence says who, and what they do.
    Sam walks to the park.
  3. Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter and end with a full stop.
    Sam walks to the park.

Check. Read it aloud. It matches picture 1. ✓

Watch out. Write the sentence that matches the picture, not one about another picture.

Worked example 11.3.2
Write the sentence for picture 2. Start it with then.
1234

Method. Look at picture 2, then start the sentence with the word then.

  1. Look at picture 2. Sam is on the swing.
    Sam plays on the swing.
  2. Add the sequence word. Then shows that this is the next thing in the story.
    Then Sam plays on the swing.
  3. Write the sentence. Start with a capital letter, because it starts the sentence.
    Then Sam plays on the swing.

Check. Read the story so far: Sam walks to the park. Then Sam plays on the swing. ✓

Watch out. Then starts with a capital letter when it begins a sentence.

Worked example 11.3.3
Write the whole park story, one sentence for each picture, in order.
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Method. Join your four sentences in order. Add a sequence word to each one after the first.

  1. Start with picture 1. The story begins with the first sentence.
    Sam walks to the park.
  2. Add the next sentences. Use then, after that and finally for pictures 2, 3 and 4.
    Then Sam plays on the swing. After that Sam kicks a ball. Finally Sam goes home.
  3. Write the whole story. Read it aloud from start to end. It makes sense.
    Sam walks to the park. Then Sam plays on the swing. After that Sam kicks a ball. Finally Sam goes home.

Check. Read the story aloud. Each picture is in the story, in order. ✓

Watch out. Each sentence still needs its own full stop.

Watch out

Watch out: a plan is in order only when the pictures are in order. If a picture is out of place, the sentence under it will be out of place too. Look at each picture from left to right.

Exam tip

Grown-up tip. Ask: “What happens in this box?” Practise on paper: your child draws three or four boxes and draws one thing in each. Then they say each sentence aloud and write it under its picture.

Exercise 11C  Planning and writing from pictures

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FLook at picture 2 in the park plan. Write its sentence.
1234
2
FLook at picture 3 in the park plan. Write its sentence.
1234
3
FLook at picture 1 in the rain plan. Write its sentence.
1234
4
FLook at picture 2 in the rain plan. Write its sentence and start it with then.
1234
5
FLook at picture 3 in the rain plan. Write its sentence and start it with after that.
1234
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FLook at picture 4 in the rain plan. Write its sentence and start it with finally.
1234
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PSMia says the puddle picture should come first in her rain plan. Is she right? Explain.
1234
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PSLia has 4 pictures for her story. She wants 6 sentences in her story, with one picture for each. How many more pictures does she need?
?Count the sentences,then count thepictures.
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PSWrite the whole rain story. Use one sentence for each picture. Start each sentence with first, then, after that or finally.
1234
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PSPlan two pictures for a story about a dog. Write two sentences in order. Start the first with first and the second with then.
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RTom draws the swing before the walk to the park in his plan. Is his plan in order? Explain.
11.4

Reading my writing back to check

Year 1
Re-read writing to check it makes sense, Read writing aloud

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Video lesson: Reading my writing back to checkComing soon

Good writers read their writing back. Read it aloud, slowly. Ask yourself: Does it make sense? If a sentence sounds strange, or a word is missing, change it.

Check the start and the end of each sentence too. Does it begin with a capital letter? Does it end with a full stop? Are there spaces between the words?

?Read it back. Doesit make sense?Capital letter? Fullstop? Spaces?
Read it back and tick each box as you check it.

Key ideas

  • Read your writing out loud, slowly.
  • Ask: does it make sense?
  • Check each sentence starts with a capital letter and ends with a full stop.
  • Check that a word has not been left out, and that the words are in the right order.
Worked example 11.4.1
Read this and fix it: the dog ran to the park

Method. Check the first letter and the end of the sentence.

  1. Read the sentence out loud. Listen for the places that do not sound finished.
    the dog ran to the park
  2. Fix what is wrong. The first word needs a capital letter, and the sentence needs a full stop.
    The dog ran to the park.
  3. Write the sentence correctly.
    The dog ran to the park.

Check. Read the new sentence aloud. It starts with a capital and ends with a full stop. ✓

Watch out. Change only the letters or marks that are wrong. Check the start and the end.

Worked example 11.4.2
Which word makes sense in the gap? Sam went ___ the park. Choose: to, go or on.

Method. Read the sentence with the gap. Try each word in the gap.

  1. Read the sentence with the gap. Think about what Sam did.
    Sam went ___ the park.
  2. Try the words in the gap. Went to is the way we say where someone is going. Go and on do not make sense here.
    went to the park
  3. Write the word that makes sense.
    to

Check. Read the sentence with to in it: Sam went to the park. ✓

Watch out. Read the whole sentence with each word in the gap. Only one makes sense.

Worked example 11.4.3
Read this story. Which sentence does not make sense? Sam has a red ball. Sam kicks the ball. The ball is a bus.

Method. Read each sentence. Look for the one that does not make sense.

  1. Read sentence 1. Sam has a red ball. This makes sense.
    Sam has a red ball.
  2. Read sentence 2 and 3. Sam kicks the ball. That makes sense too. A ball cannot be a bus.
    The ball is a bus.
  3. Write the answer. The sentence that does not make sense is the one about the bus.
    The ball is a bus.

Check. Read the story without the last sentence. It makes sense. ✓

Watch out. A sentence can have correct words and still not make sense.

Watch out

Watch out: a full stop or a capital letter can be missing and you may not notice when you read it in your head. Reading it aloud helps you hear where the sentence should stop, and where a word is missing.

Exam tip

Grown-up tip. Read your child’s writing back in a sensible voice, and ask: “Does that make sense?” Let your child find the mistake first. Practise on paper: write a short sentence with one mistake, and ask your child to find and fix it.

Exercise 11D  Reading back and fixing mistakes

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FRead this: the cat sat on the mat. Write it correctly.
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FRead this: Leo has a big dog. Add the full stop.
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FRead this: Mia ___ a red bag. Which word makes sense? Write it.
4
FChoose the word that makes sense: The cat ___ on the mat. Write sat, sun or sock.
5
FRead this: Ben can run fast. Does it make sense? Write Yes or No.
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FRead this: I like to play in the sun. Write it with a full stop.
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PSTom wrote Sam went ___ the park. Choose the word that makes sense: to, go or on.
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PSMia wrote: The dog ran fast. The bus is a cat. Which sentence does not make sense?
9
PSRead this: leo has a red hat. Mia says the first word should be small. Is she right? Explain.
10
PSElla reads her sentence aloud: we went to the shop. What two things should she check?
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RExplain how reading your writing aloud helps you find mistakes.
?Read it aloud andlisten.
11.5

Labels, lists and captions

Year 1
Write labels, lists and captions

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Video lesson: Labels, lists and captionsComing soon

Some writing is short. A label names one thing in a picture, in one or two words. A list puts several things one under another, one on each line. A caption is a whole sentence that tells us about a picture.

Look at these things for drawing and writing. Each one could have a label.

Four things for drawing and writing. Write a label for each one.

Key ideas

  • A label is one or two words that name one thing.
  • A list has one thing on each line.
  • A caption is a sentence, with a capital letter and a full stop.
  • A caption tells us about the picture.
Worked example 11.5.1
Write a label for the thing with a point. It is used for writing.

Method. Find the thing with a point, then write its name as a label.

  1. Look at the picture. Find the thing with a point at one end.
    the thing with a point
  2. Say its name. Say the name of the thing, in one word.
    pencil
  3. Write the label.
    pencil

Check. Check the spelling: p-e-n-c-i-l. ✓

Watch out. A label is one word here, not a sentence.

Worked example 11.5.2
Write this list, one thing on each line: a ball, a book, a bus

Key words. A list is things written one under another.

Method. Write each thing on its own line, one under the other.

  1. Look at the picture. Find each thing in the picture.
    ball, book, bus
  2. Write one thing on each line. Each thing gets its own line, so it is easy to read.
    ball
    book
    bus
  3. Check the list. Count the things in the list and in the picture.
    3 things

Check. Check that each thing in the list is in the picture. ✓

Watch out. Do not write the things in one long line. A list has one thing on each line.

Worked example 11.5.3
Which is a caption for the picture of the fish? A: The fish is orange. B: fish

Method. A caption is a sentence that tells us about the picture.

  1. Look at the picture. The picture shows a fish.
    a fish
  2. Read the two captions. A caption must be a whole sentence about the fish. A is a sentence. B is one word.
    A: The fish is orange.   B: fish
  3. Choose the caption.
    A: The fish is orange.

Check. Read A out loud. It tells us about the picture. ✓

Watch out. A caption is a whole sentence. One word is a label, not a caption.

Watch out

Watch out: a list is not one long line. Put each thing on its own line. A caption is a whole sentence, so it needs a capital letter and a full stop. A label does not need a full stop.

Exam tip

Grown-up tip. Walk around the house with your child, and ask them to label three things with one word each. Practise on paper: make a list of three toys, one on each line. Then write one caption about your child’s favourite toy.

Exercise 11E  Labels, lists and captions

1
FLook at the picture. Write a label for each thing, in one or two words.
(a)The thing with a point, for writing
(b)The thing with straight lines, for measuring
(c)The thing that rubs out
(d)The thing that colours
2
FLook at the animals. Write a list of them, one on each line: cat, dog and fish.
3
FWrite these three things as a list, one on each line: ball, book, bus
4
FWhich is the caption for the picture of the cat? A: The cat is orange. B: Cat orange
5
FLook at the sun. Write a caption for it. Use a whole sentence.
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PSMia wrote this list on one line: ball book bus. How should she fix it?
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FWhich is a label and which is a caption? A: book B: The book is blue.
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FLook at the picture of the fish. Write its label in one word.
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FLook at the dog. Write a caption for it, starting with The.
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PSAli wants to label the book and the ball. Write one label for each.
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RWhy is a caption a sentence, but a label is only a word or two? Explain.
?Think about one nameand one sentence.
11.6

Writing sentences from dictation

Year 1
Write simple dictation sentences using taught sounds and tricky words, Choose the letters for each sound

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Dictation means a grown-up reads a sentence aloud, and you write it down. Say each word slowly. Then think about the sounds in it. Use the letters you have learned for each sound. Sounds such as sh in ship need two letters. Tricky words, such as the, said and I, are written the way you learned them.

Look at how cat is written. Start the pencil at the top of each letter, and follow the arrow to the end.

cat
Write c, a and t. The green dot shows where to start. The red dot shows where to stop.

Key ideas

  • Say each word slowly, one sound at a time.
  • Choose a letter, or two letters, for each sound.
  • Tricky words are written the way you learned them.
  • Start with a capital letter and end with a full stop.
Worked example 11.6.1
Grown-up: read this sentence aloud. Your child writes it on paper, then you check it together.
The cat sat.

Method. Say the sentence slowly, then write each word.

  1. Say each word. Listen to each sound in each word.
    The · cat · sat
  2. Write the letters. The is a tricky word. Cat uses c, a and t. Sat uses s, a and t.
    The, c-a-t, s-a-t
  3. Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter and end with a full stop.
    The cat sat.

Check. Read it back. It makes sense, with a capital letter and a full stop. ✓

Watch out. Write the tricky word the the way you learned it, not as it sounds.

Worked example 11.6.2
Grown-up: read this sentence aloud. Your child writes it on paper, then you check it together.
Sam has a red bag.

Key words. A tricky word does not follow the usual sound, so it is learned by sight.

Method. Say each word slowly, one sound at a time. Write the letters for each sound, then the whole sentence.

  1. Say each word slowly. Hear each sound, then choose the letter or letters for it.
    Sam · has · a · red · bag
  2. Write the letters for each word. Some sounds need two letters, such as sh in ship. Tricky words are written as learned.
    Sam: s - a - m
    has: tricky word, write it as you learned it
    a: tricky word, write it as you learned it
    red: r - e - d
    bag: b - a - g
  3. Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave spaces, and end with a full stop.
    Sam has a red bag.

Check. Read your sentence to the grown-up and check each word against the answer. ✓

Watch out. Check the tricky words first. Then check the capital letter at the start and the full stop at the end.

Worked example 11.6.3
Grown-up: read this sentence aloud. Your child writes it on paper, then you check it together.
I see the ship.

Key words. A tricky word does not follow the usual sound, so it is learned by sight.

Method. Say each word slowly, one sound at a time. Write the letters for each sound, then the whole sentence.

  1. Say each word slowly. Hear each sound, then choose the letter or letters for it.
    I · see · the · ship
  2. Write the letters for each word. Some sounds need two letters, such as sh in ship. Tricky words are written as learned.
    I: tricky word, write it as you learned it
    see: s - ee
    the: tricky word, write it as you learned it
    ship: sh - i - p
  3. Write the whole sentence. Start with a capital letter, leave spaces, and end with a full stop.
    I see the ship.

Check. Read your sentence to the grown-up and check each word against the answer. ✓

Watch out. Check the tricky words first. Then check the capital letter at the start and the full stop at the end.

Watch out

Watch out: write the tricky words the way you learned them. said sounds like sed, but it is spelled s-a-i-d. Also remember the capital letter for I, and the full stop at the end.

Exam tip

Grown-up tip. Read the sentence aloud, slowly, from the page. Cover the sentence, and let your child write it on paper. Then uncover it and check together, word by word. Ask: “What sound is at the start of ship?” Let your child name the letters. Practise on paper: write c-a-t, s-a-t and m-a-t, one under the other, and then join them up.

Exercise 11F  Dictation with sounds and tricky words

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FGrown-up: read this sentence aloud. Your child writes it on paper, then you check it together.
The dog is in the sun.
2
FGrown-up: read this sentence aloud. Your child writes it on paper, then you check it together.
Ben can hop.
3
FGrown-up: read this sentence aloud. Your child writes it on paper, then you check it together.
She has a cup.
4
FGrown-up: read this sentence aloud. Your child writes it on paper, then you check it together.
We see the rain.
5
PSGrown-up: read this sentence aloud. Your child writes it on paper, then you check it together.
Tom and Mum go to the shop.
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PSGrown-up: read this sentence aloud. Your child writes it on paper, then you check it together.
Dad put the bag on the bed.
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FWrite the word for these letters, in order: f - r - o - g
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FWrite the word for these sounds, in order: sh - i - p
9
PSFill the gap with a tricky word: Sam ___ “Hello.”
Hello!
10
PSGrown-up: read this sentence aloud. Your child writes it on paper, then you check it together.
I see a bee in the tree.
11
RMia wrote ben can hop. What two things must she fix?

Chapter summary

SkillMethod
Say it firstSay the sentence out loud, touch a finger for each word, then write it.
Order the storyUse first, next, then, after that and finally, in the order things happen.
Plan with picturesDraw one picture for each sentence, in order. Write one sentence under each picture.
Read it backRead it aloud. Check it makes sense, and check the capital letters, full stops and spaces.
Labels, lists and captionsA label is one or two words. A list has one thing on each line. A caption is a sentence.
DictationSay each word slowly. Choose a letter, or two letters, for each sound. Write tricky words as learned.

Can you…?

  • I can say a sentence out loud before I write it
  • I can put sentences in order to tell a story
  • I can use first, next, then, after that and finally
  • I can plan a short story with pictures
  • I can read my writing back and check that it makes sense
  • I can write a label, a list and a caption
  • I can write a short sentence from dictation, using the sounds and tricky words I know

Key terms

recount
a story that tells what happened, in the order it happened
sequence word
a word that shows the order of events, such as first, next, then, after that and finally
plan
a set of pictures or notes that shows what you will write, before you write it
label
one or two words that name a thing in a picture
list
several things written one under another, one on each line
caption
a whole sentence that tells us about a picture
dictation
a sentence that a grown-up reads aloud for you to write down
tricky word
a word that does not follow the usual sounds, so it is learned by sight
read back
to read your own writing again, to check it

Exercise 11Z  Check-up

1
How many words are in We went to the park.?
2
Which sequence word tells us the last thing in a story? Write it: first, next, then or finally.
3
Put these sentences in the right order. Write the letters, first to last.
A  They eat birthday cake.
B  Ali has a birthday party.
C  Ali opens his gifts.
4
Write this correctly: the cat sat
5
Which word is missing? Sam ___ to the park.
6
Write a label for the thing that rubs out pencil marks.
7
Which is a caption for the picture of the sun? A: The sun is yellow. B: sun yellow
8
Grown-up: read this sentence aloud. Your child writes it on paper, then you check it together.
Pat and Sam sit on a mat.
?Say each wordslowly.
9
Tom plans a story with three pictures: swim, get dry, eat lunch. Write three sentences in order, starting with First, Then and Finally.
10
Explain why re-reading your writing helps. Give one reason.
?Read it again,slowly.

Total 14 marks. Allow about 14 minutes.

Exercise 11X  End-of-chapter quiz

1
FHow many words are in The big cat sat down.?[1 mark]
2
FWhich group of words is a sentence? A: In the park B: Sam plays.[1 mark]
3
FWhich sentence tells what happens first? A: Finally Sam goes home. B: First Sam walks to the park.[1 mark]
4
FWrite the label for the thing you use to draw straight lines.[1 mark]
5
FWhich is a caption for the picture of the book? A: The book is blue. B: book[1 mark]
6
FWrite this correctly: ben went to the shop[2 marks]
7
PSWrite the first two sentences of the rain story. Start them with first and then.[2 marks]
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8
FGrown-up: read this sentence aloud. Your child writes it on paper, then you check it together.
The dog ran to the van.
[2 marks]
9
FWhich word is missing? Tom ___ a bat.[1 mark]
?Read the wholesentence.
10
RLia says, “I do not need to read my writing again.” Explain why she should.[2 marks]
?Read it again, andthink.

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